零食— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Your answer is generally clear but a bit repetitive and could be more concise. Try to avoid repeating the same idea and use linking words to make your answer more coherent. Also, use more varied vocabulary instead of repeating 'prefer' and 'snacks'.

範例: I usually have snacks in the afternoon after returning from university. At that time, I enjoy eating homemade French fries or biscuits, which are my favorite snack choices.

建議: Your answer has grammatical errors and is somewhat unclear. Try to use correct sentence structures and avoid repetition. Also, explain why you think the snacks are healthy with more specific reasons.

範例: Honestly, I think my snacks are healthy because the French fries are homemade using fresh ingredients, and the biscuits I buy come from a reputable bakery that uses quality materials.

建議: There are several grammatical mistakes and unclear expressions. Use correct verb forms and clearer explanations. Also, avoid vague phrases like 'striving' and 'large people'.

範例: Yes, I often ate snacks when I was young because children usually feel hungrier than adults, so I preferred to eat snacks to satisfy my hunger.

建議: Your answer is confusing and contains many errors and unclear words like 'snakes', 'discourse', and 'cookery'. Please use correct vocabulary and sentence structure. Clearly list your favorite snacks with proper explanations.

範例: I like many snacks, but my favorites are homemade French fries made by my mother and biscuits that are baked at home. These snacks are delicious and comforting to me.

× Well to be honest I believe snacks is healthy food for me because the French fry that I eat as a as a food item of my snacks that are healthy because it is homemade and the biscuits that I buy from bakery that is very well known and healthy.

✓ Well to be honest I believe snacks are healthy food for me because the French fries that I eat as a food item of my snacks are healthy because they are homemade and the biscuits that I buy from a bakery are very well known and healthy.

The word 'snacks' is plural, so the verb should be 'are' instead of 'is'. Also, 'French fry' should be plural 'French fries' to match the context. Similarly, 'biscuits' is plural, so the verb should be 'are'. Using correct singular/plural forms ensures subject-verb agreement and clarity.

× Yes, I ate snacks when I are young because young people usually have more hunger or they feel striving compared the large people or older men.

✓ Yes, I ate snacks when I was young because young people usually feel hungrier or more hungry compared to adults or older men.

The phrase 'I are young' is incorrect; the past tense of 'to be' for 'I' is 'was'. Also, 'have more hunger' is better expressed as 'feel hungrier'. 'Compared the large people' is incorrect; it should be 'compared to adults' or 'older men'. Correct past tense and comparative forms improve sentence accuracy.

× So when I are young I prefer to eat snacks.

✓ So when I was young I preferred to eat snacks.

The phrase 'I are young' is incorrect; it should be 'I was young' in past tense. Also, since the time is past, 'prefer' should be changed to past tense 'preferred' to maintain tense consistency.

× There are many snakes items that I like to eat, one of them is French fry and it's mainly homemade French fry that made by my mother.

✓ There are many snack items that I like to eat, one of them is French fries and they're mainly homemade French fries made by my mother.

The word 'snakes' is a misspelling; it should be 'snack'. 'French fry' should be plural 'French fries' to match the context. Also, 'it's' should be 'they're' to agree with plural 'French fries'. Correct plural forms and spelling improve clarity.

× And secondly, I love to eat discourse specifically cooking or cooking at home, biscuits or cook or cookery.

✓ And secondly, I love to eat biscuits, especially homemade biscuits cooked at home.

The original sentence is unclear and contains incorrect words like 'discourse', 'cook', and 'cookery' used improperly. Replacing with 'biscuits, especially homemade biscuits cooked at home' clarifies the meaning and corrects pronoun and word usage.