耐心— Part 1 評分報告

建議: 回答中语法错误较多，表达不够自然，且句子结构混乱。建议简化句子结构，直接回答问题，并用具体例子支持观点。

範例: Yes, I am a patient person because I often help my family and friends solve problems that require patience.

建議: 回答内容不清晰，表达混乱，缺乏逻辑。建议明确说明让你感到不耐烦的具体原因，并使用连词使句子连贯。

範例: I feel impatient when I am stuck in a long traffic jam because it makes me feel hot and uncomfortable.

建議: 表达不够清晰，词汇使用不当。建议用更准确的词汇描述感受，并简洁表达观点。

範例: I feel impatient when I have to do something for a long time because it is mentally exhausting.

建議: 回答中有语法错误，表达不流畅。建议直接回答问题，并用具体例子说明学习中需要耐心的情况。

範例: I am a high school student, so I don't have a job. However, studying in class requires patience, especially when listening to the teacher.

建議: 句子结构不完整，语法错误较多。建议分两部分回答，先比较现在和过去的耐心，再举例说明。

範例: Yes, I am more patient now than when I was a child. Now, I can help my friends and family solve problems that require patience.

× Yes of course I'm a patient person because I always have my family or friends to a solve all problem which requires a person patient.

✓ Yes, of course I'm a patient person because I always have my family or friends to solve all problems which require a person to be patient.

这里“problem”应为复数形式“problems”，因为指的是多个问题；“a solve”中“a”不应出现，动词“solve”不需要冠词；“requires a person patient”应改为“require a person to be patient”，动词和结构需要调整。

× Yes of course I'm a patient person because I always have my family or friends to a solve all problem which requires a person patient.

✓ Yes, of course I'm a patient person because I always have my family or friends to solve all problems which require a person to be patient.

“have my family or friends to a solve”中“to a solve”是不正确的搭配，应为“to solve”，不需要冠词“a”。

× Yes of course I'm a patient person because I always have my family or friends to a solve all problem which requires a person patient.

✓ Yes, of course I'm a patient person because I always have my family or friends to solve all problems which require a person to be patient.

“requires a person patient”中“patient”应为形容词补语，需用不定式结构“to be patient”来表达。

× My arm, uh, when I feel impatient, uh, it will uh, long time for traffic cloud. It is very, I'm very hot.

✓ My arm, uh, when I feel impatient, uh, it will take a long time in traffic jam. It is very, I'm very hot.

句子结构混乱，“long time for traffic cloud”表达不清，应为“take a long time in traffic jam”；“traffic cloud”应为“traffic jam”；“It is very, I'm very hot”表达不完整，应简化或重组。

× My arm, uh, when I feel impatient, uh, it will uh, long time for traffic cloud. It is very, I'm very hot.

✓ My arm, uh, when I feel impatient, uh, it will take a long time in traffic jam. It is very, I'm very hot.

“long time for traffic cloud”中“for”用法不当，应使用“in”表示“在交通堵塞中”；“traffic cloud”应为“traffic jam”。

× My arm, uh, when I feel impatient, uh, it will uh, long time for traffic cloud. It is very, I'm very hot.

✓ My arm, uh, when I feel impatient, uh, it will take a long time in traffic jam. I feel very hot.

“It is very, I'm very hot”表达不通顺，应改为“I feel very hot”，用正确的主语和谓语表达感受。

× MMM I feel impatient because when I have to do something for a long time, uh, it is very brain experience so I don't like it.

✓ MMM I feel impatient because when I have to do something for a long time, uh, it is a very boring experience so I don't like it.

“brain experience”是错误表达，应为“boring experience”表示“无聊的经历”。

× Well I'm a student now and studying in a high school so I don't have a job but having a say that when I study in the class we we should patient to listening.

✓ Well, I'm a student now and studying in high school so I don't have a job but I have to say that when I study in class we should be patient and listen.

“patient to listening”用法错误，应为“be patient and listen”；“in a high school”通常说“in high school”；“having a say”应为“I have to say”。

× Well I'm a student now and studying in a high school so I don't have a job but having a say that when I study in the class we we should patient to listening.

✓ Well, I'm a student now and studying in high school so I don't have a job but I have to say that when I study in class we should be patient and listen.

“should patient”缺少动词“be”，应为“should be patient”；“to listening”应改为动词原形“listen”。

× Yes, of course my child I feel impatient because I don't like do something for a long time, but now I'm feel patient because I can help my friends or family to service problem which require patience.

✓ Yes, of course when I was a child I felt impatient because I didn't like to do something for a long time, but now I feel patient because I can help my friends or family to solve problems which require patience.

“problem”应为复数“problems”；“service problem”用词错误，应为“solve problems”；“my child”应为“when I was a child”；“I'm feel”应为“I feel”。

× Yes, of course my child I feel impatient because I don't like do something for a long time, but now I'm feel patient because I can help my friends or family to service problem which require patience.

✓ Yes, of course when I was a child I felt impatient because I didn't like to do something for a long time, but now I feel patient because I can help my friends or family to solve problems which require patience.

描述过去时态时，应使用过去式“felt”和“didn't like”；“I feel impatient”应改为“I felt impatient”。

× Yes, of course my child I feel impatient because I don't like do something for a long time, but now I'm feel patient because I can help my friends or family to service problem which require patience.

✓ Yes, of course when I was a child I felt impatient because I didn't like to do something for a long time, but now I feel patient because I can help my friends or family to solve problems which require patience.

“help my friends or family to service problem”中“service”用法错误，应为“solve”；“help ... to do”结构正确。