天气— Part 1 評分報告

建議: 回答中存在语法错误和表达不自然的问题，建议简化句子结构，避免重复，并注意时态和主谓一致。可以用更自然的表达方式描述天气特点。

範例: The weather in Shanghai, where I live, is often rainy, especially in June and July. I don't like rainy days because they make it difficult to go outside and enjoy outdoor activities.

建議: 回答较为自然，但有口头语“uh”影响流畅度。建议减少口头语，使用连接词使表达更连贯，同时丰富细节。

範例: I prefer hot weather because it allows me to visit beautiful beaches during my summer vacation. This makes my life more enjoyable and memorable.

建議: 回答中有重复和语法错误，建议避免口头语，使用更准确的词汇表达感受，并用连接词使句子更流畅。

範例: I prefer wet weather because dry weather often makes my lips crack. However, sometimes rain can be inconvenient.

建議: 回答中语法错误较多，句子结构不清晰。建议使用简单句表达习惯，注意时态和冠词使用，避免冗长句子。

範例: I usually check the weather forecast when I have important plans, like exams or dates, to decide if I need an umbrella. But I don't check it for regular days like going to school.

建議: 回答中有语法错误和重复，表达不够清晰。建议简化句子，避免口头语，使用准确词汇描述气候变化的影响。

範例: In recent years, global warming has made the weather hotter. Sometimes, Shanghai feels like a hot pot, which makes life uncomfortable.

建議: 回答较完整，但有语法和表达不自然的问题。建议减少口头语，使用连词连接句子，并准确表达地理信息。

範例: Yes, I would like to visit cities with different climates because I don't like Shanghai's rainy weather in June and July. For example, Perth in Western Australia has fewer rainy days and a mild temperature around 20°C.

× The in Shanghai where I live and the weather here is all often rainy, especially in the months of June or July and I really hate rainy days because it make me very inconvenient to go out and do some outdoor activities.

✓ In Shanghai, where I live, the weather is often rainy, especially in the months of June or July, and I really hate rainy days because it makes it very inconvenient for me to go out and do some outdoor activities.

这里's the'多余且位置错误，应去掉。'make'应为第三人称单数形式'makes'，因为主语是单数的'it'。'inconvenient to go out'应改为'makes it very inconvenient for me to go out'，使表达更自然。

× because it make me very inconvenient to go out and do some outdoor activities.

✓ because it makes it very inconvenient for me to go out and do some outdoor activities.

主语是第三人称单数'it'，谓语动词应加's'，变为'makes'。

× sometimes in hot weather I can go to some beautiful beaches to enjoy the hot summer and my summer vacation.

✓ sometimes in hot weather I can go to some beautiful beaches to enjoy the hot summer and my summer vacations.

summer vacation通常复数形式表示多个假期，保持一致性。

× sometimes I just feel very dry and my my lips were broken if the weather is so dry.

✓ sometimes I just feel very dry and my lips get chapped if the weather is so dry.

'my lips were broken'表达不自然，改为'my lips get chapped'更符合英语习惯。

× But when I just went to the school I didn't.

✓ But when I just went to school, I didn't.

'went to the school'中'the'多余，通常说'go to school'表示上学。

× global warming makes the weather to be more hotter and sometimes in Shanghai we just feel a very hot and like hot pots, which which makes our life become very painful.

✓ global warming makes the weather hotter and sometimes in Shanghai we just feel very hot, like hot pots, which makes our life very uncomfortable.

'makes the weather to be more hotter'中'to be'多余，'more hotter'重复比较级，应改为'hotter'。'like hot pots'后面应加逗号，'makes our life become very painful'表达不自然，改为'makes our life very uncomfortable'更合适。

× I think, uh, there are too many rainy days in the June or July.

✓ I think, uh, there are too many rainy days in June or July.

月份前不加冠词'the'，应直接说'in June or July'。