耐心— Part 1 評分報告

建議: 你的回答不够清晰，表达混乱，缺乏逻辑性。建议直接回答问题，使用简单明了的句子，并提供具体例子来支持观点。

範例: Yes, I consider myself a patient person. For instance, when I was in high school, I often helped my classmates with their homework and stayed calm even when they asked many questions.

建議: 回答不连贯，语法错误较多，表达不清楚。建议用简单句子直接说明让你不耐烦的事情，并举例说明。

範例: I feel impatient when I have to focus on difficult tasks but people keep interrupting me. For example, during important experiments, if someone talks to me, I lose concentration.

建議: 回答内容混乱，表达不清晰。建议直接表达你的感受，并用具体细节支持你的观点。

範例: When I have to do something for a long time, I usually start interested, but after a while, I feel bored and lose motivation.

建議: 回答不够连贯，语法和词汇使用不准确。建议简洁明了地说明工作是否需要耐心，并举例说明。

範例: Yes, my job requires a lot of patience. For example, I often conduct experiments that need careful attention and time.

建議: 回答非常不清楚，语法和表达错误严重。建议直接比较现在和小时候的耐心程度，并用简单句子说明原因。

範例: I am more patient now than when I was a child because I have learned to control my emotions better.

× Well, actually I think I have a passion for some.

✓ Well, actually I think I have a passion for some things.

这里的 'some' 是不完整的表达，应该加上名词 'things' 来表示一些事情。缺少名词导致句子不完整。

× where I was a 20 high school student

✓ when I was a 20-year-old high school student

'20' 作为年龄时应使用复合形容词 '20-year-old'，且 'where' 应改为 'when' 表示时间。

× I usually, uh, answer my classmates, transfer, uh, patient colleagues and they always taught me pay the vision and 10%.

✓ I usually, uh, answer my classmates and talk with patient colleagues, and they always taught me to pay attention and be patient.

句子结构混乱，缺少连词和正确的动词形式，'pay the vision and 10%' 是错误表达，应为 'pay attention and be patient'。

× Well, to be honest I think they need impatience, very difficult things.

✓ Well, to be honest I think they need patience for very difficult things.

'they' 指代不明，且 'need impatience' 用词错误，应为 'need patience'，表达耐心。

× But I think may when I do some important experiments the someone always talking with me and describe my experiments.

✓ But I think maybe when I do some important experiments, someone is always talking to me and describing my experiments.

'may' 应为 'maybe'，'the someone' 应为 'someone'，动词时态和介词使用错误，需改为 'is talking to me' 和 'describing'。

× Well, I turned on a few very interested in it, but when they found me I would always feel very bored and attractive as I was before.

✓ Well, I turned on a few times very interested in it, but when they found me I would always feel very bored and not as attracted as I was before.

句子表达不清，'turned on a few' 不合适，应为 'tried a few times'，'attractive' 用错，应为 'attracted'，且缺少否定。

× I was seeing how to do it and what I can believe it.

✓ I was seeing how to do it and what I can believe.

'believe it' 中的 'it' 多余，'believe' 后不需要宾语。

× Yes, definitely, because my neighbors are close pharmacy from they have many an experiment to do.

✓ Yes, definitely, because my neighbors are close to a pharmacy and they have many experiments to do.

'close pharmacy from' 介词使用错误，应为 'close to a pharmacy'，'many an experiment' 也错误，应为 'many experiments'。

× So I usually give the patient and to do this experiment now carefully and more patiently.

✓ So I usually am patient and do these experiments carefully and more patiently.

'give the patient' 用词错误，应为 'am patient'，'this experiment' 应为复数 'these experiments'，动词形式也需调整。

× Actually no well social age in travel and whenever you quietly cannot stay up in the child for a long time, but now you don't waste the number of staffing I'm a patient persons.

✓ Actually no, when I was a child, I couldn't stay still for a long time, but now I don't waste time and I'm a patient person.

句子结构混乱，'social age in travel' 无意义，'you quietly cannot stay up in the child' 表达错误，应改为 'when I was a child, I couldn't stay still'，'patient persons' 应为单数 'patient person'。