天气— Part 1 評分報告

建議: 回答时语言不够流畅，句子结构混乱，表达重复且不完整。建议简化句子，避免重复，注意语法和连贯性。

範例: I live in Guangzhou, which is near the Tropic of Cancer. The weather here is warm and humid all year round. In summer, it is very muggy and we often have heavy rainstorms. However, winters are milder and less rainy.

建議: 回答不完整且语法错误较多，表达不清晰。建议完整回答问题，使用正确的时态和句子结构，并补充细节。

範例: It depends on the situation. When I am in northern China, I like cold weather in winter because I enjoy playing in the snow and building snowmen. But in southern China, I prefer warmer weather.

建議: 回答中有多处语法错误和表达不清，且句子未完成。建议练习正确表达习惯用语，完整回答问题，并提供具体原因。

範例: I definitely prefer dry weather. Although I was born and raised in Guangzhou, which is very humid, I have gradually gotten used to it. However, I still find dry weather more comfortable.

建議: 回答表达不够准确，语法和用词有误。建议使用正确的时态和词汇，表达更自然流畅，并补充具体细节。

範例: I usually check the weather forecast twice a day. Sometimes the forecast is not very accurate, so I don't always trust it. But when I am in my hometown Guangzhou, where heavy rainstorms are common, I pay close attention to it.

建議: 回答内容不够连贯，语法错误较多，表达不清晰。建议理清思路，使用准确词汇，完整表达观点。

範例: I think climate change is caused by increased emissions from motor vehicles and factories. Burning fossil fuels like oil and gas pollutes the air and releases heat, which contributes to global warming.

建議: 回答较为完整，但表达稍显重复。建议使用更多连接词，使表达更流畅自然。

範例: Yes, I would love to visit cities with different climates. For example, I studied at a university in Wuhan, which has a dry summer, quite different from the humid weather in Guangzhou. Experiencing such differences is very interesting.

× As you know, I live in Guangzhou where it's located near the Tropic of Cancer.

✓ As you know, I live in Guangzhou, which is located near the Tropic of Cancer.

这里应该用关系代词"which"引导定语从句，而不是用"where"。"Where"通常指地点，但在此句中应指代广州的位置，使用"which"更合适。

× So the weather, like the weather in here is all year warm and humid, especially in the summertime, it's really muggy and suffer from lots of rainstorm, huge rainstorm and but in winter.

✓ So the weather, like the weather here, is warm and humid all year round, especially in the summertime. It's really muggy and suffers from lots of huge rainstorms, but in winter...

"in here"应改为"here"，"suffer"主语是天气，应使用第三人称单数形式"suffers"，"rainstorm"应使用复数形式"rainstorms"，句子结构需要调整以更清晰表达。

× Actually it depend on different condition.

✓ Actually, it depends on different conditions.

主语"it"是第三人称单数，谓语动词应加-s，变为"depends"。"condition"应使用复数形式"conditions"。

× If I in the northern of China the weather is really cold in winter and might snowy, then I really like it because I want to play the snow build the snowman.

✓ If I am in the north of China, the weather is really cold in winter and might be snowy. Then I really like it because I want to play in the snow and build a snowman.

缺少动词"am"，"northern"应改为名词形式"north"，"might snowy"应改为"might be snowy"，"play the snow"应为"play in the snow"，"build the snowman"应为"build a snowman"。

× But when I in southern China the.

✓ But when I am in southern China...

缺少动词"am"，句子不完整，应补充完整。

× Definitely dry weather, but actually I'm get using, I'm getting used to the red feather.

✓ Definitely dry weather, but actually I'm getting used to the red weather.

"I'm get using"错误，应为"I'm getting used to"。"red feather"应为"red weather"，推测为口误。

× As you know, I brought in I was born in Guangzhou.

✓ As you know, I was born in Guangzhou.

"I brought in"无意义，应删除。

× So the humid weather here I just leaving for like 20 years so I I can under it, but I think.

✓ So the humid weather here, I have been living here for like 20 years, so I can endure it, but I think...

"just leaving"应为"have been living"表示持续时间，"can under it"应为"can endure it"。

× Maybe twice a day. To be honest, sometimes I've seen the weather forecast is not quite accuracy, so I sometimes I don't believe it.

✓ Maybe twice a day. To be honest, sometimes I've seen the weather forecast is not quite accurate, so sometimes I don't believe it.

"accuracy"是名词，应改为形容词"accurate"修饰"weather forecast"。

× But when I back to my hometown Guangzhou, it's often suffer from heavy rainstorm, so I have to watch it out.

✓ But when I go back to my hometown Guangzhou, it often suffers from heavy rainstorms, so I have to watch out for it.

缺少动词"go"，"suffer"应为第三人称单数"suffers"，"rainstorm"应为复数"rainstorms"，"watch it out"应为"watch out for it"。

× Maybe it's due to the more and more emission of the gas gas from the motor vehicle.

✓ Maybe it's due to the increasing emissions of gas from motor vehicles.

"more and more emission"应改为"increasing emissions"，"gas gas"重复，应删去一个，"motor vehicle"应为复数"motor vehicles"。

× It's all burning out the gas of fuel like oil and gas to pollute the air and sometimes the factory is provide more heat.

✓ They are all burning fuel like oil and gas, which pollutes the air, and sometimes factories provide more heat.

"It's all burning out the gas of fuel"表达不清，应改为"They are all burning fuel"，"factory is provide"应为"factories provide"。

× Sure, it definitely will be really fun, especially with the weather, with the city in different weather.

✓ Sure, it will definitely be really fun, especially experiencing cities with different weather.

"with the city in different weather"表达不自然，应改为"experiencing cities with different weather"。

× For example, I went to the university in the middle of China in Wuhan city and it is really dry in the summer, different from the humid weather in Guangzhou.

✓ For example, I went to university in central China, in Wuhan city, and it is really dry in the summer, different from the humid weather in Guangzhou.

"went to the university"通常说"went to university"，"middle of China"改为"central China"更自然。