天气— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Your answer is generally clear but can be improved by avoiding redundancy and using linking words for better coherence. Try to combine ideas smoothly and correct minor grammatical errors, such as 'it often clears up quickly'.

範例: The weather where I live is usually sunny, but it varies with the seasons. For instance, during the rainy season, it rains lightly and often clears up quickly, making way for sunshine again.

建議: Your answer addresses the question but has some grammatical errors and repetition. Use linking words to connect your ideas and be more specific about why you prefer cold weather.

範例: I prefer cold weather because hot weather makes me feel unwell; for example, on sunny days, my hands and face get painful. Therefore, living in a cold area helps me feel comfortable and relaxed.

建議: Your answer is good but can be improved by removing repeated words and using linking words to connect your ideas smoothly. Also, try to use more precise vocabulary.

範例: I prefer wet weather because I enjoy seeing the trees bloom. For example, after it rains, the sky clears up, and the plants look fresh and vibrant, which makes me feel very happy.

建議: Your answer is understandable but informal and slightly repetitive. Try to use more formal language and link your ideas clearly. Also, avoid filler words like 'like'.

範例: Unfortunately, I do not usually check the weather forecast. Instead, I simply look outside my window to see if it is cold, hot, or rainy before deciding to go out.

建議: Your answer has good content but needs clearer structure and grammar correction. Use linking words to connect your points and be more specific in your examples.

範例: I believe climate change has caused several effects recently. For example, in my hometown, it usually does not rain much, but this year there was heavy rainfall. Also, the summer season has become much hotter than before.

建議: Your answer is relevant but contains some repetition and minor grammatical errors. Use linking words to improve flow and avoid repeating words like 'mixed'.

範例: Yes, if I had the chance to move to another city, I would choose Bangalore because it often has beautiful clouds and clear skies. The weather there is moderate—not too hot or too cold—which makes it very pleasant to experience.

× Actually the weather where I live is usually sunny and but it also depends on the season.

✓ Actually the weather where I live is usually sunny, but it also depends on the season.

The conjunctions 'and' and 'but' are incorrectly used together here. Only one conjunction is needed to connect the clauses. Using both 'and but' is redundant and grammatically incorrect. The correct conjunction to show contrast is 'but'. Use a comma before 'but' to separate the clauses properly.

× It often clear up quickly and again it's sunny.

✓ It often clears up quickly and again it's sunny.

The verb 'clear' needs to agree with the singular subject 'it' and be in the third person singular present tense form 'clears'. The original sentence uses the base form 'clear' which is incorrect here.

× in like a sunny day my hands and my face gets pans and I prefer living in cold area because I feel good and relaxed.

✓ On a sunny day, my hands and my face get pains and I prefer living in a cold area because I feel good and relaxed.

The subject 'my hands and my face' is plural, so the verb should be 'get' instead of 'gets'. Also, 'pans' is a typo and should be 'pains'. Additionally, 'in like a sunny day' is awkward; 'On a sunny day' is the correct prepositional phrase. 'Cold area' needs an article 'a' before it.

× I prefer a wet weather because I like like the trees are blooming.

✓ I prefer wet weather because I like the trees blooming.

The word 'weather' is an uncountable noun and does not take the indefinite article 'a'. Also, 'like like' is a repetition error. The phrase 'the trees are blooming' can be simplified to 'the trees blooming' for smoother expression.

× Everything is such amazing.

✓ Everything is so amazing.

The phrase 'such amazing' is incorrect because 'amazing' is an adjective and 'such' is used before nouns or noun phrases. The correct adverb to modify the adjective 'amazing' is 'so'.

× I just check it from my window if it's a cold or hot or it's rainy and then I think to go out.

✓ I just check it from my window to see if it's cold or hot or rainy, and then I decide whether to go out.

The phrase 'if it's a cold or hot or it's rainy' is awkward and incorrect. 'Cold' and 'hot' are adjectives and do not need 'a'. Also, 'think to go out' is incorrect; the correct expression is 'decide whether to go out'. The sentence is restructured for clarity and correct preposition use.

× I believe that there are a few effects of climate change in recent years.

✓ I believe that there have been a few effects of climate change in recent years.

The phrase 'in recent years' refers to a period up to the present, so the present perfect tense 'have been' is appropriate to indicate actions or effects continuing up to now, rather than simple present 'are'.

× in my hometown it doesn't usually rains, but this time it was very heavy rainfall, very like it in summer season was very hot.

✓ In my hometown, it doesn't usually rain, but this time there was very heavy rainfall; also, the summer season was very hot.

The verb 'doesn't' should be followed by the base form 'rain' not 'rains'. 'Very like it in summer season was very hot' is ungrammatical and unclear; it is corrected to 'also, the summer season was very hot' for clarity and correct tense.

× Yes, if I would get a chance to shift from my hometown to other city, I would definitely go to Bangalore city because it has always very beautiful clouds and it has clear sky and a cold and mixed mixed weather.

✓ Yes, if I got a chance to move from my hometown to another city, I would definitely go to Bangalore because it always has very beautiful clouds, a clear sky, and cold, mixed weather.

In conditional sentences of the second type, 'if' clause should use simple past tense ('if I got'), not 'would get'. 'Shift' is less natural here than 'move'. 'Other city' should be 'another city'. 'Has always very beautiful clouds' is incorrect word order; 'always has very beautiful clouds' is correct. 'Clear sky' needs an article 'a'. 'Mixed mixed' is a repetition error.

× It is not that much hot or that much cold.

✓ It is not that hot or that cold.

The phrase 'that much hot' is incorrect; 'much' is not used before adjectives in this way. The correct expression is 'that hot' or 'that cold' without 'much'.