耐心— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Your answer is relevant but has grammatical errors and some redundancy. Try to make your sentences clearer and more concise. For example, say "I wouldn't consider myself a patient person because I easily get frustrated when things don't go according to plan. However, I am working on it through mindfulness and meditation."

範例: I wouldn't consider myself a patient person because I easily get frustrated when things don't go according to plan. However, I am working on it through mindfulness and meditation.

建議: Your answer is understandable but has grammatical mistakes and lacks coherence. Use linking words and correct verb forms. For example, "As I mentioned, I feel impatient when things do not go according to plan. For instance, if I have prepared a lesson plan and am taking a class, but the administration calls me to do other work, I feel very impatient."

範例: As I mentioned, I feel impatient when things do not go according to plan. For instance, if I have prepared a lesson plan and am taking a class, but the administration calls me to do other work, I feel very impatient.

建議: Your answer is repetitive and has grammatical errors. Try to avoid repeating the same idea and use linking words for coherence. For example, "If I have to do something for a long time, I get bored because doing the same thing repeatedly tires me. Moreover, I feel exhausted. Therefore, I recharge myself by taking short breaks frequently."

範例: If I have to do something for a long time, I get bored because doing the same thing repeatedly tires me. Moreover, I feel exhausted. Therefore, I recharge myself by taking short breaks frequently.

建議: Your answer is good but can be improved by using linking words and more precise vocabulary. For example, "Yes, absolutely. Since I deal with children, I need to be very patient. I must focus on understanding their needs and concerns because they are curious, ask many questions, and are quite emotional and sensitive."

範例: Yes, absolutely. Since I deal with children, I need to be very patient. I must focus on understanding their needs and concerns because they are curious, ask many questions, and are quite emotional and sensitive.

建議: Your answer has grammatical errors and is incomplete. Try to complete your thoughts and use correct grammar. For example, "Yes, I believe I am more patient now than when I was a child. I was not able to control my emotions before, but through life experiences, I have learned to manage my feelings. I am still working on it through mindfulness."

範例: Yes, I believe I am more patient now than when I was a child. I was not able to control my emotions before, but through life experiences, I have learned to manage my feelings. I am still working on it through mindfulness.

× No, I wouldn't consider myself a patient person and because I'm easily get frustrated because if things are not going according to the plans.

✓ No, I wouldn't consider myself a patient person because I easily get frustrated if things are not going according to the plan.

The phrase 'I'm easily get frustrated' is incorrect because 'get' should be in the present participle form 'getting' after 'am' or the auxiliary verb should be removed. Also, 'because if' is redundant; 'because' alone suffices. Additionally, 'plans' should be singular 'plan' to match the context. The corrected sentence removes redundancy and fixes verb form.

× However, I'm working on it by mindfulness and meditation.

✓ However, I'm working on it through mindfulness and meditation.

The preposition 'by' is incorrectly used here; 'through' is more appropriate to indicate the means by which the action is done. Also, 'mindfulness and meditation' are nouns and do not require verb forms here.

× As I mentioned, I I felt impatient when things do not go according to the plan.

✓ As I mentioned, I feel impatient when things do not go according to the plan.

The sentence mixes past tense 'felt' with present tense 'do not go'. Since the statement is general, present tense 'feel' is appropriate to maintain consistency.

× For instance, I have prepared a Lesson plan and taking class in the meal while administration calls me and ask for some other work.

✓ For instance, I have prepared a lesson plan and am taking a class in the meal while the administration calls me and asks for some other work.

The phrase 'and taking class' lacks the auxiliary verb 'am' to form the present continuous tense. Also, 'Lesson' should be lowercase unless a proper noun. 'Administration' needs the definite article 'the'. 'Ask' should be 'asks' to agree with singular subject 'administration'.

× At that time, I really feel very impatient.

✓ At that time, I really felt very impatient.

The phrase 'At that time' refers to a past moment, so the verb should be in past tense 'felt' instead of present tense 'feel'.

× If I have to do something for a long time I I get bored because doing same thing again and again it makes me bored.

✓ If I have to do something for a long time, I get bored because doing the same thing again and again makes me bored.

The sentence has redundancy and incorrect structure. 'I I' is repeated. 'Doing same thing again and again it makes me bored' is awkward; 'doing the same thing again and again makes me bored' is correct. Also, a comma is needed after the conditional clause.

× Also if the work is needs more concentration so I recharge myself by taking a short breaks frequ.

✓ Also, if the work needs more concentration, I recharge myself by taking short breaks frequently.

The phrase 'is needs' is incorrect; it should be 'needs'. 'A short breaks' is incorrect because 'a' is singular and 'breaks' is plural; it should be 'short breaks'. 'Frequ' is incomplete and should be 'frequently'. The sentence also needs commas for clarity.

× Yes, absolutely. I have to deal with the children, so I need to be quite patient.

✓ Yes, absolutely. I have to deal with children, so I need to be quite patient.

The definite article 'the' before 'children' is unnecessary when speaking generally. Removing 'the' makes the sentence more natural.

× They are very curious and they have lots of things to ask and they are very emotional and sensitive.

✓ They are very curious, have lots of things to ask, and are very emotional and sensitive.

The sentence is correct in subject-verb agreement but can be improved by removing repeated 'they' for better flow. This is a stylistic improvement rather than a grammatical error.

× Yes, I believe I am more patient than I were a child earlier.

✓ Yes, I believe I am more patient than I was a child earlier.

The verb 'were' is incorrect for the first person singular past tense; it should be 'was'.

× I not able to control my emotions but by life experiences I learned this thing to control my feelings and I'm also still working on it by mindfulness and.

✓ I was not able to control my emotions, but through life experiences, I have learned to control my feelings, and I'm still working on it through mindfulness and meditation.

The sentence lacks auxiliary verb 'was' for past tense. 'By life experiences' should be 'through life experiences'. 'I learned this thing to control my feelings' is awkward; 'I have learned to control my feelings' is better. The sentence ends abruptly; adding 'meditation' completes the thought. Commas improve clarity.