耐心— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Your answer is clear and relevant, but try to avoid redundancy and make it more concise. Also, use linking words to connect your ideas smoothly.

範例: Yes, I consider myself a patient person because my profession has taught me to take things slowly and handle tasks one at a time, which I truly appreciate.

建議: Avoid filler words like 'umm' and try to use more precise vocabulary. Also, structure your answer with a clear topic sentence followed by specific reasons using linking words.

範例: Although I am generally patient, I feel impatient when people do not value my time, as this makes me annoyed and lose my composure.

建議: Try to eliminate hesitation sounds like 'uh' and 'um'. Use linking words to connect your ideas and provide more specific feelings or reflections.

範例: I feel comfortable doing tasks for a long time because patience allows me to endure monotony; for instance, I recently polished glasses for nine hours straight without any issues.

建議: Your answer is good but can be improved by using linking words and varying vocabulary to avoid repetition.

範例: Yes, my job demands a great deal of patience since it is slow and repetitive; therefore, being skilled, patient, and polite helps me perform well.

建議: Avoid hesitation and incomplete sentences. Use linking words to connect your ideas and provide a complete conclusion.

範例: Definitely, I have become more patient over the years. Seven years ago, I was quite impatient and anxious, but since I started teaching, I have learned from children and colleagues, which has helped me improve my patience.

× I think, uh, the purpose of being a patient person is that you can do, uh, thing for a long period of time.

✓ I think, uh, the purpose of being a patient person is that you can do, uh, things for a long period of time.

The word 'thing' should be plural 'things' because it refers to doing multiple tasks or activities over a long period. Using the singular form here is incorrect as it does not match the intended meaning.

× It demands a professional to be skilled, patient and polite, and I'm able to do my job well because of being a patient person.

✓ It demands a professional to be skilled, patient, and polite, and I'm able to do my job well because I am a patient person.

The phrase 'because of being a patient person' is awkward and incorrect. It should be 'because I am a patient person' to correctly express the reason. Also, a comma is needed after 'patient' in the list for proper punctuation.

× But uh, since I started teaching, I have learned a lot from children and my colleagues and I've learned to become.

✓ But uh, since I started teaching, I have learned a lot from children and my colleagues and I've learned to become more patient.

The sentence ends abruptly with 'I've learned to become' which is incomplete. It needs an object or complement to complete the thought, such as 'more patient' to make the sentence meaningful and grammatically correct.