耐心— Part 1 評分報告

建議: 回答不够自然，语法错误较多，表达不够清晰。建议简化句子结构，直接回答问题，并用具体例子支持。

範例: Yes, I am a patient person. For example, I usually spend 3 to 4 hours reading a mathematics textbook after work every day.

建議: 表达不清晰，语法错误多，逻辑混乱。建议用简单句表达原因，并用连接词使句子连贯。

範例: I feel impatient when I do tedious tasks, such as cleaning my room or washing clothes, because these jobs are boring. Therefore, I usually finish them quickly.

建議: 回答不连贯，词汇使用错误，表达不清楚。建议先给出总体感受，再用具体例子说明，并注意词汇准确。

範例: It depends. If I like the activity, such as playing my favorite game or reading an enjoyable book, I can spend a long time doing it happily.

建議: 语法错误较多，表达不够流畅。建议简化句子，直接回答并用具体时间说明耐心的重要性。

範例: Yes, my job requires a lot of patience because projects usually take one or two years to complete.

建議: 表达混乱，语法错误多，句子不完整。建议先比较现在和过去的耐心，再用具体例子说明。

範例: I was less patient as a child because I preferred playing and doing different things. Now, as I have grown up, I have become more patient.

× I can spend, you know time to focus on certain things.

✓ I can spend, you know, time focusing on certain things.

动词spend后面应接动名词形式，表示花时间做某事。这里应使用'focus on certain things'的动名词形式'focus'改为'Focusing'。

× in the next year I have spending, I usually was spending 3 or 4 hours in reading a mathematic textbook after daily job and.

✓ In the next year, I have been spending, I usually spend 3 or 4 hours reading a mathematics textbook after my daily job.

动词have后接现在完成进行时应为'have been spending'，且动词后接动名词形式'reading'。此外，'mathematic'应为形容词'mathematics'。

× I usually was spending 3 or 4 hours in reading a mathematic textbook after daily job and.

✓ I usually spend 3 or 4 hours reading a mathematics textbook after my daily job.

描述习惯动作时应使用一般现在时，'was spending'不合适。

× I will very soon denounce my patient said she had cleaning, cleaning my room or washing my clothes.

✓ I will very soon lose my patience when I have to clean my room or wash my clothes.

'denounce my patient'用词错误，应为'lose my patience'表示失去耐心。'said she had cleaning'语法混乱，应改为'when I have to clean'。

× It's just a very tedious job, I think. And so I've done it very quickly and very rare.

✓ It's just a very tedious job, I think. So I do it very quickly and very rarely.

'very rare'应为副词形式'rearly'修饰动词'do'。

× when I do something my favor, I can spending as much fun as possible to finish, like putting my favorite game or raiding my wedding.

✓ When I do something I like, I can spend as much time as possible to finish it, like playing my favorite game or reading my wedding book.

'spending'应为动词原形'spend'，'my favor'应为'I like'，'putting'应为'playing'，'raiding'应为'reading'。

× like putting my favorite game or raiding my wedding.

✓ like playing my favorite game or reading my wedding book.

'putting'和'raiding'拼写错误，应为'playing'和'reading'。

× my job certainly wouldn't requires somebody of patience since it has a very long period, often like one or two years.

✓ My job certainly requires somebody to be patient since it takes a very long period, often one or two years.

'wouldn't requires'错误，情态动词后动词用原形'require'。'somebody of patience'应为'somebody to be patient'。

× To sign project and finish it.

✓ To sign a project and finish it.

缺少冠词'a'，'sign project'应为'sign a project'。

× More years and wild children and and most of the didn't have patient to do anything next study or walking.

✓ When I was a child, I didn't have patience to do anything like studying or walking.

'More years and wild children'语义不清，应改为'When I was a child'。'patient'应为'patience'。

× More years and wild children and and most of the didn't have patient to do anything next study or walking.

✓ When I was a child, I didn't have patience to do anything like studying or walking.

'most of the'用法错误，且句子结构混乱，应简化为'When I was a child'。

× I just want to play and doing different things.

✓ I just want to play and do different things.

'want to'后应接动词原形，'doing'应改为'do'。

× But nowadays as when I as I'm grow up, I certainly have more patience to do such things.

✓ But nowadays, as I have grown up, I certainly have more patience to do such things.

'as I'm grow up'时态错误，应为完成时态'as I have grown up'。