天气— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Your answer is somewhat clear but could be more natural and concise. Avoid vague phrases like 'so many weathers to feel' and try to directly describe the weather. Also, use linking words to connect ideas smoothly.

範例: I live in a country with six distinct seasons, but where I live, the weather is usually hot most of the year.

建議: Your answer repeats similar ideas and has some grammatical errors. Try to express your feelings clearly and avoid redundancy. Use linking words to connect your reasons.

範例: I prefer cold weather because I dislike summer; it makes me feel uncomfortable and frustrated due to excessive sweating.

建議: Your answer is unclear and incomplete. Avoid filler words like 'umm' and complete your sentences. Provide specific reasons and use linking words for coherence.

範例: Since I prefer cold weather, I definitely like dry weather because during the rainy season, muddy roads make it difficult to walk comfortably.

建議: Your answer is confusing and contains grammatical errors. Try to answer directly and clearly. Use correct sentence structures and avoid redundancy.

範例: I don't usually check the weather forecast, but since I'm often on my phone, I see weather updates when they appear.

建議: Your answer is incomplete and has grammatical mistakes. Try to finish your thoughts clearly and use linking words to explain your opinion with specific details.

範例: In my opinion, climate change has caused summers to last longer in my country, and we rarely experience cold weather anymore.

建議: Your answer has many fillers and is somewhat unclear. Try to speak more fluently and organize your ideas logically. Use linking words and avoid unnecessary pauses.

範例: Yes, I would like to visit cities with different climates because I want to explore and experience the various weather conditions across my country, whether they are cool, cold, or hot.

× I live in a country where there are six seasons, so basically we have so many weathers to feel.

✓ I live in a country where there are six seasons, so basically we have many types of weather to experience.

The word 'weathers' is incorrect because 'weather' is an uncountable noun and does not have a plural form. Instead, use 'types of weather' or 'kinds of weather' to express variety.

× I feel like so frustrated.

✓ I feel so frustrated.

The phrase 'feel like so frustrated' is incorrect. 'Feel like' is used before a noun or verb (e.g., 'feel like crying'), but here 'frustrated' is an adjective, so 'I feel so frustrated' is correct.

× I feel frustrating and so uncomfortable because of sweating.

✓ I feel frustrated and so uncomfortable because of sweating.

'Frustrating' is a present participle adjective describing something that causes frustration. To describe one's own feeling, use the past participle adjective 'frustrated'.

× the umm muds of the roads will stuck on our.

✓ the mud on the roads will stick to us.

'Muds' is incorrect as 'mud' is uncountable. Also, 'stuck' is the past participle; the correct verb form here is 'stick'. The preposition 'on' should be 'to' when something adheres to a person.

× No, I don't have any habits of checking the weather forecast but I although I am always on my phone so when any weather news are happening that show me on phones.

✓ No, I don't have the habit of checking the weather forecast, but I am always on my phone, so when any weather news happens, it shows me on my phone.

'Habits' should be singular 'habit' when referring to a general routine. 'Any weather news are' is incorrect; 'news' is singular and should be 'news is'. Also, 'that show me on phones' is unclear; corrected to 'it shows me on my phone' for clarity and correct subject-verb agreement.

× there is much more longer time in summer

✓ there is a much longer time in summer

'Much more longer' is redundant and incorrect. Use 'a much longer time' to correctly express the comparative degree with quantifier.

× every states of my country where like it's whether it is it cool, Is it cold or hot yes.

✓ every state of my country, whether it is cool, cold, or hot.

'States' should be singular 'state' when used with 'every'. 'Whether' is the correct conjunction to introduce alternatives, not 'where like it's whether'. The sentence is restructured for clarity and grammatical correctness.