天气— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Câu trả lời của bạn cần rõ ràng và tự nhiên hơn. Bạn nên bắt đầu bằng câu chủ đề trả lời trực tiếp câu hỏi, sau đó cung cấp thêm chi tiết cụ thể. Tránh lỗi ngữ pháp và phát âm sai từ như 'reason' thay vì 'region'.

範例: I live in a region with four distinct seasons: spring, summer, autumn, and winter. The weather changes throughout the year, bringing different experiences in each season.

建議: Bạn nên tránh sử dụng từ ngữ không cần thiết như 'uh', 'umm' và nói câu hoàn chỉnh, rõ ràng. Sử dụng liên từ để câu trả lời mạch lạc hơn và chú ý ngữ pháp như 'I can go out' thay vì 'I can going out'.

範例: I prefer cold weather to hot weather because in winter, I can go out with my friends to enjoy hot food and play outside during Christmas.

建議: Câu trả lời của bạn thiếu sự mạch lạc và có nhiều lỗi ngữ pháp. Bạn nên sử dụng câu đơn giản, rõ ràng và tránh lặp từ. Hãy dùng liên từ để kết nối ý và cung cấp lý do cụ thể.

範例: I prefer dry weather because I can go to school and meet my friends easily. Wet weather makes it difficult to go outside and meet people.

建議: Bạn cần nói câu hoàn chỉnh và tránh lỗi phát âm như 'frog' thay vì 'forecast'. Hãy trả lời trực tiếp câu hỏi và cung cấp thông tin rõ ràng về thời gian và tần suất.

範例: Yes, I usually check the weather forecast twice a day, in the morning and in the evening, because my grandparents like watching the news.

建議: Bạn nên sử dụng câu rõ ràng, tránh lỗi ngữ pháp và nói đầy đủ ý. Dùng liên từ để kết nối các ý và cung cấp ví dụ cụ thể hơn.

範例: I think one important effect of climate change is global warming, which causes rising temperatures worldwide. This leads to floods, droughts, melting ice, and harms both people and the environment.

建議: Bạn nên sử dụng ngữ pháp đúng, tránh lỗi như 'it have' thay vì 'it has'. Nên nói câu hoàn chỉnh và rõ ràng, đồng thời dùng liên từ để câu mạch lạc hơn.

範例: Yes, I would like to visit cities with different climates from mine, such as places in China or Vietnam. For example, in Sa Pa, there is winter and snow, which I really like.

× In my reason, there are Four Seasons are spring, summer, autumn or winter, and the weather always change in the month of the year.

✓ In my region, the four seasons are spring, summer, autumn, and winter, and the weather always changes throughout the months of the year.

The word 'reason' is incorrect; it should be 'region' to refer to an area. 'Four Seasons' should not be capitalized and 'are' is repeated unnecessarily. 'Autumn or winter' should be 'autumn and winter' to list all seasons. 'Weather always change' should be 'weather always changes' to agree with singular subject 'weather'. Also, 'in the month of the year' is better expressed as 'throughout the months of the year' to indicate changes over time.

× In my reason, there are Four Seasons are spring, summer, autumn or winter, and the weather always change in the month of the year.

✓ In my region, the four seasons are spring, summer, autumn, and winter, and the weather always changes throughout the months of the year.

The preposition 'in' before 'the month of the year' is not appropriate here; 'throughout' better expresses the idea of changes happening over multiple months.

× Uh on hand, I prefer cold weather than hot weather because, umm, because in the winter I can going out with my friend, uh, to eat hot hot foods and going outside for play in a Christmas Day.

✓ On one hand, I prefer cold weather to hot weather because in the winter I can go out with my friends to eat hot food and go outside to play on Christmas Day.

The phrase 'can going out' is incorrect; modal verbs like 'can' should be followed by the base form of the verb, so 'can go out' is correct. Also, 'prefer cold weather than hot weather' should be 'prefer cold weather to hot weather'. 'Going outside for play' should be 'go outside to play'. 'In a Christmas Day' should be 'on Christmas Day' because we use 'on' for specific days.

× Uh on hand, I prefer cold weather than hot weather because, umm, because in the winter I can going out with my friend, uh, to eat hot hot foods and going outside for play in a Christmas Day.

✓ On one hand, I prefer cold weather to hot weather because in the winter I can go out with my friends to eat hot food and go outside to play on Christmas Day.

