耐心— Part 1 評分報告

建議: 回答较为自然且内容丰富，但句子较长且有些语法错误，建议简化句子结构，避免冗长，同时注意冠词和词序的正确使用。

範例: Yes, I consider myself a patient person. For instance, when I have to wait for a table at a popular restaurant, I remain calm and do not get annoyed.

建議: 回答中存在语法错误和表达不清的问题，建议加强句子连贯性，避免重复，并且注意句子完整性和逻辑性。

範例: I feel impatient when things are done inefficiently. For example, when I work in a group and some members cannot complete their tasks on time, it makes me frustrated.

建議: 回答内容较好，表达清晰，但部分词汇搭配不够准确，建议注意词汇的正确使用和句子流畅性。

範例: At first, I feel calm, but as the deadline approaches, I become anxious and frustrated. To cope, I remind myself to stay calm and focus on the task.

建議: 回答中有较多口语填充词，影响流畅性，建议减少“uh”“umm”等词汇，简化表达，并注意语法和词汇搭配。

範例: Yes, my internship at a law firm requires a lot of patience. I often check documents carefully, which can be boring but needs great attention to detail.

建議: 回答中存在语法错误和句子不完整，建议注意句子结构完整性，避免重复表达，并使用更准确的词汇。

範例: Yes, I am more patient now because I have gained experience. I focus more on details and do not get annoyed or anxious when waiting.

× From my perspective, I think I'm a quite patient person because there are many different situations in my life that I have to wait, but I never get annoyed, for example, when I have to wait for a table in the restaurant that is highly recommended by the local residents, I will not get a rush, I just stay calm.

✓ From my perspective, I think I'm quite a patient person because there are many different situations in my life where I have to wait, but I never get annoyed. For example, when I have to wait for a table in a restaurant that is highly recommended by the local residents, I will not rush; I just stay calm.

“a quite patient person”中“quite”作为副词应放在冠词“a”之后，正确顺序是“quite a patient person”。此外，句子中“get a rush”用法不当，应改为“rush”表示匆忙。句子较长，建议分句以增强表达清晰度。

× Low efficiency always makes me feel impatient and I will always get annoyed. For example, there are always some situations that I have to work in Group and finish the tasks in Group, but sometimes the fellow students cannot handle the problem in time and I so that I cannot.

✓ Low efficiency always makes me feel impatient and I always get annoyed. For example, there are always some situations where I have to work in a group and finish the tasks in the group, but sometimes the fellow students cannot handle the problem in time, so I cannot either.

句中“and I so that I cannot”结构不完整且不通顺，应改为“so I cannot either”表示“我也不能”。此外，“work in Group”应为“work in a group”，冠词缺失。

× At first I always feel peaceful, but when the deadline approaching I tend to become more anxious and frustrated because I'm worried about finishing on time. To handle this, I always remind myself of staying calm and keeping concentration and attentive so that I can finish the task.

✓ At first, I always feel peaceful, but when the deadline approaches, I tend to become more anxious and frustrated because I'm worried about finishing on time. To handle this, I always remind myself to stay calm and keep concentrated and attentive so that I can finish the task.

“when the deadline approaching”缺少动词第三人称单数形式，应为“when the deadline approaches”。“remind myself of staying calm”搭配不当，应为“remind myself to stay calm”。“keeping concentration and attentive”表达不准确，应改为“keep concentrated and attentive”。

× Uh, yes, umm, my job always requires patience because I'm now making internship in a law firm and many of my job is to check the documents and sometimes they are very boring and tedious, but also uh, need great concentration on details so I have to be very patient about it.

✓ Uh, yes, umm, my job always requires patience because I'm now doing an internship in a law firm and many of my tasks are to check documents, and sometimes they are very boring and tedious, but also need great concentration on details, so I have to be very patient about it.

“making internship”用法错误，应为“doing an internship”。“many of my job is”主谓不一致，应为“many of my tasks are”。“check the documents”中“the”不必要，改为“check documents”。

× Yes, I think I'm more patient because I have experienced many things that makes me more patient and concentrated and attentive on the things that I have to do. I pay more attention to the detail instead of being annoyed and being anxious, being frustrated by the waiting time or.

✓ Yes, I think I'm more patient because I have experienced many things that make me more patient, concentrated, and attentive on the things that I have to do. I pay more attention to the details instead of being annoyed, anxious, or frustrated by the waiting time.

“things that makes me”中“makes”应为复数形式“make”，与复数主语“things”一致。短语“being annoyed and being anxious, being frustrated”重复且不流畅，改为“being annoyed, anxious, or frustrated”更自然。最后“the detail”应为复数“the details”。