耐心— Part 1 評分報告
對話
Part 1
考官
Are you a patient person?
考生
Yeah, I think I'm a patient person because last year I volunteered at a retirement home, so I get along well with the old peoples there and I do things for them. So I think I'm a patient person.
考官
What is it that makes you feel impatient?
考生
Well, sometimes the elderly people may be a little stubborn, for example, when the meal is ready but they don't want to eat it, they will lose their temper. So I have to comfort them and buy things for them. So I think that makes me feel.
考官
How do you feel when you have to do something for a long time?
考生
Wow that's a good question. Just like I said before, I worked there for two months. Although sometimes I feel I felt impatient too. But to sum up, I learned a lot from that and umm I learned how to care others so I think it's beneficial.
考官
Does your job require you to be patient?
考生
Yes, of course, although I didn't work there now. But my study now need me to become more patient because I need to research a lot of data and I also need to collect a lot of photos, so I need to be patient.
考官
Are you more patient now than when you were a child?
考生
Yes, of course, although I didn't work there now. But my study now need me to become more patient because I need to research a lot of data and I also need to collect a lot of photos, so I need to be patient.
評估
總分
Part 1
Are you a patient person?
分數: 70.0建議: 回答中存在语法错误，如“old peoples”应为“old people”，且表达略显重复，建议简化并使用更自然的表达方式。
範例: Yes, I consider myself a patient person because last year I volunteered at a retirement home where I helped and interacted with elderly people regularly.
What is it that makes you feel impatient?
分數: 60.0建議: 回答不完整，最后一句话未表达完整意思，且内容重复，建议补充完整并避免重复。
範例: Sometimes I feel impatient when elderly people refuse to eat their meals and get upset, which requires me to comfort them patiently.
How do you feel when you have to do something for a long time?
分數: 65.0建議: 回答中存在语法错误和口语填充词，建议去除多余词汇，使用更准确的时态和表达。
範例: When I have to do something for a long time, I sometimes feel impatient, but overall, I learn a lot and develop patience, which is beneficial.
Does your job require you to be patient?
分數: 60.0建議: 回答中时态混乱且表达重复，建议使用正确时态并简洁表达。
範例: Yes, my studies require me to be patient because I need to research a lot of data and collect many photos.
Are you more patient now than when you were a child?
分數: 55.0建議: 回答内容与上一题重复，且未直接回答比较问题，建议直接比较现在和童年的耐心程度。
範例: Yes, I am more patient now than when I was a child because I have learned to handle difficult tasks like research and data collection.
文法
× I get along well with the old peoples there and I do things for them.
✓ I get along well with the old people there and I do things for them.
“peoples”是复数形式，通常指不同民族或族群，这里应使用“people”表示老人群体的复数形式。
× Although sometimes I feel I felt impatient too.
✓ Although sometimes I felt impatient too.
句中“feel”与“felt”时态混用，应统一使用过去时“felt”，因为描述的是过去的经历。
× But my study now need me to become more patient because I need to research a lot of data and I also need to collect a lot of photos, so I need to be patient.
✓ But my study now needs me to become more patient because I need to research a lot of data and I also need to collect a lot of photos, so I need to be patient.
主语“my study”是第三人称单数，谓语动词应加-s，使用“needs”而非“need”。
× Yes, of course, although I didn't work there now.
✓ Yes, of course, although I don't work there now.
“didn't work”是过去时，与“now”时间状语矛盾，应使用现在时“don't work”。
× Yes, of course, although I didn't work there now.
✓ Yes, of course, although I don't work there now.
同上，时态错误，描述现在情况应使用现在时。
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