天气— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Try to make your answer more natural and concise. Avoid redundancy by combining related information and use linking words to improve coherence. Also, clarify geographical details correctly to avoid confusion.

範例: I live in Gujarat, a district in Punjab province. The weather is moderate in winter, but summers are very hot, often reaching 45 to 47 degrees Celsius.

建議: Your answer is clear but can be improved by using linking words and avoiding repetition. Try to express your reasons more smoothly and naturally.

範例: I prefer cold weather because it's easier to manage work during winters, whereas the harsh summer heat makes it difficult to go outside.

建議: Improve sentence structure and use linking words to make your answer more coherent. Also, avoid unnecessary fillers and be more specific with your vocabulary.

範例: I definitely prefer dry weather because wet conditions make traveling difficult, especially when using local transport, as you need to carry an umbrella, raincoat, and suitable shoes.

建議: Work on sentence clarity and grammar. Use linking words to connect ideas and avoid redundancy. Also, try to express your routine more naturally.

範例: Yes, I check the weather forecast daily, usually the night before, because I have to leave early for work and need to prepare for the weather conditions.

建議: Focus on improving grammar and sentence structure. Use specific examples and linking words to make your answer clearer and more logical.

範例: Climate change has severely affected many countries, including my own. In the northern areas, frequent flooding has been noticeable during spring and between August and October over the past two to three years.

建議: Make your answer more fluent by correcting grammar and avoiding repetition. Use linking words to connect your ideas smoothly.

範例: Yes, I would like to visit cities with different climates because it would give me valuable experience of various weather conditions, which I believe is important.

× It's a district of province Punjab.

✓ It's a district of the province Punjab.

The word 'province' is singular and requires the definite article 'the' before it to specify which province is being referred to. In English, singular countable nouns usually need an article.

× because it touches almost 45 or 47 Celsius.

✓ because it reaches almost 45 or 47 degrees Celsius.

The verb 'touches' is less appropriate here; 'reaches' is better for temperature. Also, 'Celsius' should be preceded by 'degrees' when referring to temperature values.

× because in winters it is easy to manage your work and it is quite difficult to manage and go outside of the home in summer

✓ because in winter it is easy to manage your work and it is quite difficult to manage and go outside of the home in summer

The word 'winter' is generally used in singular form when referring to the season in general. Using 'winters' is less common and considered plural, which is incorrect here.

× where I live the weather is quite harsh in summers.

✓ where I live the weather is quite harsh in summer.

Similar to the previous correction, 'summer' is used in singular form when referring to the season generally, not 'summers'.

× I definitely prefer dry weather because in wet you can not travel easily to anywhere else, especially if you have to use a local transport

✓ I definitely prefer dry weather because in wet weather you cannot travel easily anywhere else, especially if you have to use local transport

The phrase 'in wet' is incomplete; it should be 'in wet weather'. Also, 'a local transport' is incorrect because 'transport' is uncountable here, so no article is needed. 'Cannot' is one word.

× you always have to carry like umbrella or suit, proper suit and also a proper shoes.

✓ you always have to carry an umbrella or a proper suit and also proper shoes.

The word 'like' is unnecessary here. 'Umbrella' and 'suit' need articles 'an' and 'a' respectively. 'Shoes' is plural, so 'a' should not be used before it. 'Proper' is an adjective modifying 'shoes'.

× I really check weather forecast on daily basis because I have to go to job on early in the morning.

✓ I really check the weather forecast on a daily basis because I have to go to work early in the morning.

The phrase 'on daily basis' should be 'on a daily basis'. 'Go to job' is incorrect; the correct phrase is 'go to work'. 'On early in the morning' is incorrect; it should be 'early in the morning' without 'on'.

× So this is very important to check whether before the morning at late night so I can prepare myself for the coming weather because it is not always good.

✓ So it is very important to check the weather before the morning late at night so I can prepare myself for the coming weather because it is not always good.

The word 'whether' is incorrect here; it should be 'weather'. The phrase 'before the morning at late night' is awkward; 'before the morning late at night' is better. Also, 'this is' changed to 'it is' for clarity.

× because from two to three years it is very noticeable that in every spring season or from the month to October to August, it is very flood on everywhere.

✓ because for the past two to three years it has been very noticeable that in every spring season or from August to October, there has been a lot of flooding everywhere.

The original sentence has tense and word order issues. 'From two to three years' should be 'for the past two to three years'. 'It is very noticeable' should be 'it has been very noticeable' to indicate ongoing past to present. 'From the month to October to August' is incorrect order; it should be 'from August to October'. 'It is very flood on everywhere' is incorrect; correct phrase is 'there has been a lot of flooding everywhere'.

× Yes, I will always prefer to visit such cities which have different climate from the area where I live because it is it can gives me a little more experience of different weathers and I think it is something that we must.

✓ Yes, I will always prefer to visit such cities which have a different climate from the area where I live because it can give me a little more experience of different weathers and I think it is something that we must do.

'Different climate' needs the article 'a' before 'different climate'. 'It can gives' is incorrect; 'gives' should be 'give' after modal 'can'. 'Weathers' is plural but usually 'weather' is uncountable; however, 'different weathers' can be acceptable in context but better to use 'different types of weather'. The sentence ends abruptly; 'we must' should be 'we must do' to complete the thought.