耐心— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Try to give a more natural and concise answer. Avoid saying 'I don't have any patience in my life' as it sounds unnatural. Instead, you can say 'I tend to be impatient, especially when I am eager to do something.' Also, avoid redundancy and keep your answer within 5 sentences.

範例: No, I tend to be impatient, especially when I am eager to do something. For example, I get restless when I have to wait for a long time to start an activity I enjoy.

建議: Your answer is unclear and lacks coherence. Use linking words to connect your ideas logically. Be specific about situations that make you impatient and avoid vague phrases like 'many more things'. Also, try to structure your answer with a clear topic sentence and supporting details.

範例: I feel impatient during rush hours because of heavy traffic. Also, when I am late for playing games or meeting my friends, I get quite restless. These situations make me feel anxious and eager to reach my destination quickly.

建議: Your answer is understandable but repetitive. Try to avoid repeating words like 'too' and 'boring'. Use linking words such as 'for example' or 'because' to make your answer more coherent. Also, try to use a wider range of vocabulary to express your feelings.

範例: I usually feel bored when I have to do something for a long time, especially reading. For example, I find it exhausting to read for hours, so I prefer listening to others explain the material instead.

建議: Your answer is a bit confusing and contains grammatical errors. Try to answer directly and clearly. Use correct tenses and avoid filler phrases like 'by the way'. Also, explain why patience is important for your future job.

範例: I am currently a student, but I believe that when I start working, I will need to be patient. Patience is important because it helps me handle challenges at work and maintain good relationships with my colleagues.

建議: Your answer has grammatical mistakes and is unclear. Use the correct form 'patient' instead of 'patience' when describing yourself. Also, explain how patience has helped you with specific examples or reasons. Keep your answer concise and coherent.

範例: Yes, I am more patient now than when I was a child. I have learned that being patient helps me deal with difficult situations and teaches me important life lessons.

× I don't have any patience in my life and I am too crazy for the things that I want to do.

✓ I don't have much patience in my life and I am too crazy about the things that I want to do.

The word 'patience' is an uncountable noun, so 'much' is the correct quantifier instead of 'any' in this context. Also, the correct preposition with 'crazy' in this context is 'about' rather than 'for'.

× I am too crazy for the things that I want to do.

✓ I am too crazy about the things that I want to do.

The correct preposition to use with 'crazy' when expressing enthusiasm or strong interest is 'about', not 'for'.

× Rush hours or busy hours make me impatient and when I have to do for fun or for going to play games then or many more things it makes me impatient when I am getting late from my parents or while going to playground while traveling.

✓ Rush hours or busy hours make me impatient. Also, when I have to do things for fun or go to play games, or many other things, it makes me impatient if I am getting late from my parents or while going to the playground during traveling.

The original sentence is a run-on with unclear structure. Breaking it into shorter sentences and correcting prepositions improves clarity and grammatical correctness.

× when I am getting late from my parents or while going to playground while traveling.

✓ when I am getting late from my parents or while going to the playground during traveling.

The phrase 'going to playground' requires the definite article 'the'. Also, 'while traveling' is better expressed as 'during traveling' to indicate the time frame.

× So I just try to listen the thing listen from another people, don't try to read it.

✓ So I just try to listen to things from other people, and don't try to read it.

The verb 'listen' requires the preposition 'to'. Also, 'another people' is incorrect; 'other people' is the correct phrase.

× So I just try to listen the thing listen from another people, don't try to read it.

✓ So I just try to listen to things from other people, and don't try to read it.

'Another people' is incorrect because 'people' is plural; 'other people' is the correct plural form. Also, 'the thing listen' is ungrammatical; it should be 'listen to things'.

× By the way, I am a student but when I will be at the age of doing job I will I will be patient for my job because it affects my job and also my personality in my office or something else.

✓ By the way, I am a student, but when I am at the age of doing a job, I will be patient with my job because it affects my job and also my personality in my office or elsewhere.

In English, we do not use 'will' in the 'when' clause for future time; instead, present simple is used. Also, 'doing job' should be 'doing a job'. The phrase 'patient for my job' should be 'patient with my job'. 'Something else' is vague; 'elsewhere' is more appropriate.

× Yes, I am patience and then my childhood because I feel that patience is very good thing and it gives me many life lessons or many more things also.

✓ Yes, I am more patient now than in my childhood because I feel that patience is a very good thing and it gives me many life lessons and many more things as well.

'I am patience' is incorrect; 'patient' is an adjective, so 'I am more patient' is correct. 'And then my childhood' is unclear; 'now than in my childhood' is correct for comparison. 'Very good thing' needs the article 'a'. 'Many life lessons or many more things also' is better expressed as 'many life lessons and many more things as well'.