耐心— Part 1 評分報告

建議: 回答不够自然且语法错误较多，表达不清晰。建议简化句子结构，直接回答问题，并用连词连接支持细节。

範例: Yes, I consider myself a patient person because I try to solve difficult problems step by step. However, I sometimes lose patience when others do not make an effort.

建議: 回答内容重复且语法混乱，表达不连贯。建议用简洁句子表达具体原因，并使用连接词使句子流畅。

範例: I feel impatient when I have to repeat myself many times, especially if the other person does not seem to understand me.

建議: 回答不够清晰，语法和词汇使用不准确。建议直接表达感受，并用具体例子支持观点。

範例: I find it challenging to work on something for a long time, but I believe that putting in more effort can lead to great results.

建議: 回答较为完整，但有语法错误。建议注意动词形式和句子结构，使表达更自然。

範例: Yes, definitely. As an environmental design student, I have to build digital models using 3D software like Rhino, which requires a lot of patience to handle the details.

建議: 回答内容不够相关且表达混乱。建议直接回答问题，并用具体例子说明耐心的变化。

範例: Actually, I think I am more patient now than when I was a child. For example, I used to get bored easily, but now I can focus on tasks for longer periods.

× When I facing some difficult question, I may be a patient person that I try to learn it 1 by 1 and divide it into step that I can solve it.

✓ When I am facing some difficult questions, I may be a patient person who tries to learn them one by one and divide them into steps so that I can solve them.

动词后面缺少正确的 -ing 形式，应该用现在进行时 "am facing"。另外，名词复数形式和关系代词使用也需要调整。

× When I facing some difficult question, I may be a patient person that I try to learn it 1 by 1 and divide it into step that I can solve it.

✓ When I am facing some difficult questions, I may be a patient person who tries to learn them one by one and divide them into steps so that I can solve them.

“question”和“step”应使用复数形式，因为这里指的是多个问题和步骤。

× But when it come from that I meet a person that she always try.

✓ But when it comes to meeting a person who always tries.

“come from that”用法错误，应改为“comes to”。关系代词和动词形式也需调整。

× But when it come from that I meet a person that she always try.

✓ But when it comes to meeting a person who always tries.

第三人称单数动词“come”和“try”应加 -s，变为“comes”和“tries”。

× Oh uh for example if my mom keeps asking me the sentence that I once spoken and I had to repeat it for her once and once time and ever feel like she didn't understand me, he cannot comprehend what I was.

✓ Oh, for example, if my mom keeps asking me the sentence that I once spoke and I have to repeat it for her many times and I feel like she doesn't understand me, she cannot comprehend what I said.

“spoken”应改为过去式“spoke”，时态和人称代词错误需纠正。

× Oh uh for example if my mom keeps asking me the sentence that I once spoken and I had to repeat it for her once and once time and ever feel like she didn't understand me, he cannot comprehend what I was.

✓ Oh, for example, if my mom keeps asking me the sentence that I once spoke and I have to repeat it for her many times and I feel like she doesn't understand me, she cannot comprehend what I said.

代词“he”错误，应为“she”，保持与“mom”一致。

× Oh uh for example if my mom keeps asking me the sentence that I once spoken and I had to repeat it for her once and once time and ever feel like she didn't understand me, he cannot comprehend what I was.

✓ Oh, for example, if my mom keeps asking me the sentence that I once spoke and I have to repeat it for her many times and I feel like she doesn't understand me, she cannot comprehend what I said.

时态不一致，需用现在时态描述习惯动作。

× I think it is a quite challenging 'cause when I have to spend a lot of fine time in one thing, it means it help me to put more effort on it and it also means it may be welcomed with a great.

✓ I think it is quite challenging because when I have to spend a lot of time on one thing, it helps me to put more effort into it and it also means it may be rewarded greatly.

“a quite”应为“quite”，“fine time”应为“time”，“help”应为“helps”，介词和表达也需调整。

× I think it is a quite challenging 'cause when I have to spend a lot of fine time in one thing, it means it help me to put more effort on it and it also means it may be welcomed with a great.

✓ I think it is quite challenging because when I have to spend a lot of time on one thing, it helps me to put more effort into it and it also means it may be rewarded greatly.

介词“in”应改为“on”，短语“put effort on”应为“put effort into”，表达更准确。

× As a student studying environmental design, I have to building digital model using the 3D machine app like Rhino that require a lot of patience to deal with the detail.

✓ As a student studying environmental design, I have to build digital models using 3D software like Rhino that require a lot of patience to deal with the details.

“have to building”应为“have to build”，动词不定式形式错误。

× As a student studying environmental design, I have to building digital model using the 3D machine app like Rhino that require a lot of patience to deal with the detail.

✓ As a student studying environmental design, I have to build digital models using 3D software like Rhino that require a lot of patience to deal with the details.

“model”和“detail”应使用复数形式，因为通常是多个模型和细节。

× As a student studying environmental design, I have to building digital model using the 3D machine app like Rhino that require a lot of patience to deal with the detail.

✓ As a student studying environmental design, I have to build digital models using 3D software like Rhino that require a lot of patience to deal with the details.

“using the 3D machine app”表达不准确，应为“using 3D software”。

× Actually I think not. When I was child my dad told me once that I I was sitting in the staircase with my twin sister just watching a pair of shoes for just like 5 hours and burned out with the short video.

✓ Actually, I don't think so. When I was a child, my dad told me once that I was sitting on the staircase with my twin sister just watching a pair of shoes for about 5 hours and got burned out from watching short videos.

“was child”应为“was a child”，动词时态和表达需调整。

× Actually I think not. When I was child my dad told me once that I I was sitting in the staircase with my twin sister just watching a pair of shoes for just like 5 hours and burned out with the short video.

✓ Actually, I don't think so. When I was a child, my dad told me once that I was sitting on the staircase with my twin sister just watching a pair of shoes for about 5 hours and got burned out from watching short videos.

“in the staircase”应为“on the staircase”，介词使用错误。