天气— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Your answer is clear but could be more natural and fluent. Try to start with a direct topic sentence and then add a little more detail using linking words to make it coherent.

範例: The weather where I live is usually cold but sunny, which makes it quite pleasant despite the low temperatures.

建議: Your answer is understandable but a bit awkward. Try to express your preference more naturally and use linking words to connect your ideas smoothly.

範例: I don't particularly prefer cold or hot weather; instead, I enjoy days that are sunny and windy, when I can comfortably wear just a T-shirt and a jacket.

建議: Your answer is unclear and contains some errors. Try to directly state your preference and explain your reasons clearly with correct vocabulary and grammar.

範例: I prefer dry weather because wet weather can make houses smell unpleasant, whereas dry weather only requires me to apply cream to protect my skin.

建議: Your answer is good but could be more concise and natural. Use linking words to improve flow and avoid repetition.

範例: I don't usually check the weather forecast, but I do so when I'm planning to go out and need to prepare items like raincoats or sunscreen.

建議: Your answer addresses the question but has grammatical errors and could be more specific. Use linking words and correct plural forms to improve clarity.

範例: Due to climate change, the weather has changed significantly in my area; for example, we no longer experience distinct spring or autumn seasons, only very hot or very cold weather.

建議: Your answer is understandable but could be more natural and grammatically correct. Use linking words and correct plural forms to improve coherence.

範例: Yes, I would like to visit places with a cool but sunny climate because I don't enjoy extremely cold or hot weather.

× The place I live now, the weather is cold but sunny.

✓ The place where I live now has cold but sunny weather.

The original sentence lacks a proper main verb and clear subject-verb relationship, making it a sentence fragment. Adding 'where' and restructuring the sentence provides clarity and grammatical correctness.

× I don't prefer any of them. I like sunny, windy, and when the weather is suitable for just wearing one T-shirt and a jacket.

✓ I don't prefer either. I like it when the weather is sunny, windy, and suitable for just wearing one T-shirt and a jacket.

The phrase 'I like sunny, windy' is incomplete and unclear. Adding 'it when the weather is' clarifies the meaning. Also, 'any of them' is better replaced with 'either' when referring to two options.

× I prefer to drive it there better than wet because if the weather is wet, the house and Outsmart smells weird.

✓ I prefer dry weather to wet because if the weather is wet, the house and outdoors smell weird.

The phrase 'I prefer to drive it there better than wet' is unclear and incorrect. The intended meaning is a preference for dry weather over wet. Also, 'Outsmart' seems to be a mishearing or typo for 'outdoors'. 'Smells' should be 'smell' to agree with the plural subject 'house and outdoors'.

× But dry weather you just have to put cream on your face and your body and that's nothing else.

✓ But in dry weather, you just have to put cream on your face and body, and nothing else.

The original sentence lacks prepositions and has awkward phrasing. Adding 'in' before 'dry weather' and rephrasing improves clarity and grammatical correctness.

× I don't really often check the weather.

✓ I don't often check the weather.

The adverbs 'really' and 'often' are awkwardly placed together. 'Don't often' is the correct and natural placement for expressing frequency in negative sentences.

× Because of climate change, the weather have changed very much and in China and where I live there is no more springs or autumn anymore.

✓ Because of climate change, the weather has changed a lot, and in China, where I live, there are no more springs or autumns anymore.

'Weather' is singular and requires 'has' not 'have'. Also, 'springs' and 'autumn' should be pluralized consistently as 'springs' and 'autumns'. The sentence also benefits from commas for clarity.

× There's only very hot or very cold weathers.

✓ There is only very hot or very cold weather.

'Weather' is an uncountable noun and should not be pluralized as 'weathers'. Also, 'There is' is correct for singular uncountable nouns.

× Yes, I would like to visit a place which is cool but sunny because I don't really like cold freezing weathers and hot burning weathers.

✓ Yes, I would like to visit a place which is cool but sunny because I don't really like cold freezing weather and hot burning weather.

Again, 'weather' is uncountable and should not be pluralized as 'weathers'. Using the singular form is correct here.