The preposition 'in' before 'a Christmas Day' is incorrect; the correct preposition for days is 'on'. Also, 'with my friend' should be plural 'friends' if referring to more than one friend.

× Uh on hand, I prefer cold weather than hot weather because, umm, because in the winter I can going out with my friend, uh, to eat hot hot foods and going outside for play in a Christmas Day.

✓ On one hand, I prefer cold weather to hot weather because in the winter I can go out with my friends to eat hot food and go outside to play on Christmas Day.

'Friend' should be plural 'friends' if referring to more than one person. 'Hot hot foods' is redundant; 'hot food' is sufficient and uncountable here.

× I prefer dry weather because I need to go to school and I want to go outside with my friends regularly so when the wet weather I feel uncomfortable because it censor my uh meeting and all of my going outside with my friends and dry.

✓ I prefer dry weather because I need to go to school and I want to go outside with my friends regularly, so when the weather is wet, I feel uncomfortable because it cancels my meetings and all my plans to go outside with my friends.

The phrase 'when the wet weather' is missing a verb; it should be 'when the weather is wet'. 'It censor my meeting' is incorrect; the correct verb is 'cancels' and 'meeting' should be plural 'meetings' if referring generally. 'All of my going outside' is awkward; better to say 'all my plans to go outside'. The word 'dry' at the end is misplaced and unnecessary.

× I prefer dry weather because I need to go to school and I want to go outside with my friends regularly so when the wet weather I feel uncomfortable because it censor my uh meeting and all of my going outside with my friends and dry.

✓ I prefer dry weather because I need to go to school and I want to go outside with my friends regularly, so when the weather is wet, I feel uncomfortable because it cancels my meetings and all my plans to go outside with my friends.

The verb 'censor' is incorrect; the correct past tense verb is 'cancels' (present tense here to match 'feel'). The sentence needs proper verb forms to express the intended meaning.

× Yes, because my grandparents like watching uh news. So the news contain the frog weather forecast. So I usually watching it like and when I watching it right in the morning and in the evening.

✓ Yes, because my grandparents like watching the news. The news contains the weather forecast. So I usually watch it in the morning and in the evening.

'Usually watching' should be 'usually watch' because modal or auxiliary verbs are missing. 'Contain' should be 'contains' to agree with singular subject 'news'. 'Frog weather forecast' is incorrect; likely a mishearing or typo for 'weather forecast'. 'When I watching it' should be 'when I watch it'.

× Yes, because my grandparents like watching uh news. So the news contain the frog weather forecast. So I usually watching it like and when I watching it right in the morning and in the evening.

✓ Yes, because my grandparents like watching the news. The news contains the weather forecast. So I usually watch it in the morning and in the evening.

The verb 'contain' does not agree with the singular noun 'news'; it should be 'contains'. Also, 'usually watching' and 'when I watching' are incorrect verb forms; the base form 'watch' is needed after 'usually' and 'when I'.

× I think the important effects of climate change in recent years is global warming, when the temperature rise up around the world and the IT costs to floods and drought melting ice or harm people and the environment for ex.

✓ I think the most important effect of climate change in recent years is global warming, when the temperature rises around the world and it causes floods, droughts, melting ice, and harms people and the environment, for example.

'Effects' should be singular 'effect' to agree with 'is'. 'Rise up' should be 'rises' to agree with singular 'temperature'. 'The IT costs to floods and drought melting ice or harm people' is incorrect; it should be 'it causes floods, droughts, melting ice, and harms people'. 'For ex.' should be 'for example'.

× I think the important effects of climate change in recent years is global warming, when the temperature rise up around the world and the IT costs to floods and drought melting ice or harm people and the environment for ex.

✓ I think the most important effect of climate change in recent years is global warming, when the temperature rises around the world and it causes floods, droughts, melting ice, and harms people and the environment, for example.

The verb 'rise' should be 'rises' to agree with singular subject 'temperature'. Also, 'costs' is incorrect; the correct verb is 'causes' to indicate the effect of global warming.

× Yeah, I would like to visit other cities that have different climate from where I live, like in China or in my country Vietnam. In Safar it have winter and it have snow and I like snow very much.

✓ Yeah, I would like to visit other cities that have different climates from where I live, like in China or in my country Vietnam. In Sa Pa, it has winter and it has snow, and I like snow very much.

'Different climate' should be plural 'different climates' to match 'cities'. 'Safar' is likely a misspelling of 'Sa Pa', a place in Vietnam. 'It have' should be 'it has' to agree with singular subject 'it'.