天气— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Your answer provides relevant information but contains some grammatical errors and awkward phrasing. Try to use simpler, clearer sentences and avoid redundancy. Also, capitalize 'Four Seasons' only if referring to the season names as proper nouns, and be careful with subject-verb agreement and word choice.

範例: I live in the north of Vietnam, which has four distinct seasons. For example, summers are very hot and scorching, while winters are cool and breezy.

建議: Your answer is somewhat unclear and incomplete, especially the last sentence. Avoid vague phrases like 'suggest the summer' and incomplete thoughts. Try to organize your ideas clearly and use linking words to connect your points.

範例: I prefer hot weather because I feel more energetic during summer. For instance, I enjoy going to the beach and hanging out with my friends. In contrast, cold mornings make me want to stay in bed.

建議: Your answer addresses the question but has grammatical errors and unclear expressions, such as 'if I have the truth' and 'release unpleasant adults'. Use correct phrases and vocabulary, and clarify your points with specific examples.

範例: I prefer dry weather because wet weather makes the walls damp and harder to clean. Also, dampness can cause unpleasant smells in the house.

建議: Your answer is clear and relevant but contains some grammatical mistakes and awkward phrasing. Use correct sentence structures and avoid redundancy. Also, use linking words to improve coherence.

範例: I check the weather forecast every day before going out, especially before school, to decide if I need an umbrella. I also check it more carefully before long trips to prepare better.

建議: Your answer has good ideas but contains errors and unclear phrases like 'lose their habits' and 'depriving the accommodations'. Use accurate vocabulary and clarify your points with specific examples.

範例: Climate change has affected agriculture because extreme heat and wind damage crops. Also, rising sea levels have forced people living in coastal cities to move.

建議: Your answer is incomplete and contains several grammatical errors and awkward expressions such as 'harbor a dreamed' and 'as smooth year to be'. Make sure to complete your sentences and use correct phrases. Also, provide clear reasons and examples.

範例: I enjoy traveling to places with different climates. For example, I dream of visiting Paris in winter to see the first snowfall and celebrate Christmas. Experiencing different weather helps me learn more about the world.

× we witnessed Four Seasons in a year

✓ we witness four seasons in a year

The verb 'witnessed' is in past tense, but the context suggests a habitual action, so present tense 'witness' is appropriate. Also, 'Four Seasons' should be lowercase 'four seasons' as it is a common noun phrase. 'Seasons' is plural and correctly used here.

× the weather seems to be really scorching and heating

✓ the weather seems to be really scorching and hot

'Heating' is a verb or gerund and is incorrectly used as an adjective here. The correct adjective to describe temperature is 'hot'.

× it is a contrast situations where the weather is really breezy and cold

✓ it is a contrasting situation where the weather is really breezy and cold

'Situations' is plural but the sentence refers to a single contrast, so 'situation' should be singular. Also, 'contrast' should be the adjective form 'contrasting' to modify 'situation'.

× I feel more motivated to go to the beach and hang out with my friend

✓ I feel more motivated to go to the beach and hang out with my friends

'Friend' should be plural 'friends' to match the common expression of hanging out with multiple friends or at least to be consistent with general usage.

× Moreover, I can beat the hot by taking.

✓ Moreover, I can beat the heat by taking measures.

The phrase 'beat the hot' is incorrect; the correct expression is 'beat the heat'. Also, the sentence is incomplete; it needs an object after 'taking', such as 'measures' or 'precautions'.

× if I have the truth I think I would prefer dry weather

✓ if I tell the truth I think I would prefer dry weather

'Have the truth' is incorrect; the correct phrase is 'tell the truth'. This is an idiomatic expression meaning to be honest.

× I find it more uncomfortable in under wet weather

✓ I find it more uncomfortable under wet weather

'In under' is redundant; only one preposition is needed. 'Under' is the correct preposition to describe conditions like weather.

× making the house more harder to clean

✓ making the house harder to clean

'More harder' is incorrect because 'harder' is already a comparative adjective. Using 'more' with a comparative adjective is redundant.

× sometimes it also release unpleasant adults

✓ sometimes it also releases unpleasant odors

'Adults' is incorrect here; the intended word is 'odors'. Also, the verb should be 'releases' to agree with singular subject 'it'.

× I will check the weather in order to know should I bring the umbrella or not

✓ I will check the weather in order to know whether I should bring an umbrella or not

The phrase 'know should I bring' is incorrect; it should be 'know whether I should bring'. Also, 'the umbrella' should be 'an umbrella' as it is not a specific umbrella.

× preparing enough would make the journey more smoother

✓ preparing enough would make the journey smoother

'More smoother' is incorrect because 'smoother' is already a comparative adjective. Using 'more' with a comparative adjective is redundant.

× climate change has taken a toll on the agriculture

✓ climate change has taken a toll on agriculture

'Agriculture' is an uncountable noun and does not need the definite article 'the' here.

× farmers usually lose their habits due to the consistently scorching weather or breezy weather

✓ farmers usually lose their crops due to the consistently scorching or breezy weather

'Lose their habits' is incorrect; the intended meaning is likely 'lose their crops'. 'Habits' refers to behaviors, not something lost due to weather.

× it also leads to the rising level, the rising sea levels

✓ it also leads to rising sea levels

'The rising level, the rising sea levels' is redundant and awkward. The correct phrase is 'rising sea levels' without 'the' or repetition.

× depriving the accommodations of people who lived in the coastal cities

✓ depriving the homes of people who live in coastal cities

'Accommodations' is not the correct word here; 'homes' is more appropriate. Also, 'people who lived' should be 'people who live' to maintain present tense consistency.

× I've always harbor a dreamed of visiting Paris one day in the winter

✓ I've always harbored a dream of visiting Paris one day in the winter

'Harbor' should be past participle 'harbored' to match 'I've always'. 'Dreamed' is a verb; the noun form 'dream' is needed here.

× enjoy the Christmas as smooth year to be

✓ enjoy Christmas as a smooth year to be

'The Christmas' is incorrect; 'Christmas' is a proper noun and does not need 'the'. Also, 'smooth year to be' is awkward; it should be 'a smooth year to come' or 'a smooth year ahead'.

× Moreover, travelling to cities with different weather patterns helps me to broaden my.

✓ Moreover, travelling to cities with different weather patterns helps me to broaden my horizons.

The sentence is incomplete; 'broaden my' needs an object such as 'horizons' to complete the thought.