耐心— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Câu trả lời của bạn có vẻ tự nhiên nhưng có nhiều từ lặp lại và sử dụng từ không chính xác (ví dụ: 'patient' thay vì 'be patient'). Bạn nên tránh lặp từ và sử dụng cấu trúc câu rõ ràng hơn để câu trả lời hiệu quả hơn.

範例: I wouldn't say I'm a very patient person, but I've become more patient in certain situations as I've grown older because I realize patience helps me solve problems more effectively.

建議: Bạn cần cải thiện ngữ pháp và cấu trúc câu để câu trả lời rõ ràng hơn. Hãy tránh sử dụng từ ngữ không chắc chắn như 'I don't know' và thêm liên từ để câu trả lời mạch lạc hơn.

範例: I feel impatient when my plans don't go as expected, especially if unexpected events disrupt my schedule, which can be quite frustrating.

建議: Bạn nên chú ý phát âm và sử dụng từ đúng ('patient' thay vì 'pension', 'impatient' cần có động từ 'feel'). Câu trả lời cũng nên rõ ràng và tránh lỗi ngữ pháp để truyền đạt ý tốt hơn.

範例: As I mentioned, I'm not very patient, so when I have to do something for a long time, I usually feel impatient, but I try to stay focused and finish it as quickly as possible.

建議: Bạn nên sử dụng ngữ pháp chính xác hơn và tránh lặp từ. Câu trả lời cần có cấu trúc rõ ràng và từ vựng phù hợp hơn để thể hiện ý một cách tự nhiên và hiệu quả.

範例: Yes, my job as a civil engineer requires a lot of patience because I have to coordinate with many people and manage materials on the construction site.

建議: Bạn nên tránh sử dụng từ ngữ không chắc chắn và lặp lại, đồng thời cải thiện cấu trúc câu để câu trả lời mạch lạc và tự nhiên hơn.

範例: Definitely, I am more patient now than when I was a child, but I still try to improve because being patient helps me solve problems more smoothly.

× I need to umm patient to solve solve the problem.

✓ I need to be patient to solve the problem.

The verb 'need' should be followed by 'to' plus the base form of the verb. 'Patient' is an adjective, so it requires the verb 'be' to form 'be patient'. The repetition of 'solve' is also corrected.

× I think when my plan there isn't work like I thought

✓ I think when my plan doesn't work like I thought

The phrase 'there isn't work' is incorrect. The correct form is 'doesn't work' to indicate that the plan is not functioning as expected.

× when my uh, schedule have some umm, unexpected event

✓ when my uh, schedule has some umm, unexpected events

The subject 'schedule' is singular, so the verb should be 'has' not 'have'. Also, 'event' should be plural 'events' to match 'some'.

× I'm not a pension person

✓ I'm not a patient person

The word 'pension' is incorrect here; the correct adjective is 'patient' to describe a person's temperament.

× I usually impatient

✓ I am usually impatient

The adjective 'impatient' needs a linking verb 'am' to form a correct sentence.

× I still strike my bed and complete it as soon as I can.

✓ I still stick to my bed and complete it as soon as I can.

The phrase 'strike my bed' is incorrect and unclear. Possibly the intended phrase is 'stick to my bed' meaning to stay focused or committed.

× I'm in civil engineer and I have to work with, uh, the number, the persons and umm, the material in the construction site.

✓ I'm a civil engineer and I have to work with, uh, the numbers, the people and, umm, the materials on the construction site.

The profession should be 'a civil engineer'. 'Number' should be plural 'numbers', 'persons' is better as 'people', and 'material' should be plural 'materials'. Also, the preposition 'on' is more appropriate than 'in' for 'construction site'.

× every job need patient.

✓ every job needs patience.

The verb 'need' should be 'needs' to agree with singular subject 'every job'. Also, 'patient' is an adjective; the noun 'patience' is correct here.

× when you come, you can solve the problem smoothly.

✓ when you are patient, you can solve the problem smoothly.

The word 'come' is incorrect in this context; it should be 'are patient' to convey the intended meaning.