零食— Part 1 評分報告

建議: 回答较为直接，但表达重复（"in the afternoon"出现两次），且缺少连接词使句子显得不够流畅。建议避免重复，使用连接词使表达更自然。

範例: I usually eat snacks in the afternoon because I get hungry then, and I have supper quite late.

建議: 回答清晰且直接，但可以通过增加连接词和具体原因使表达更丰富。建议使用连接词连接观点和原因，增加细节。

範例: I don't think eating snacks is healthy because I usually choose cookies or chips, which contain a lot of sugar and fat.

建議: 回答表达基本清楚，但语法和用词不够准确（"board school"应为"boarding school"，"approach snacks"不自然）。建议使用正确词汇并调整表达。

範例: No, I didn't often eat snacks when I was young because I studied at a boarding school and had limited access to snacks.

建議: 回答内容丰富，但句子较长且缺少连接词，导致表达不够流畅。建议使用连接词分隔句子，使表达更自然。

範例: I like to eat cookies, biscuits, and chips because they are crispy. However, I know they are not healthy, so I'm trying to change my snack choices.

× I don't think so because I prefer to have cookies or chips as my snack and it's not healthy.

✓ I don't think so because I prefer to have cookies or chips as my snacks and they're not healthy.

这里'snack'应该用复数形式'snacks'，因为前面提到了多种零食。名词复数形式用于表示多样或多件事物。

× No, I didn't because I was studying in a board school and I don't have that much chance to approach snacks.

✓ No, I didn't because I was studying in a boarding school and I didn't have that much chance to have snacks.

这里'board school'应为'boarding school'，是拼写错误；另外，句子时态应保持一致，描述过去的情况时，'don't have'应改为过去式'didn't have'，'approach snacks'表达不自然，改为'have snacks'更合适。

× No, I didn't because I was studying in a board school and I don't have that much chance to approach snacks.

✓ No, I didn't because I was studying in a boarding school and I didn't have that much chance to have snacks.

'approach snacks'中的' approach'用法不当，'approach'通常指接近某人或某物，不用于吃零食，应该用'have'来表达吃零食的意思。