天气— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Try to make your answer more coherent and avoid repetition. Use linking words to connect ideas and keep your sentences clear and concise. Also, correct grammatical errors and avoid incomplete sentences.

範例: The weather where I live is usually hot and humid. It starts to rain lightly in early August, and the rain becomes heavier towards the end of December.

建議: Your answer is good but could be improved by using linking words to connect your ideas more smoothly and by avoiding slight redundancy.

範例: I prefer cold weather because I enjoy wearing cozy clothes, which makes me feel comfortable throughout the day. Moreover, cold weather prevents me from feeling sweaty when I go outside, and I like drinking hot coffee as it helps me relax and feel calm.

建議: Try to avoid filler words like 'umm' and 'uh'. Also, use linking words to connect your ideas and make your answer more fluent and natural.

範例: I like wet weather because when it rains, I usually stay at home watching TV or reading books while enjoying a cup of coffee. Additionally, I enjoy wearing raincoats and dancing in the rain. The rainy season makes the environment look rich and green.

建議: Avoid filler words and incomplete sentences. Make your answer more structured by clearly explaining when and why you check the weather forecast, and complete your thoughts.

範例: Yes, I check the weather forecast every morning to decide what type of clothing to wear. For example, I choose light clothes when it's hot and raincoats when it's rainy.

建議: Your answer is informative but could be improved by avoiding repetition and using more precise vocabulary. Also, try to link your ideas smoothly.

範例: In recent years, climate change has accelerated, making rainfall patterns unpredictable in many regions. This has caused water shortages and negatively affected agriculture, which in turn harms both people and wildlife.

建議: Avoid repetition and filler words. Make your answer more concise and clear by structuring your ideas logically and using linking words.

範例: Yes, I would like to visit countries with cold climates because I enjoy wearing cozy clothes. I also want to try outdoor activities in the snow, such as skiing and skating, and I would prefer to live in a cold country.

× It it will rain lightly at the start of the month of August but it will But we have a heavy rains at the end of December so for remaining.

✓ It will rain lightly at the start of the month of August, but we have heavy rains at the end of December for the remaining period.

The original sentence contains repetition ('It it') and incorrect verb form usage ('will But we have a heavy rains'). The phrase 'will But' is incorrect and 'a heavy rains' mixes singular article 'a' with plural noun 'rains'. The corrected sentence removes repetition, fixes article usage, and clarifies the meaning. Use 'heavy rains' without 'a' because 'rains' is plural.

× I do check with when it rains, uh, to decide what, what type of clothing I have to wear.

✓ I do check when it rains to decide what type of clothing I have to wear.

The phrase 'check with when it rains' is incorrect; 'with' is unnecessary here. The correct phrase is 'check when it rains' to indicate the time of checking. Removing 'with' improves clarity and grammatical correctness.

× But we have a heavy rains at the end of December so for remaining.

✓ But we have heavy rains at the end of December for the remaining period.

The phrase 'a heavy rains' incorrectly combines singular article 'a' with plural noun 'rains'. The article 'a' should be removed to match the plural noun. Also, 'so for remaining' is unclear; 'for the remaining period' clarifies the meaning.

× Yes, I do like to prefer to visit the countries where it's known because I really like cold weather and I really like the idea of wearing the cozy clothing.

✓ Yes, I prefer to visit countries where it's cold because I really like cold weather and the idea of wearing cozy clothing.

The phrase 'I do like to prefer to visit' is redundant and awkward. 'Prefer' alone suffices. Also, 'the countries where it's known' is unclear; it should specify 'countries where it's cold'. 'The cozy clothing' should be 'cozy clothing' without 'the' as it refers to clothing in general.