耐心— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Your answer is clear and relevant, but try to avoid redundancy and improve sentence structure. Instead of repeating 'I am a patient person', you can start directly with your qualities and add a linking phrase to connect ideas smoothly.

範例: Yes, I consider myself a patient person because I prefer to work calmly, which helps me avoid mistakes and complete tasks efficiently.

建議: Your answer is somewhat unclear and contains grammatical errors. Try to structure your response with a clear topic sentence and supporting details using linking words. Avoid repetition and ensure your sentences are grammatically correct.

範例: Although I am usually patient, I feel impatient when I have to wait for someone for a long time because it makes me frustrated and angry.

建議: Your answer covers the idea but is a bit confusing due to grammar and sentence structure issues. Use linking words to connect your ideas and express your feelings clearly and concisely.

範例: It depends on the task; if I am interested in it, I feel excited and enjoy doing it, but if not, I get bored and sometimes frustrated.

建議: Your answer is relevant but incomplete and has some grammatical errors. Try to complete your thoughts and use linking words to explain why patience is important in your job.

範例: Definitely, as a pharmacist, I need to be patient because preparing medicines is a complex process, and impatience can lead to contamination, ruining the products.

建議: Your answer is understandable but contains grammatical mistakes and redundancy. Try to use a clear topic sentence and supporting details with proper grammar and linking words.

範例: I believe I am more patient now than when I was a child because my parents used to say I was often impatient and got angry easily over certain things.

× As I earlier said I am patient person but sometime when I have to wait for someone for a long time I got impatient and I got angry.

✓ As I earlier said, I am a patient person but sometimes when I have to wait for someone for a long time, I get impatient and I get angry.

The word 'patient person' needs an article 'a' before it to be grammatically correct. 'Sometime' should be 'sometimes' to indicate frequency. Also, 'got' should be 'get' to maintain present tense consistency. These corrections improve clarity and grammatical accuracy.

× So that time I think I am make that time makes me feel impatient.

✓ At that time, I think I become impatient; that time makes me feel impatient.

The original sentence is structurally incorrect and confusing. 'I am make' is incorrect; it should be 'I become' to express change of state. The sentence is split for clarity and proper meaning.

× Honestly it depends if I do something which is in my interest, so I love to do that thing and it got I got excited for this but when I do something which is not interested by me so it I got furious on that work and I'm bored at that time.

✓ Honestly, it depends. If I do something which interests me, I love to do that thing and I get excited about it, but when I do something which does not interest me, I get furious at that work and I am bored at that time.

The phrase 'in my interest' should be 'interests me' to correctly express personal interest. 'Got excited for this' should be 'get excited about it' to use correct preposition and tense. 'Not interested by me' is incorrect; it should be 'does not interest me'. 'Furious on that work' should be 'furious at that work'. These preposition corrections improve sentence accuracy.

× Definitely yes I'm a pharmacist and in pharmacy stream you should be patient because making medicine is a complex process and if you are impatient during this the contamination will occur and destroy all the products and.

✓ Definitely yes, I'm a pharmacist and in the pharmacy field you should be patient because making medicine is a complex process and if you are impatient during this, contamination will occur and destroy all the products.

The modal verb 'should' is correctly used here to express necessity. However, the sentence needed minor corrections such as adding 'the' before 'pharmacy field' and removing the unnecessary 'and' at the end. These improve clarity and grammatical correctness.

× As I remember I am patient person now but sometime my parents said I am impatient in my childhood and got furious on on some topics which makes me impatient in my child.

✓ As I remember, I am a patient person now but sometimes my parents said I was impatient in my childhood and got furious on some topics which made me impatient as a child.

The phrase 'patient person' requires the article 'a'. 'Sometime' should be 'sometimes' to indicate frequency. 'I am impatient in my childhood' should be 'I was impatient in my childhood' to maintain past tense. 'Makes me impatient in my child' is incorrect; it should be 'made me impatient as a child'. These corrections fix singular/plural and tense issues.