天气— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Your answer is somewhat unclear and contains grammatical errors. Try to directly answer the question with a clear topic sentence, then add specific supporting details using linking words. Avoid vague phrases like 'They are best' without clear reference. Also, keep your answer concise and natural.

範例: The weather where I live is tropical, with a long monsoon season. This climate is ideal for growing a variety of crops, which benefits many local farmers.

建議: Your answer is unclear and does not directly address the question. Avoid asking questions back to the examiner. Provide a clear opinion with reasons and examples. Use complete sentences and relevant vocabulary.

範例: I prefer hot weather because I enjoy outdoor activities like swimming and wearing light clothes comfortably.

建議: Your answer has some good points but contains grammatical errors and unclear phrases like 'growing deer crops.' Use linking words to connect ideas and be specific. Also, avoid redundancy and improve sentence structure.

範例: I prefer wet weather because it helps farmers grow crops and vegetables successfully. In contrast, dry weather makes agriculture more difficult.

建議: Your answer is confusing and grammatically incorrect. Answer directly with frequency and context. Use clear and natural expressions.

範例: Yes, I usually check the weather forecast every morning before going shopping or running errands in town.

建議: Your answer is unclear and contains grammatical mistakes. Focus on effects rather than causes as asked. Use linking words and specific examples to explain your ideas clearly.

範例: Climate change has caused more extreme weather events, such as floods and droughts, which negatively affect agriculture and people's lives.

建議: Your answer shows enthusiasm but is repetitive and lacks linking words. Use varied vocabulary and connect your ideas smoothly. Also, clarify your preferences with reasons.

範例: I would like to visit cities with different climates, such as snowy places to experience snow, dry areas to enjoy resorts, and rainy regions to feel the refreshing rain.

× They are best for the growing crops.

✓ It is best for growing crops.

The subject 'They' is incorrect here because 'climate' is singular. The correct pronoun is 'It'. Also, 'the growing crops' should be 'growing crops' without 'the' to generalize the statement.

× There is lots of monsoon season where many farmers grow different types of crops.

✓ There is a lot of monsoon season where many farmers grow different types of crops.

'Lots of' is plural and should be replaced with 'a lot of' when referring to uncountable nouns like 'monsoon season'. Also, 'monsoon season' is singular, so 'is' is correct.

× I absolutely prefer hot weather because ladies can wear.

✓ I absolutely prefer hot weather because ladies can wear light clothes.

The sentence is incomplete and unclear. Adding 'light clothes' clarifies what ladies can wear in hot weather, making the sentence complete and meaningful.

× How's the weather? What is cold season?

✓ What is cold weather?

The question 'What is cold season?' is awkward and unclear. It should be 'What is cold weather?' to make sense in context.

× I prefer wet climate.

✓ I prefer the wet climate.

'Climate' is a singular noun and usually requires a definite article 'the' when specifying a particular type like 'wet climate'.

× The wet climate makes me more comfortable than dry climate for farmers.

✓ The wet climate makes me more comfortable than the dry climate for farmers.

Both 'wet climate' and 'dry climate' are singular and should be preceded by the definite article 'the' for proper comparison.

× Also, wet climate is the best climate for growing deer crops and vegetables.

✓ Also, the wet climate is the best climate for growing different crops and vegetables.

'Wet climate' needs the definite article 'the'. 'Deer crops' is incorrect; it should be 'different crops' to make sense.

× Due to dry climates, they cannot agriculture their crops.

✓ Due to dry climates, farmers cannot cultivate their crops.

'Agriculture' is a noun, not a verb. The correct verb is 'cultivate'. Also, 'they' is vague; specifying 'farmers' clarifies the subject.

× Yes, I have the habit of checking the climate forecast when I have to wait for town to do shopping.

✓ Yes, I have the habit of checking the weather forecast when I have to wait in town to do shopping.

'Climate forecast' is incorrect; it should be 'weather forecast'. Also, 'wait for town' is incorrect; it should be 'wait in town'.

× The causes of weather change in recent time is that.

✓ The causes of weather change in recent times are that.

'Causes' is plural, so the verb should be 'are' not 'is'. Also, 'recent time' should be pluralized to 'recent times'.

× Many environmental degradation are happen due to different pollution and it is the main route of the major changes in climate.

✓ Much environmental degradation happens due to different pollution, and it is the main cause of major changes in climate.

'Environmental degradation' is uncountable, so 'many' should be 'much'. 'Are happen' is incorrect; it should be 'happens'. 'Route' is incorrect; 'cause' is appropriate here.

× As I love to experience new weather, I want to live in snowy place to feel snow.

✓ As I love to experience new weather, I want to live in a snowy place to feel the snow.

The noun 'place' needs the indefinite article 'a'. Also, 'feel snow' should be 'feel the snow' to specify the experience.

× I want to live in dry place to visit resorts.

✓ I want to live in a dry place to visit resorts.

The noun 'place' requires the indefinite article 'a' when singular and unspecified.

× I love to live in rain place to feel rain.

✓ I love to live in a rainy place to feel the rain.

'Rain place' is incorrect; the adjective form 'rainy' should be used. Also, 'place' needs the article 'a', and 'feel rain' should be 'feel the rain'.