天气— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Answer should be more natural and coherent. Avoid repetition and unclear phrases. Use linking words to connect ideas logically. Keep answer concise within 5 sentences.

範例: The weather where I live is quite mild, neither too hot nor too cold. Because of this pleasant climate, I can enjoy outdoor activities comfortably. For instance, I often play basketball with my friends when the weather is nice.

建議: Improve sentence structure and clarity. Avoid incomplete sentences and unclear expressions. Use linking words to explain reasons clearly.

範例: I prefer cold weather to hot weather because I sweat a lot when it's hot, which makes me uncomfortable. In winter, the weather is still pleasant enough for me to enjoy sports and outdoor activities.

建議: Clarify your preferences and avoid unclear phrases. Use linking words to explain your choice and provide specific examples.

範例: Honestly, I don't like very dry or very wet weather; I prefer something mild in between. However, if I have to choose, I prefer dry weather because it allows me to go outside and do activities like playing sports or supervising construction work.

建議: Improve vocabulary and sentence clarity. Correct unclear words and use linking words to connect ideas logically.

範例: Yes, I often check the weather forecast because I work as an engineer and need to plan construction schedules carefully. For example, when pouring concrete slabs, I must ensure the weather is suitable to avoid delays. Therefore, I usually check the forecast every morning before starting work.

建議: Use accurate vocabulary and avoid unclear phrases. Provide specific examples and link ideas clearly.

範例: Due to climate change, I have noticed that the snow-capped mountains in my country are losing their snow, and glaciers are melting rapidly. This is alarming because it affects the local environment and water supply. For instance, many people depend on glacier water for drinking and farming, so this has serious consequences.

建議: Make your answer more coherent and avoid repetition. Use linking words to explain reasons clearly and complete your thoughts.

範例: Yes, I would like to visit cities with different climates because the weather where I live is very mild. Experiencing extreme weather conditions would be interesting and help me understand different environments better.

× The weather will I have been living is quite mild.

✓ The weather where I have been living is quite mild.

The sentence incorrectly uses 'will' which is a future tense modal verb, but the context requires present perfect continuous tense to describe the ongoing situation. Remove 'will' to correct the tense.

× I neither feel cold or not hard, so I can play some sports such as basketball with basketball, which which I often play with my friends.

✓ I neither feel cold nor hot, so I can play some sports such as basketball, which I often play with my friends.

The phrase 'neither...or' is incorrect; the correct correlative conjunction is 'neither...nor'. Also, 'not hard' is likely a mishearing or typo for 'not hot'. Repetition of 'basketball' is redundant and should be removed.

× Will I prefer cold weather to the hot weather it because in hot weather my body sweats a lot and I do not like the weight and it's feelings by dessert but in winter in the weather it's still I can do some sports and even.

✓ I prefer cold weather to hot weather because in hot weather my body sweats a lot and I do not like the sweat and its feeling by desert, but in winter the weather is still and I can do some sports.

The sentence incorrectly uses 'Will I prefer' which is a question form; it should be a statement. Also, 'weight' should be 'sweat', and 'dessert' should be 'desert'. The sentence is fragmented and needs restructuring for clarity.

× I sometimes I eat mild in between them.

✓ Sometimes I feel mild in between them.

The verb 'eat' is incorrect in this context; likely intended verb is 'feel'. Also, 'mild' is an adjective and needs a verb like 'feel' to make sense.

× I usually take forecasts every morning before starting work.

✓ I usually check the weather forecast every morning before starting work.

The verb 'take' is incorrect collocation with 'forecasts'; the correct verb is 'check' when referring to weather forecasts.

× the glacier are drying out rapidly.

✓ the glaciers are drying out rapidly.

The noun 'glacier' is singular but the verb 'are' is plural; to match the plural verb, the noun should be plural 'glaciers'.

× many people rely on gas or milk to water for drinking and farming, so this thing has serious consequences.

✓ many people rely on glacier or meltwater for drinking and farming, so this has serious consequences.

The phrase 'gas or milk to water' is incorrect; likely intended 'glacier or meltwater'. Also, 'this thing' is vague; 'this' is sufficient.

× I want to experience extreme the weather over there where I live, and the weather is very mild.

✓ I want to experience extreme weather over there because where I live, the weather is very mild.

The conjunction 'and' is incorrectly used; 'because' better connects the cause and effect. Also, 'extreme the weather' is incorrect; 'extreme weather' is correct.