天气— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Make the answer clearer and grammatically correct. Start with a direct topic sentence describing typical weather, then give one or two specific contrasting details using linking words. Avoid vague or incorrect phrases.

範例: The weather in my city is very varied. For example, winters can be quite cold, while in summer temperatures sometimes exceed 40°C, but most of the year it is pleasantly warm.

建議: Answer directly and complete the thought. State your preference clearly, give one reason, and avoid hesitations or repetitions. Keep it to one or two sentences.

範例: I prefer cold weather because I enjoy staying indoors and finding cold weather more comfortable for sleeping and relaxing.

建議: Give a clear preference with specific reasons and clean up unclear phrases. Use linking words to connect ideas and mention one or two concrete activities that suit dry weather.

範例: I prefer dry weather because it is better for outdoor activities; for instance, I can go running or camping without worrying about rain.

建議: This answer is reasonably clear but needs smoother phrasing and slightly more detail. Begin with a direct statement of frequency, then briefly explain why you check and how it helps your plans.

範例: Yes, I check the weather every morning using a weather app. I look at today's and tomorrow's forecast so I can decide what to wear and plan any outdoor activities.

建議: Give a clear opinion and support it with specific, relevant examples. Use accurate vocabulary (e.g., 'light pollution', 'extreme weather') and avoid unclear or incorrect phrases. Use linking words to structure the response.

範例: Climate change has caused more extreme weather patterns and poorer air quality. For example, summers are hotter and there are more storms, and increased air pollution now makes it harder to see the stars at night.

建議: Structure the answer: state your preference clearly, give reasons and a brief contrast (visit vs live). Avoid unclear sentences and repetition. Use linking words to connect ideas.

範例: Yes, I would like to visit cities with different climates to experience new weather and cultures, but I would prefer those visits to be temporary rather than moving there permanently because climate affects daily life.

× The city I'm in as a very divorced weather such as in winter it could be cold and somewhat it goes beyond 40°C but most of the time or we can say it is very enjoyable and warm full weather.

✓ The city I'm in has very varied weather. In winter it can be cold and sometimes it goes beyond 40°C, but most of the time it is enjoyable and warm.

Student used incorrect adjectives and awkward phrasing ('divorced weather', 'warm full weather') and wrong verb 'as'. Corrected to 'has very varied weather' to convey variability. Changed 'could' to 'can' for general facts, 'somewhat it goes beyond' to 'sometimes it goes beyond' for adverb use, and removed redundancy. Suggestion: use common collocations like 'varied weather', 'it can be cold', 'sometimes it reaches 40°C'.

× I prefer cold weather because I'm a home person and I I. Sorry Sir, I could not answer that.

✓ I prefer cold weather because I'm a homebody. Sorry, I could not answer that earlier.

Original has repetition ('I I') and awkward phrase 'a home person'. Replaced with 'homebody' (idiomatic noun). Added 'earlier' to make apology coherent. Suggestion: avoid repetition, use idiomatic expressions and complete the apology clause.

× I prefer dry weather rather than wet because I feel dryness is better and it is very good for going out running or camping drive with a swimming per portion. Very bad.

✓ I prefer dry weather rather than wet because I feel dryness is better; it is better for going out, running, camping, or swimming. The wet weather can be unpleasant.

The sentence had incorrect word choices and awkward fragments ('dryness', 'camping drive with a swimming per portion', 'Very bad'). Replaced with natural nouns/verbs and a coherent final clause. Suggestion: list activities clearly and use simple adjectives like 'unpleasant' instead of fragmented 'Very bad'.

× Yes, I do have a habit of checking weather forecasts, especially when I wake up in the morning. I do check the weather application, what's the weather today and what gonna be tomorrow and prepare for my rest of the plan for a day.

✓ Yes, I have a habit of checking weather forecasts, especially when I wake up in the morning. I check a weather app to see the weather today and what will happen tomorrow so I can prepare the rest of my plans for the day.

Redundant 'do have' simplified to 'have'. 'Weather application' replaced by 'weather app'. 'What gonna be tomorrow' is ungrammatical; corrected to 'what will happen tomorrow'. 'Prepare for my rest of the plan for a day' revised to 'prepare the rest of my plans for the day'. Suggestion: use 'will' for future predictions and 'prepare' with object 'plans'.

× When I was a child, I could secretly the star at the night, but now that I do barely see any stars and with a pattern has been changed. Yeah, it has drastically changed, whether due to the climate change.

✓ When I was a child, I could see the stars at night, but now I can barely see any, and the pattern has changed. Yes, it has changed drastically, probably due to climate change.

'Could secretly the star' is ungrammatical; corrected to 'could see the stars'. 'At the night' -> 'at night'. 'Do barely see' -> 'can barely see'. 'With a pattern has been changed' -> 'and the pattern has changed'. 'Whether due to the climate change' corrected to 'probably due to climate change'. Suggestion: use 'could' for past ability, 'can barely' for present difficulty, and 'probably' to indicate uncertainty.

× Yes, I do like to visit the different places with new weathers and culture, but we are only for a touristic proportion or a new experience rather than to choose to live there. I do want some sentence, but not in the weather. I do feel that weather is really important to our living.

✓ Yes, I like to visit different places with new climates and cultures, but only for tourism or a new experience rather than to live there. I would want to live somewhere for other reasons, not just the weather. I do feel that weather is really important to our lives.

Used incorrect nouns ('weathers', 'touristic proportion') and awkward phrasing. Replaced 'weathers' with 'climates', 'touristic proportion' with 'tourism', and clarified intended meaning. 'Some sentence' was unclear; changed to 'want to live somewhere for other reasons'. 'Our living' -> 'our lives'. Suggestion: use 'climate' for general weather patterns and 'tourism' for travel; keep sentences clear and concise.