天气— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Try to make your answer more natural and clear by using simpler and more accurate expressions. Avoid repeating similar ideas and focus on directly answering the question with specific details about the weather.

範例: The weather where I live is mostly hot and sunny, especially during the summer. Many people enjoy this season because it is good for outdoor activities and daily life.

建議: Focus on giving a clear opinion with supporting reasons. Use linking words to connect your ideas and avoid redundancy. Try to use more precise vocabulary and correct grammar.

範例: I prefer hot weather because it allows me to work comfortably and fits well with my daily routine. Although winter is nice, it is not as common or suitable for most people here.

建議: Make your answer clearer by focusing on one main idea and explaining it with specific reasons. Avoid confusing phrases and try to use correct vocabulary and grammar.

範例: I prefer dry weather because it helps our crops grow better and makes it easier to do daily work. Wet weather can sometimes cause problems for farming and travel.

建議: Your answer is good but can be improved by using more natural expressions and linking words. Try to be more concise and avoid repeating similar ideas.

範例: Yes, I often check the weather forecast because it helps me plan my activities. For example, if it will rain, I can take an umbrella, or if it will be hot, I can dress lightly.

建議: Try to organize your answer with clear points and use correct vocabulary. Avoid repeating words and explain your ideas with specific examples or effects.

範例: Climate change has caused global warming, which is a serious problem worldwide. It leads to extreme weather, rising sea levels, and harm to plants and animals.

建議: Make your answer more fluent by using linking words and clearer expressions. Avoid repeating similar words and give specific reasons why you want to visit those places.

範例: Yes, I would like to visit cities with different climates because it would be interesting to experience new weather. It can also help me learn more about how climate affects people's lives.

× I live in Bangladesh, so all of my country's peoples are suitable to summer because we can suit our daily lives with summer season.

✓ I live in Bangladesh, so all of my country's people are suited to summer because we can adapt our daily lives to the summer season.

The word 'peoples' is incorrect here; 'people' is the correct plural form when referring to the population of a country. Also, 'suitable to summer' is incorrect; 'suited to summer' or 'adapted to summer' is better. 'Suit our daily lives with summer season' is awkward; 'adapt our daily lives to the summer season' is clearer.

× I prefer hot weather 'cause I think we can do our work easily and we can suit our daily life with the hot season.

✓ I prefer hot weather because I think we can do our work easily and adapt our daily life to the hot season.

The phrase 'suit our daily life with the hot season' is incorrect; the verb 'suit' is not used this way. Instead, 'adapt our daily life to the hot season' is appropriate. Also, 'cause' should be expanded to 'because' for formal correctness.

× Winter season is also beneficial also, I think suitable but not much because our people.

✓ The winter season is also beneficial; I think it is suitable but not much for our people.

Missing article 'The' before 'winter season'. The sentence is incomplete and unclear; adding 'it is' clarifies the subject. 'Our people' is correct here but the sentence needs restructuring for clarity.

× I prefer dry weather 'cause I think it is suitable for for contribute our crops or we can do our works daily works goodly and also I also prefer cold weather but not much.

✓ I prefer dry weather because I think it is suitable for contributing to our crops, and we can do our daily work well. I also prefer cold weather but not much.

The phrase 'suitable for for contribute our crops' is incorrect; it should be 'suitable for contributing to our crops'. 'Do our works daily works goodly' is incorrect; 'do our daily work well' is correct. 'Goodly' is not a proper adverb here.

× I think hot water is beneficial for us.

✓ I think hot weather is beneficial for us.

The student likely meant 'hot weather' instead of 'hot water'. This is a pronoun/word choice error.

× Yes, very often I am checking the weather forecast because I think it's very much informative for all of us.

✓ Yes, I very often check the weather forecast because I think it's very informative for all of us.

The present continuous 'I am checking' is not appropriate here for habitual action; simple present 'I check' is correct. Also, 'very much informative' is awkward; 'very informative' is better.

× It is very much important source I think to know about weather so that we can do for our future preparations.

✓ I think it is a very important source to know about the weather so that we can prepare for the future.

Missing article 'a' before 'very important source'. 'Do for our future preparations' is incorrect; 'prepare for the future' is correct. Also, 'about weather' should be 'about the weather'.

× If we see this, some days are rainy days, so we have to be prepared for rainy days or if we see that it will be hot for some days, then we can prepare ourselves for.

✓ If we see that some days will be rainy, we have to be prepared for rainy days; or if we see that it will be hot for some days, then we can prepare ourselves accordingly.

The sentence is awkward and incomplete at the end. 'If we see this' is vague; 'If we see that some days will be rainy' is clearer. Ending with 'prepare ourselves for' is incomplete; it needs an object or 'accordingly'.

× Yes, there are many effects on climate change this year.

✓ Yes, there are many effects of climate change this year.

The preposition 'on' is incorrect here; 'effects of climate change' is the correct collocation.

× You know, it is very much, very much big problem in whole world.

✓ You know, it is a very big problem in the whole world.

'Very much, very much big problem' is incorrect; 'a very big problem' is correct. Also, missing article 'a' before 'very big problem' and 'in whole world' should be 'in the whole world'.

× I think, you know, we have to face many problems because of the global warming or greenhouse gases, many kinds of bad gashes like nicotine or any other many.

✓ I think, you know, we have to face many problems because of global warming and greenhouse gases, many kinds of harmful gases like methane and others.

'Bad gashes like nicotine' is incorrect; likely meant 'harmful gases like methane'. 'Nicotine' is not a gas. Also, 'any other many' is incorrect; 'and others' is better.

× The different climates have 'cause I think we can feel the different weathers or climates.

✓ Different climates have their own characteristics because I think we can feel the different weathers or climates.

The sentence is incomplete and unclear. 'Have 'cause' is incorrect; 'have their own characteristics because' is clearer.

× We can acquire knowledge about the climate changes and it also I think beneficial for all of us because we can know many very much informative things from the new cities or new areas.

✓ We can acquire knowledge about climate change, and I think it is also beneficial for all of us because we can learn many informative things from new cities or new areas.

'Climate changes' should be 'climate change' (uncountable). 'It also I think beneficial' is incorrect; 'I think it is also beneficial' is correct. 'Know many very much informative things' is awkward; 'learn many informative things' is better.