天气— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Try to use correct vocabulary and grammar, and avoid unclear or incorrect words like 'Tracy Suns'. Also, structure your answer with a clear topic sentence and supporting details, using linking words for coherence.

範例: The weather where I live in southern Thailand is generally hot throughout the year. Although Thailand has three seasons—winter, summer, and rainy—the southern region does not experience a true winter season.

建議: Improve grammar and word choice, for example, use 'relieve my stress' instead of 'advise from my stresses'. Also, add linking words to connect ideas smoothly.

範例: I prefer cold weather because it helps me to relax and relieves my stress. In contrast, hot weather often makes me feel frustrated and uncomfortable.

建議: Focus on correct vocabulary and sentence structure. Use linking words to explain your preference clearly and avoid confusing phrases like 'drive better more'.

範例: I prefer dry weather because I enjoy doing laundry, and when the weather is dry, my clothes can dry more quickly and easily.

建議: Use correct verb tenses and vocabulary. Avoid unclear phrases like 'checked the forecast of waiting to my phone' and 'love shaking the weather'. Structure your answer with clear topic and supporting sentences.

範例: Yes, I check the weather forecast on my phone every morning when I wake up. This helps me decide whether I need to take an umbrella or dress appropriately for the day.

建議: Improve grammar and clarity. Use specific examples and linking words to explain the effects logically. Avoid vague phrases like 'affect to US'.

範例: Climate change has affected the environment and agriculture in many ways. For instance, farmers struggle to grow crops because higher temperatures cause water shortages and heat stress on plants.

建議: Use correct vocabulary and grammar. Replace unclear words like 'coveted' with 'cold weather'. Provide a clear reason and use linking words to connect ideas.

範例: Yes, I would love to visit countries with cold climates because I rarely experience cold weather where I live. For example, I would like to visit Japan to enjoy its winter season.

× In Thailand there are Tracy Suns such as winter, summer and rainy.

✓ In Thailand there are three seasons such as winter, summer and rainy.

The word 'Tracy Suns' is incorrect and seems to be a misspelling of 'three seasons'. The plural form 'seasons' is correct here because it refers to multiple periods of the year. Correcting to 'three seasons' clarifies the meaning and uses the correct plural noun.

× But in southern part of Thailand which I live doesn't have winter.

✓ But the southern part of Thailand, where I live, doesn't have winter.

The sentence lacks the definite article 'the' before 'southern part' and is missing commas to separate the relative clause 'where I live'. Adding 'the' and commas improves clarity and grammatical correctness.

× I prefer cold weather because living in the cold temperature helps me to relax and advise from my stresses.

✓ I prefer cold weather because living in cold temperatures helps me to relax and avoid stress.

The phrase 'advise from my stresses' is incorrect. The correct verb is 'avoid' and the noun should be 'stress' (uncountable). Also, 'cold temperature' should be plural 'cold temperatures' to generalise the condition. These changes correct the preposition and word choice errors.

× I prefer drive better more because I love to do laundry and if the water is dry my clothes can dry more easily.

✓ I prefer dry weather more because I love to do laundry and if the weather is dry my clothes can dry more easily.

The phrase 'drive better more' is incorrect and likely a misspelling of 'dry weather more'. Also, 'water is dry' is incorrect; it should be 'weather is dry'. These corrections fix adjective misuse and clarify meaning.

× Of course, I checked the forecast of waiting to my phone every day when I wake up.

✓ Of course, I check the weather forecast on my phone every day when I wake up.

The verb 'checked' is past tense but the sentence refers to a habitual action, so present tense 'check' is appropriate. 'Of waiting to my phone' is incorrect; it should be 'on my phone'. These corrections fix tense and preposition errors.

× I love shaking the weather because it leads me to prepare that day whether I need my umbrella or not.

✓ I love checking the weather because it helps me prepare for the day, whether I need my umbrella or not.

The verb 'shaking' is incorrect; the intended verb is 'checking'. Also, 'leads me to prepare that day' is awkward; 'helps me prepare for the day' is clearer and grammatically correct.

× Climate change affect to US and agriculture in many terms.

✓ Climate change affects us and agriculture in many ways.

The verb 'affect' should be in third person singular form 'affects' to agree with the singular subject 'climate change'. 'US' should be lowercase 'us' as a pronoun. 'In many terms' is better expressed as 'in many ways'.

× For example, farmers cannot grow their plants because of the water is too hot.

✓ For example, farmers cannot grow their plants because the water is too hot.

The phrase 'because of the water is too hot' is incorrect; 'because the water is too hot' is correct. The plural 'plants' is acceptable here as it refers to multiple crops.

× Yes, I would love to visit the country that have coveted.

✓ Yes, I would love to visit a country that has cold weather.

'The country that have coveted' is incorrect. 'Country' is singular and requires 'has' not 'have'. 'Coveted' is a wrong word here; the intended phrase is 'cold weather'. Also, 'a country' is more appropriate than 'the country' when speaking generally.