天气— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Your answer is clear and relevant, but it could be improved by using linking words to connect ideas more smoothly and by adding a bit more specific detail about the weather or its effects. Avoid redundancy by combining related ideas.

範例: I live in the central part of Russia, where the weather is often windy, cloudy, and rainy. As a result, I usually feel a bit down and prefer to stay indoors rather than spending time outside.

建議: Your answer addresses the question but contains some grammatical errors and awkward phrasing. Try to use correct sentence structures and linking words to make your answer more natural and coherent. Also, be more specific about why you prefer hot weather.

範例: I prefer hot weather because I find it more comfortable and enjoyable. For instance, I plan to move to Italy in the future since its sunny climate and proximity to the ocean suit me well.

建議: Your answer is relevant but contains filler words and some grammatical mistakes. Try to avoid fillers like 'umm' and use clearer sentence structures. Also, use linking words to connect your ideas smoothly.

範例: I prefer dry weather because my hair is very curly, and I usually straighten it. When the weather is wet, my hair always becomes curly again, which I don't like.

建議: Your answer is understandable but could be improved by correcting grammar and adding linking words to make it more coherent. Also, specify when and how often you check the forecast.

範例: I usually check the weather forecast every morning because the climate in Russia is quite unpredictable. For example, it might be 0° today and 10° tomorrow.

建議: Your answer is unclear and contains grammatical errors. Try to express your opinion more clearly and support it with reasons or examples. Avoid vague phrases and improve sentence structure.

範例: I believe that climate change has not significantly affected Russia in recent years because our winters remain very cold and summers very hot, making the climate seem unpredictable.

建議: Your answer shows enthusiasm but is somewhat repetitive and grammatically incorrect. Try to organize your ideas clearly and use linking words to connect them logically.

範例: Of course, I would like to visit other cities with different climates. I often travel to other countries and cities, and my dream is to move to another country someday.

× For example, in the future my goal is move to Italy because I think the climate there so well for me and I really enjoy sunny days and ocean.

✓ For example, in the future my goal is to move to Italy because I think the climate there is so good for me and I really enjoy sunny days and the ocean.

The sentence is missing the infinitive marker 'to' before the verb 'move', which is required after 'my goal is'. Also, the verb 'is' is missing before 'so well', and 'well' should be replaced with 'good' to correctly describe the climate. Additionally, the definite article 'the' is needed before 'ocean' to specify it.

× For example, in the future my goal is move to Italy because I think the climate there so well for me and I really enjoy sunny days and ocean.

✓ For example, in the future my goal is to move to Italy because I think the climate there is so good for me and I really enjoy sunny days and the ocean.

The phrase 'so well for me' is incorrect; 'well' is an adverb and should be replaced with the adjective 'good' to describe the climate. Also, 'the ocean' requires the definite article 'the' to be grammatically correct.

× I prefer and enjoy dry weather because my hair is so curly and I straighten my hair and when umm weather is wet my hair umm always become curly.

✓ I prefer and enjoy dry weather because my hair is very curly and I straighten it, but when the weather is wet, my hair always becomes curly.

The sentence uses 'and' repeatedly, which makes it awkward. Replacing the second 'and' with 'but' improves the contrast between ideas. Also, 'umm' should be omitted as it is a filler word. 'Become' should be 'becomes' to agree with the singular subject 'hair'. The definite article 'the' is needed before 'weather'. Additionally, 'my hair' is repeated unnecessarily; 'it' can be used instead.

× I have the habit of checking the weather because in Russia there are really strange climate.

✓ I have the habit of checking the weather because in Russia there is really strange climate.

The noun 'climate' is singular, so the verb should be 'is' instead of 'are'. The subject-verb agreement must be maintained between 'climate' and the verb.

× I have the habit of checking the weather because in Russia there are really strange climate.

✓ I have the habit of checking the weather because in Russia there is really strange climate.

The noun 'climate' is singular, so it should not be preceded by 'are'. The verb must agree in number with the noun.

× For example, today is 0° and tomorrow can be 10°.

✓ For example, today is 0° and tomorrow will be 10°.

The modal verb 'can' is incorrectly used to indicate a future prediction. 'Will' is the correct modal verb to express future certainty or prediction.

× I don't think so, because in Russia climate doesn't change in recent years because winters are so cold, summers are so hot, so our climate is so crazy and nobody can be.

✓ I don't think so, because in Russia the climate hasn't changed in recent years; winters are very cold, summers are very hot, so our climate is quite extreme and nobody can predict it.

The phrase 'doesn't change in recent years' is incorrect because 'recent years' refers to a period up to now, so present perfect tense 'hasn't changed' is appropriate. Also, 'climate' needs the definite article 'the'. The phrase 'nobody can be' is incomplete and unclear; it is corrected to 'nobody can predict it' for clarity.

× I don't think so, because in Russia climate doesn't change in recent years because winters are so cold, summers are so hot, so our climate is so crazy and nobody can be.

✓ I don't think so, because in Russia the climate hasn't changed in recent years; winters are very cold, summers are very hot, so our climate is quite extreme and nobody can predict it.

The noun 'climate' requires the definite article 'the' when referring to a specific climate, such as that of Russia.

× Of course, since I can see more that I usually visit other countries, other cities that have different climates from my city, Moscow and I will move to another country.

✓ Of course, since I can see more, I usually visit other countries and cities that have different climates from my city, Moscow, and I will move to another country.

The original sentence is awkward and lacks proper conjunctions and punctuation. Adding commas and the conjunction 'and' improves clarity and sentence flow.