天气— Part 1 評分報告

建議: 你的回答表达了天气的特点，但语法和表达不够自然，句子结构混乱，且有重复。建议简化句子，注意语法正确性，并避免重复表达。

範例: I live in southern Taiwan, where the weather is usually hot and humid. Because of this, I often need to change my clothes and use the air conditioner to stay comfortable.

建議: 回答中有发音错误和表达不清晰的问题，且内容重复。建议明确表达喜好，使用正确词汇，并给出具体理由。

範例: I prefer cold weather because I can wear warm clothes like coats, and I find it more comfortable than hot weather, which can be tiring.

建議: 回答不连贯，语法错误较多，表达不清晰。建议使用完整句子，清楚说明原因，并避免语法错误。

範例: I prefer dry weather because when it rains, like in Taipei, I often get wet and uncomfortable. Dry days are better for outdoor activities.

建議: 回答表达不流畅，语法和句子结构有误。建议简洁明了地说明习惯和频率，并使用正确的时态和连接词。

範例: Yes, I usually check the weather forecast every evening to see if it will rain the next day, so I know whether to take an umbrella.

建議: 回答内容不完整且语法错误较多，表达不清晰。建议完整表达观点，使用正确语法，并具体说明气候变化的影响。

範例: I think climate change has caused temperatures in Taiwan to rise. Even in November, it feels like summer, which is unusual.

建議: 回答不完整且表达混乱，语法错误较多。建议清晰表达想法，使用完整句子，并具体说明原因。

範例: I would like to travel abroad to cities with different climates because my city has a common weather pattern with both rain and sun, and I want to experience something new.

× I live in southern Taiwan so the weather there is very hot and humid so it's make me always need to change my clothes and open air condition.

✓ I live in southern Taiwan, so the weather there is very hot and humid, so it always makes me need to change my clothes and turn on the air conditioner.

句中“it's make”应为“it makes”，因为主语是第三人称单数，动词需加-s；此外，“open air condition”应为“turn on the air conditioner”，表达更准确。

× Seriously, I like the boat because when cold I can wear my warm warm coat and hot weather it can lose weight.

✓ Seriously, I like the boat because when it's cold I can wear my warm coat, and in hot weather, I can lose weight.

句中缺少“it's”表示“当……时”，且“warm warm coat”重复，应去掉一个“warm”；“hot weather it can lose weight”结构不完整，需改为“in hot weather, I can lose weight”。

× I prefer dry weather because. There have a chance. I go to Taipei and the weather is raining and I get waves all my body, so I prefer to dry.

✓ I prefer dry weather because there is a chance I go to Taipei and the weather is rainy, and I get wet all over my body, so I prefer dry weather.

“There have”应为“There is”，因为“chance”是单数；“the weather is raining”应改为“the weather is rainy”；“get waves all my body”表达错误，应为“get wet all over my body”。

× Sure, I check weather forecast about when the time always raining and I will check it will rain tomorrow that I can think I need to take a umbrella or not.

✓ Sure, I check the weather forecast when it is always raining, and I will check if it will rain tomorrow so I can decide whether I need to take an umbrella or not.

句中缺少冠词“the”修饰“weather forecast”；“about when the time always raining”结构不正确，应改为“when it is always raining”；“take a umbrella”冠词错误，应为“an umbrella”；句子结构需调整使表达更清晰。

× Because of the population, that's the weather temperature always high in Taiwan and now it's November, but I think it's summer and.

✓ Because of the population, the weather temperature is always high in Taiwan, and now it's November, but I think it's summer.

“that's the weather temperature always high”语序错误，应为“the weather temperature is always high”；句末“and”多余，应删除。

× I prefer to go aboard because, uh, the city here's some my my city is the most common. It have rain or sun. It's not very hot, but it's not always raining, but other.

✓ I prefer to go abroad because, uh, the city here is different from my city. It has rain or sun. It's not very hot, and it's not always raining, unlike my city.

“go aboard”应为“go abroad”；“the city here's some my my city is the most common”表达混乱，应改为“the city here is different from my city”；“It have”应为“It has”；句子结构需调整使表达更通顺。