耐心— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Your answer is clear and relevant, but try to avoid minor grammatical errors and improve sentence variety. Also, use linking words to connect your ideas more smoothly. For example, instead of repeating 'I like' and 'I tend', you could say 'I tend to be quite impatient because I prefer to get things done quickly rather than waiting around; consequently, I often find it difficult to be patient when things take too long.'

範例: I tend to be quite impatient because I prefer to get things done quickly rather than waiting around; consequently, I often find it difficult to be patient when things take too long. For instance, I usually take immediate action to see results instead of delaying decisions.

建議: Your answer is brief and somewhat repetitive. Try to provide more specific reasons and use linking words to make your response more coherent. Also, watch for subject-verb agreement and sentence structure.

範例: I feel impatient because I prefer to take control of situations rather than waiting passively. Therefore, I usually make quick decisions and take necessary actions to resolve issues promptly.

建議: Your answer has good content but contains a confusing phrase ('I don't can't') and some grammatical errors. Try to express your ideas clearly and avoid contradictions. Use linking words to contrast your ideas effectively.

範例: I don't mind doing the same task for a long time because it shows consistency and dedication. However, I find it hard to concentrate on monotonous activities as they bore me quickly.

建議: Your answer is somewhat unclear and contains filler words like 'uh'. Try to organise your ideas more clearly and avoid unnecessary hesitation. Use linking words to connect your points and improve fluency.

範例: I am currently a student, so I don't have a job that requires patience. However, when studying, I try not to procrastinate, especially with difficult subjects, and I aim to learn and solve problems quickly.

建議: Your answer is thoughtful but could be more concise and better structured. Use linking words to show contrast and cause-effect relationships clearly. Also, avoid repeating similar ideas.

範例: I wouldn't say I am more patient now than when I was a child. Although my parents were strict and I had to be patient then, gaining more freedom as I grew up has made me less patient because I prefer to do things my own way.

× This means I often find it difficult to be patient when things takes too long.

✓ This means I often find it difficult to be patient when things take too long.

The subject 'things' is plural, so the verb should be 'take' instead of 'takes' to agree in number. This is a singular and plural issue.

× I immediately jump into my decision and I'll take the course of action which are needed.

✓ I immediately jump into my decision and I'll take the course of action which is needed.

The phrase 'which are needed' refers to 'course of action' which is singular, so the verb should be 'is' instead of 'are'. This is an issue with verb agreement in the present participle form.

× However, I don't can't.

✓ However, I can't.

The phrase 'I don't can't' is incorrect because it combines two negatives improperly. The correct form is 'I can't'. This is an incorrect conjunction use.

× it actually shows how consistent and dedicated you are on the work you do.

✓ it actually shows how consistent and dedicated you are in the work you do.

The correct preposition to use with 'dedicated' in this context is 'in' rather than 'on'. This is an incorrect use of prepositions.

× while I study I don't uh, procrastinate on my courses or the subject which I feel difficult to be studied later on.

✓ while I study I don't uh, procrastinate on my courses or the subjects which I find difficult to study later on.

The pronoun 'which' refers to 'subjects' (plural), so the verb should be plural 'find' and the phrase 'to be studied' should be 'to study' for correct usage. This is an incorrect use of pronouns.