耐心— Part 1 評分報告

建議: 回答时表达不够自然，句子结构混乱，且有语法错误。建议简化句子，直接回答问题，并用连词连接细节，使表达更流畅。

範例: I think I am patient in some situations, especially with people I know well. However, when I talk to strangers, I tend to feel impatient and want to finish the conversation quickly.

建議: 回答中有语法错误和表达不清的问题，建议用更准确的句子表达原因，并使用连接词使句子连贯。

範例: I feel impatient mainly because I get anxious when talking to strangers. Since I'm not very outgoing, this anxiety makes me want to end the conversation quickly.

建議: 回答不够连贯，语法错误较多，表达不清晰。建议先给出明确的观点，再用具体细节支持，注意语法和词汇的准确使用。

範例: It depends on the task. If I have to do something repetitive or boring at work, I usually feel demotivated and a bit depressed after a while.

建議: 回答中有重复和语法错误，表达不够自然。建议简洁明了地回答问题，并用具体例子支持观点。

範例: Yes, as a student, I need to be patient because studying involves tasks like reading and writing, which can be challenging and require persistence.

建議: 回答中出现了不相关或错误的词汇（APHD），表达不清晰。建议用正确的词汇表达对比，并用具体经历支持观点。

範例: Definitely, I am more patient now than when I was a child. In the past, I was easily frustrated, but after spending many hours studying and practicing reading and writing, I have become more patient.

× If I meet someone I don't know or strangers, I'm not a patient per person and I just want to end that conversation quickly.

✓ If I meet someone I don't know or strangers, I'm not a patient person and I just want to end that conversation quickly.

这里的错误是“per person”应为“person”，因为“patient person”是固定搭配，表示“有耐心的人”。“per person”意思是“每个人”，不符合语境。

× Well it's maybe because the anxiety because I will.

✓ Well, maybe it's because of anxiety.

句中“because I will”不完整且不合适，应去掉。并且“because the anxiety”应改为“because of anxiety”，因为“because of”后接名词表示原因。

× I'm not really a people person so when I talk to someone I don't know I will feel anxious so that that will make me more impatient.

✓ I'm not really a people person, so when I talk to someone I don't know, I feel anxious, so that makes me more impatient.

“people person”是固定表达，表示“喜欢与人交往的人”，这里用法正确。句中“will feel”和“will make”时态不一致，改为一般现在时更符合习惯表达。

× If I have to do something I don't like or something repetitive task on at work, I maybe feel demotivated and depressed if I'm do something.

✓ If I have to do something I don't like or some repetitive tasks at work, I may feel demotivated and depressed if I'm doing something.

“something repetitive task”应改为“some repetitive tasks”，因为“task”是可数名词，需用复数形式。“maybe”应改为“may”表示可能性。“if I'm do something”语法错误，应改为“if I'm doing something”。

× If I have to do something I don't like or something repetitive task on at work, I maybe feel demotivated and depressed if I'm do something.

✓ If I have to do something I don't like or some repetitive tasks at work, I may feel demotivated and depressed if I'm doing something.

“task on at work”中“on”多余，应去掉，正确用法是“tasks at work”。

× So I think it need to be patient.

✓ So I think it needs to be patient.

主语“it”是第三人称单数，谓语动词“need”应加-s，变为“needs”，以保持主谓一致。

× Well, definitely, because when I was a child I just like having an APHD.

✓ Well, definitely, because when I was a child I just liked having an ADHD.

“like”应使用过去式“liked”，因为描述过去的情况。

× Well, definitely, because when I was a child I just like having an APHD.

✓ Well, definitely, because when I was a child I just liked having ADHD.

“APHD”拼写错误，正确拼写为“ADHD”，表示注意力缺陷多动障碍。