耐心— Part 1 評分報告

建議: 回答时应更自然简洁，避免重复表达情绪不耐烦的情况。可以直接说明自己不耐心，并简要说明原因或影响。

範例: No, I am not a very patient person because I tend to get emotional easily, which sometimes affects my daily interactions.

建議: 回答中应减少语气词，表达更流畅。具体说明让你不耐烦的原因，并用连词连接句子，使表达更连贯。

範例: I feel impatient when people are rude or say mean things to me because it makes me uncomfortable and upset.

建議: 回答应更简洁，避免重复。可以直接表达感受，并说明原因或结果，使用连接词使句子更流畅。

範例: I usually feel anxious when I have to prepare for something over a long period, even though I try my best to stay positive.

建議: 回答中应注意语法准确，避免重复。可以简洁说明工作需要耐心的原因，并用连接词增强逻辑。

範例: Yes, my job in an international trading company requires patience because maintaining good communication with clients is essential.

建議: 回答应避免语气词，表达更流畅。可以直接比较现在和过去的耐心程度，并说明原因。

範例: Yes, I am more patient now than when I was younger because I have learned to control my emotions better over time.

× Yes, I was in a international trading company, so my job definitely need to be need me to be patient because we have to keep good communication with people in everyday work life.

✓ Yes, I was in an international trading company, so my job definitely needs me to be patient because we have to keep good communication with people in everyday work life.

这里的错误是冠词使用错误，'a international' 应该用 'an international'，因为 international 以元音音素开头。此外，主语是单数 'my job'，谓语动词应使用第三人称单数形式 'needs'。建议注意冠词的使用规则和主谓一致。

× Yes, I am definitely more patient now than I was maybe several years ago, umm, it was a really struggle for me to control my emotions, but now, umm, since I've learned a lot from in that and I just try to control myself better.

✓ Yes, I am definitely more patient now than I was maybe several years ago, umm, it was really a struggle for me to control my emotions, but now, umm, since I've learned a lot from that and I just try to control myself better.

句中 'a really struggle' 中 'really' 应改为形容词 'real'，且 'a struggle' 是正确搭配。'learned a lot from in that' 中 'from in' 介词重复，应去掉 'in'。建议注意形容词和副词的正确使用及介词搭配。

× Well, umm, they could be very trifle reasons in daily life.

✓ Well, umm, they could be very trifling reasons in daily life.

'trifle' 是名词或形容词，表示 '琐碎的' 应使用形容词 'trifling'。这里用来修饰 'reasons'，应使用形容词形式。建议注意形容词的正确形式。

× For example someone just umm, say something mean to me or they just don't be nice to people and they are very rude.

✓ For example, someone just, umm, says something mean to me or they just aren't nice to people and they are very rude.

'say' 应用第三人称单数形式 'says'，'don't be nice' 应改为 'aren't nice'，因为这里描述的是状态。建议注意主谓一致和动词的正确形式。

× That is not good, I know and I try to improve this to be a nice person.

✓ That is not good, I know, and I try to improve myself to be a nice person.

'improve this' 不合适，应该用反身代词 'myself' 来表示改进自己。建议注意反身代词的正确使用。