耐心— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Your answer is unclear and contains grammatical errors, such as 'persons' instead of 'person' and confusing phrases like 'I don't trust things'. Try to use simple, clear sentences and directly answer the question with supporting details. For example, say 'Yes, I am a patient person because I usually stay calm in difficult situations and wait for the right time to act.'

範例: Yes, I am a patient person. For example, when I face challenges, I stay calm and wait for the right moment to solve them instead of rushing.

建議: Your answer is somewhat confusing and has grammatical mistakes. Try to clearly state what makes you impatient and explain why, using linking words to connect ideas. For example, 'I feel impatient when I do not see quick results because I like to achieve my goals fast.'

範例: I feel impatient when I do not see quick results because I like to achieve my goals fast. However, I understand that good results take time, so I try to be patient.

建議: Your answer is unclear and has many grammatical errors. Try to express your feelings clearly and use linking words to connect your ideas. For example, 'I feel frustrated when I have to do something for a long time because I compare myself to others who succeed faster.'

範例: I feel frustrated when I have to do something for a long time because I compare myself to others who succeed faster. However, I try to focus on my own progress instead.

建議: Your answer is confusing and contains many errors, such as 'peasants' instead of 'patience' and unclear sentences. Try to answer directly and clearly, for example, 'Yes, my job requires patience because I need to handle social anxiety and stay calm in difficult situations.'

範例: Yes, my job requires patience because I often face stressful situations and need to stay calm to perform well.

建議: Your answer has some good ideas but is unclear and has grammatical mistakes like 'passence' instead of 'patience'. Try to organize your answer with clear sentences and linking words. For example, 'Yes, I am more patient now because I understand that good things take time and require hard work.'

範例: Yes, I am more patient now than when I was a child because I have learned that success needs time and effort.

× I would say I'm the most calm and patient persons ever.

✓ I would say I'm the calmest and most patient person ever.

The word 'persons' is incorrect here because the subject is singular ('I'). The correct singular form is 'person'. Also, 'most calm' should be 'calmest' to correctly form the superlative adjective.

× Like in every friend circle, I'm the only one that's very persons because I don't trust things.

✓ Like in every friend circle, I'm the only one who's very patient because I don't trust things.

'Persons' is incorrect here; it should be 'patient' to describe a person's characteristic. Also, 'that's' should be 'who's' when referring to a person.

× I mean, I do have some habits that I do rush things, but I had the person to wait.

✓ I mean, I do have some habits where I rush things, but I have the patience to wait.

'Had the person' is incorrect; the correct phrase is 'have the patience'. 'Person' is a noun meaning an individual, while 'patience' is the quality of being patient.

× It's definitely the results and the outcome that makes me realize that the process, no matter what the process, is the if the results are going to be awesome.

✓ It's definitely the results and the outcome that make me realize that the process, no matter what it is, is important if the results are going to be awesome.

The sentence is confusing and incomplete. 'Makes' should be 'make' to agree with plural subject 'results and outcome'. Added missing words to clarify meaning and correct sentence structure.

× I'm ready to be patient because having things after a full passion is like getting a reward, which is actually pretty, pretty things to get.

✓ I'm ready to be patient because having things after full passion is like getting a reward, which is actually a pretty nice thing to get.

'Pretty, pretty things' is incorrect. It should be 'a pretty nice thing' to correctly describe the reward. Also, 'a full passion' is better as 'full passion'.

× To be very honest I would feel very lost because by seeing others achievement and success when you are just struggling in your own life and your way, it just makes you feel so you have low self esteem and then everything was very happy on yourself.

✓ To be very honest, I would feel very lost because seeing others' achievements and success when you are just struggling in your own life and your way makes you feel like you have low self-esteem and then everything feels very unhappy about yourself.

'Others achievement' should be 'others' achievements' to show possession and plural. 'Was very happy on yourself' is incorrect; it should be 'feels very unhappy about yourself' to express the intended meaning.

× So yeah this is what something.

✓ So yeah, this is what happens.

The original sentence is incomplete and unclear. Corrected to a complete sentence that fits the context.

× I think it's very crucial for me to have the peasants and the calm in my mind because persons make me feel much more disconnected from the outcome.

✓ I think it's very crucial for me to have patience and calm in my mind because impatience makes me feel much more disconnected from the outcome.

'Peasants' is a misspelling of 'patience'. 'Persons' is incorrect here; likely intended 'impatience'. Corrected to proper nouns to fit context.

× Where?

✓ Where?

The word 'Where?' is incomplete and unclear in context. It may be a transcription error or incomplete sentence.

× Of course, as a child, you know, a child has a natural habit to be very gritty and want things immediately.

✓ Of course, as a child, you know, a child has a natural habit of being very impatient and wanting things immediately.

'Gritty' is incorrect here; the intended meaning is 'impatient'. Also, 'habit to be' should be 'habit of being' for correct expression.

× But after UH-18, you have the maturity phase when you just think like not everything goes well and you just need the time and passence to get something because it's like a award of you, your hard work and passions.

✓ But after 18, you enter the maturity phase when you realize that not everything goes well and you just need time and patience to get something because it's like a reward for your hard work and passion.

'UH-18' is unclear; assumed age 18. 'Passence' is misspelling of 'patience'. 'A award' should be 'a reward'. 'Of you, your hard work and passions' corrected to 'for your hard work and passion' for clarity and correctness.