耐心— Part 1 評分報告

建議: 回答时语法和表达不够准确，句子结构较为混乱，建议简化句子并注意时态和冠词的使用，同时避免重复表达。

範例: Yes, I am a patient person. When I face difficulties, I stay calm and think carefully to solve problems by myself. If I work in a group, I try to be even more patient.

建議: 表达不够清晰，词汇使用不准确，建议用更具体的词汇描述让你感到不耐烦的事情，并且注意句子完整性。

範例: I feel impatient when I encounter difficult tasks that I cannot complete easily or when I need to learn a lot but still cannot master the skills perfectly.

建議: 句子结构混乱，表达不够自然，建议先给出明确的观点，再用连词连接具体原因，注意语法和词汇的准确性。

範例: It depends on the task. If I can solve it, I feel happy to spend a long time learning and studying, even though it takes a lot of effort.

建議: 回答不够连贯，重复使用“No”，语法错误较多，建议用完整句子表达，并且注意单复数和时态的正确使用。

範例: No, I am currently a student. However, in the future, if I become a teacher or a doctor, I will need to be patient when dealing with my students or patients.

建議: 语法错误明显，表达不够清晰，建议使用正确的时态和句子结构，明确表达观点并用具体原因支持。

範例: Yes, I am more patient now than when I was a child because people grow and learn from their experiences.

× Whenever I meet the difficulties, I keep calm and think very carefully to solve the problems by myself or if a group I can be more patient.

✓ Whenever I meet difficulties, I keep calm and think very carefully to solve the problems by myself or if in a group I can be more patient.

“the difficulties”中的“the”不适用于泛指复数名词，应该去掉“the”表示一般困难；“if a group”缺少介词，应改为“if in a group”。

× Whenever I meet the difficulties, I keep calm and think very carefully to solve the problems by myself or if a group I can be more patient.

✓ Whenever I meet difficulties, I keep calm and think very carefully to solve the problems by myself or if in a group I can be more patient.

“keep calm”中“calm”是形容词，正确用法是“keep calm”，这里无误，但“think very carefully”中“carefully”是副词，修饰动词“think”，用法正确。此句无形容词或副词错误。

× Umm, it's about some difficulty things. I can't do it or I need to learn a lot, but I can't solve it perfectly.

✓ Umm, it's about some difficult things. I can't do it or I need to learn a lot, but I can't solve it perfectly.

“difficulty things”中“difficulty”应为形容词“difficult”修饰名词“things”，表示“困难的事情”。

× It's due to the thing if I can solve it, I will feel happy to do this this although it need a lot of time for me to learn and study.

✓ It's due to the thing; if I can solve it, I will feel happy to do this although it needs a lot of time for me to learn and study.

“it need”主语是单数“it”，动词应加-s变为“needs”，表示第三人称单数。

× It's due to the thing if I can solve it, I will feel happy to do this this although it need a lot of time for me to learn and study.

✓ It's due to the thing; if I can solve it, I will feel happy to do this although it needs a lot of time for me to learn and study.

主语“it”是第三人称单数，谓语动词“need”应加-s变为“needs”，符合主谓一致。

× No, no, I am a student. Maybe in the future. If I will be a teacher or doctor, I should be patient to meet my customers or patient.

✓ No, no, I am a student. Maybe in the future. If I become a teacher or doctor, I should be patient to meet my customers or patients.

条件句中不应使用“will”，应使用一般现在时“become”表示将来条件；“patient”复数形式应为“patients”。

× No, no, I am a student. Maybe in the future. If I will be a teacher or doctor, I should be patient to meet my customers or patient.

✓ No, no, I am a student. Maybe in the future. If I become a teacher or doctor, I should be patient to meet my customers or patients.

“customer or patient”中“patient”应为复数“patients”，因为通常医生会接待多个病人。

× Yes, with the group I am now more patient than when I were a child because a person is a growing more and more due to the things we meet.

✓ Yes, with the group I am now more patient than when I was a child because a person is growing more and more due to the things we meet.

“when I were a child”中“were”应改为“was”，因为主语是第一人称单数；“is a growing”中“a”不应出现，应为“is growing”。