天气— Part 1 評分報告

建議: 回答が不自然で文法的な誤りが多く、意味が伝わりにくいです。より明確で簡潔な表現を心がけ、文の構造を整えましょう。例えば、季節ごとの天気の特徴を具体的に述べ、冗長な表現を避けることが重要です。

範例: My hometown is quite cold from December to January, but in other seasons, the weather is milder. Recently, it has been getting hotter every year due to climate change.

建議: 理由の説明が不明瞭で文法的な誤りもあります。理由を明確にし、文法を正しく使い、接続詞を用いて論理的に話を展開しましょう。

範例: I prefer cold weather because it's easier to add layers of clothing to stay warm, whereas in hot weather, it's difficult to cool down by removing clothes.

建議: 内容が混乱しており、伝えたいことがはっきりしません。具体的な理由を整理し、簡潔に述べることが大切です。また、文法と語彙の正確さにも注意しましょう。

範例: I prefer wet weather because dry weather makes my eyes dry and worsens my allergies, so wet weather is better for my health.

建議: 回答は意味が伝わりますが、繰り返しや不自然な表現があります。文を簡潔にし、接続詞を使って論理的に説明しましょう。

範例: I check the weather forecast every morning because I often get headaches before bad weather or rainy days, so it's important for me to prepare.

建議: 質問に対して答えが短すぎて会話が広がりません。自分の意見や知っていることを簡単でも良いので述べる練習をしましょう。

範例: I think climate change has caused more extreme weather, like hotter summers and heavier rainfalls in recent years.

建議: 理由は述べられていますが、文が長くて少し分かりにくいです。文を分けて、より自然で明確な表現を心がけましょう。

範例: I don't want to visit cities with different climates because I might feel uncomfortable. Also, I'm not sure how to spend my time in unfamiliar weather, so I feel worried.

× My hometown is bit cold in like December to January but other months like other seasons like it's not usual like it's getting more hotter every year because of.

✓ My hometown is a bit cold from December to January, but in other months or seasons, it's not usual; it is getting hotter every year because of climate change.

'Bit' should be preceded by the article 'a' to form 'a bit'. 'In like December to January' is incorrect; 'from December to January' is the correct preposition. 'More hotter' is a double comparative; 'hotter' alone is correct. The sentence also needs clearer structure and punctuation for better understanding.

× I prefer cold weather because when we got hot weather we can not getting colder outside because we can't take it off our clothes.

✓ I prefer cold weather because when we have hot weather, we cannot get cooler outside since we can't take off our clothes.

'Can not getting' is incorrect; modal verbs like 'can' should be followed by the base form of the verb, so 'cannot get' is correct. 'Got' should be 'have' to match present tense. 'Take it off our clothes' should be 'take off our clothes'.

× I prefer cold weather because when we got hot weather we can not getting colder outside because we can't take it off our clothes.

✓ I prefer cold weather because when we have hot weather, we cannot get cooler outside since we can't take off our clothes.

After modal verbs like 'can', the base form of the verb should be used, not the '-ing' form. Therefore, 'can not getting' is incorrect; it should be 'cannot get'.

× But when we get cold we can just put many clothes on ourselves.

✓ But when it is cold, we can just put on many clothes.

'Put many clothes on ourselves' is awkward; the correct phrase is 'put on many clothes'. Also, 'when we get cold' is better expressed as 'when it is cold' in this context.

× I prefer wet weather because I have dried eye and the allergy of like when we get dry weather we also get many disaster from air like I have allergies so it's bad to me.

✓ I prefer wet weather because I have dry eyes and allergies; when the weather is dry, there are many air-related disasters, which are bad for me.

'Dried eye' should be 'dry eyes'. 'The allergy of like' is incorrect; it should be 'allergies'. 'Many disaster from air' should be 'many air-related disasters'. The sentence structure is also improved for clarity.

× I check weather every morning because I usually I often get headache from bad weather or like before the rainy day.

✓ I check the weather every morning because I usually or often get headaches from bad weather or before rainy days.

'Check weather' needs the definite article 'the'. 'I usually I often' is redundant; choose one. 'Get headache' should be 'get headaches' (plural). 'Before the rainy day' should be 'before rainy days'.

× I don't want to visit other cities that have different climates from where I live because of course I might feel uncomfortable from the city's weather and I don't know how to spend that day from different weather that I get, so I'm worried about it.

✓ I don't want to visit other cities that have different climates from where I live because, of course, I might feel uncomfortable with the city's weather, and I don't know how to spend that day in different weather, so I'm worried about it.

'Uncomfortable from' should be 'uncomfortable with'. 'Spend that day from different weather that I get' is awkward; 'spend that day in different weather' is correct. Commas are added for clarity.