耐心— Part 1 評分報告

建議: 回答中存在语法错误和表达不自然的问题，建议简化句子结构，避免重复和冗余，使用更准确的词汇表达耐心的概念。

範例: I'm not a very patient person. I often get frustrated at work when things don't go as planned. However, I am trying to be more patient because it's important for my job.

建議: 回答缺乏连贯性和清晰的表达，建议使用连接词使句子更流畅，并具体说明让你不耐烦的具体情况。

範例: I feel impatient when I have to repeat the same task over and over again. Also, when people frequently change plans, it disrupts my work and makes me feel frustrated.

建議: 回答表达不够清晰，建议简化句子结构，使用连接词，并具体说明长时间做事时的感受和原因。

範例: If a task takes a long time but requires skills and leads to good results, I feel positive about it. However, if it's just repetitive work without meaning, I get bored and impatient.

建議: 回答中有语法错误和重复，建议直接回答问题并用具体例子说明为什么数学专业需要耐心。

範例: Although I am still a student, my major is mathematics, which requires a lot of patience. I need to carefully work with numbers and functions, so being patient is essential.

建議: 回答表达混乱，建议简化句子，明确比较现在和小时候的耐心差异，并说明原因。

範例: Yes, I am more patient now than when I was a child. I used to make small mistakes, like miscalculating numbers, but now I avoid these errors and work more efficiently.

× I'm always been very frustrated during the work if something is wasn't in my plane that goes let me feel very impatient.

✓ I've always been very frustrated during work if something wasn't in my plan that makes me feel very impatient.

这里的时态错误，'I'm always been' 应该用现在完成时 'I've always been'，表示从过去到现在的持续状态。

× if something is wasn't in my plane that goes let me feel very impatient.

✓ if something wasn't in my plan that makes me feel very impatient.

'plane' 应为 'plan'，且句子结构混乱，'that goes let me feel' 应改为 'that makes me feel'，更符合英语表达习惯。

× But now I'm want to let myself to be more patient because it's really needed in our work and jobs so.

✓ But now I want to let myself be more patient because it's really needed in our work and jobs.

'I'm want' 是错误的，应该用 'I want'，动词 'want' 不需要助动词 'am'。另外，'let myself to be' 中 'to' 不需要。

× Well, something need to repeated every time and do the same thing.

✓ Well, something needs to be repeated every time and do the same thing.

主语 'something' 是单数，谓语动词应使用单数形式 'needs'。

× Well, something need to repeated every time and do the same thing.

✓ Well, something needs to be repeated every time and do the same thing.

'repeated' 作为过去分词，需与助动词 'be' 连用，构成被动语态 'be repeated'。

× and also some people just always disturb my plane and something need to vary all the time.

✓ and also some people always disturb my plan and something needs to vary all the time.

'plane' 应为 'plan'，且 'need' 应与单数主语 'something' 一致，改为 'needs'。

× and also some people just always disturb my plane and something need to vary all the time.

✓ and also some people always disturb my plan and something needs to vary all the time.

同上，'something' 是单数，谓语动词应为 'needs'。

× I will feel very impatient as that situation.

✓ I will feel very impatient in that situation.

介词使用错误，'as' 应改为 'in'，表示在某种情况下。

× Well, if this thing needs to long time input, but it needs our skills and it will have a very good output, I will be very good feeling very good about it.

✓ Well, if this thing needs a long time input, and it needs our skills and will have a very good output, I will feel very good about it.

'needs to long time input' 中缺少冠词，应为 'needs a long time input'。另外，'I will be very good feeling' 结构不正确，应为 'I will feel very good'。

× Well, if this thing needs to long time input, but it needs our skills and it will have a very good output, I will be very good feeling very good about it.

✓ Well, if this thing needs a long time input and it needs our skills and will have a very good output, I will feel very good about it.

'if' 和 'but' 连用不合适，应去掉 'but'，用 'and' 连接句子。

× But if something just spend a lot of time but just repeating the same thing, it's not so meaningful I think.

✓ But if something just spends a lot of time just repeating the same thing, it's not so meaningful, I think.

主语 'something' 是单数，谓语动词应为 'spends'。

× Since now I am a still student but my major is mathematics so I need to be very patient.

✓ Since now I am still a student but my major is mathematics, so I need to be very patient.

'a still student' 中 'still' 位置错误，应为 'still a student'。

× Very patient you know I need to do all the wax associated with the number and functions.

✓ Very patient, you know, I need to do all the work associated with numbers and functions.

'wax' 应为 'work'，'number' 应为复数 'numbers'。

× So patient being patient is really needed.

✓ So being patient is really needed.

'So patient being patient' 结构重复且不正确，应简化为 'So being patient'。

× Of course, as my getting older, the small mistakes like I want to have in this good time, like just mistaken the numbers.

✓ Of course, as I get older, the small mistakes like wanting to have a good time, like just mistaking the numbers,

'my getting older' 应为 'I get older'，动词时态和主语错误。

× Now I will not have this kind of mistakes.

✓ Now I will not make this kind of mistakes.

'have mistakes' 用法不当，正确表达应为 'make mistakes'。

× Now I will not have this kind of mistakes.

✓ Now I will not make this kind of mistake.

'this kind of' 后面接单数名词 'mistake'。

× These are very low level and I will avoid it and let me be more efficiency in the work.

✓ These are very low level, and I will avoid them and be more efficient in my work.

'avoid it' 应为 'avoid them'，因为 'these' 指复数。'let me be more efficiency' 应为 'be more efficient'，形容词形式。