天气— Part 1 評分報告

建議: 답변이 자연스럽지 않고 문법적으로 부정확합니다. 현재 날씨를 묘사할 때는 간결하고 명확한 문장을 사용해야 합니다. 예를 들어, 'It has been sunny for the past four days, so the weather is very nice.'와 같이 표현하는 것이 좋습니다.

範例: It has been sunny for the past four days, so the weather is very nice.

建議: 문법 오류와 어색한 표현이 있습니다. 비교급을 사용할 때는 'prefer cold weather to hot weather'가 맞으며, 이유를 명확하고 자연스럽게 설명하는 것이 중요합니다. 예를 들어, 'I prefer cold weather to hot weather because I don't like sweating a lot on hot days.'

範例: I prefer cold weather to hot weather because I don't like sweating a lot on hot days.

建議: 답변이 명확하지 않고 문법적으로 부정확합니다. 'prefer dry weather to wet weather'와 같이 비교 대상을 명확히 하고, 이유를 구체적으로 설명하는 것이 좋습니다. 예를 들어, 'I prefer dry weather to wet weather because I feel more comfortable and confident when it's dry.'

範例: I prefer dry weather to wet weather because I feel more comfortable and confident when it's dry.

建議: 답변이 불완전하고 문법적으로 부정확합니다. 습관과 이유를 명확하게 표현해야 합니다. 예를 들어, 'No, I don't usually check the weather forecast because I go straight to my destination when I go out.'

範例: No, I don't usually check the weather forecast because I go straight to my destination when I go out.

建議: 답변이 매우 불명확하고 문법적으로 틀렸습니다. 기후 변화의 영향에 대해 구체적이고 명확하게 설명해야 합니다. 예를 들어, 'I think climate change has caused more extreme weather, like hotter summers and unpredictable temperatures.'

範例: I think climate change has caused more extreme weather, like hotter summers and unpredictable temperatures.

建議: 문법 오류와 어색한 표현이 있습니다. 방문 의사와 이유를 명확하게 표현해야 합니다. 예를 들어, 'Yes, I would like to visit cities with cold and dry climates because my city is hot and wet.'

範例: Yes, I would like to visit cities with cold and dry climates because my city is hot and wet.

× In today, the sunny days last for four days, so it's very good weather having.

✓ Today, the sunny days have lasted for four days, so the weather has been very good.

'In today' is incorrect; 'Today' should be used. 'Having' is misplaced; the correct form is 'the weather has been very good.' The adverb placement and verb tense needed correction.

× I prefer cold weather than hot weather because I don't like I get sweat when hot days.

✓ I prefer cold weather to hot weather because I don't like getting sweaty on hot days.

The correct preposition after 'prefer' is 'to,' not 'than.' Also, 'I don't like I get sweat' is incorrect; it should be 'I don't like getting sweaty.'

× I prefer cold weather than hot weather because I don't like I get sweat when hot days.

✓ I prefer cold weather to hot weather because I don't like getting sweaty on hot days.

The phrase 'I don't like I get sweat' is grammatically incorrect; it should be 'I don't like getting sweaty.' This corrects the pronoun and verb form usage.

× I prefer dry weather to the weather because, as I said, the dry weather and cold weather bears mean more confident.

✓ I prefer dry weather because, as I said, dry and cold weather makes me feel more confident.

The phrase 'to the weather' is unnecessary and incorrect here. Also, 'bears mean more confident' is incorrect; it should be 'makes me feel more confident.'

× But weather gives sweat T-shirts, so I like dry weather.

✓ But weather makes T-shirts sweaty, so I like dry weather.

'Gives sweat T-shirts' is incorrect; the correct expression is 'makes T-shirts sweaty.' This corrects the pronoun and verb usage.

× No, I'm not, because when I go out. I should go right through it to destination so I don't see the weather forecast.

✓ No, I'm not, because when I go out, I have to go straight to my destination, so I don't check the weather forecast.

The original sentence is fragmented and unclear. 'I should go right through it to destination' is incorrect; it should be 'I have to go straight to my destination.' Also, 'I don't see the weather forecast' is better as 'I don't check the weather forecast.'

× I think the harder days is constructive. The temperature is loose and.

✓ I think the hotter days are problematic. The temperature is unstable.

'Harder days is constructive' is incorrect; likely intended 'hotter days are problematic.' 'Temperature is loose' is incorrect; 'unstable' is more appropriate. Present tense and word choice needed correction.

× Yes I would because I like cold and dry weather but my city has a wet and hot weather so I won't go any cities having colds.

✓ Yes, I would because I like cold and dry weather, but my city has wet and hot weather, so I won't go to any cities that are cold.

'A wet and hot weather' is incorrect; 'wet and hot weather' is correct without 'a.' 'I won't go any cities having colds' is incorrect; it should be 'I won't go to any cities that are cold.' Pronoun and preposition usage needed correction.