耐心— Part 1 評分報告

建議: 回答不够自然且表达不清晰，存在语法错误和重复，建议简洁明了地表达观点，并使用正确的语法结构。

範例: Actually, I'm not a very patient person because I often find it hard to wait for others or for things to happen.

建議: 回答内容不够具体，表达混乱，词汇使用不当。建议明确具体原因，并用连词连接句子，使表达更连贯。

範例: I feel impatient mainly when I have to wait in long queues, especially if I have a tight schedule. For example, standing in line at the supermarket or waiting for a bus can be frustrating.

建議: 表达不清晰且有语法错误，建议用简单明了的句子表达感受，并说明原因。

範例: I feel a bit bored when I have to do something for a long time because it wastes my time, and I prefer to use my time efficiently.

建議: 回答不连贯且含糊，建议直接回答问题并简洁说明原因，避免重复和语法错误。

範例: No, my current situation doesn't require me to be patient because I am preparing for the English exam and I don't have a job at the moment.

建議: 表达不够清晰，语法和词汇使用有误，建议用简单句子表达对比并说明原因。

範例: Yes, I am more patient now than when I was a child because I understand that some things take time and I have learned to wait calmly.

× OK this a little shamed actually.

✓ OK this is a little shameful actually.

这里缺少动词“is”，且“shamed”用错了，应该用形容词“shameful”表示感到羞愧。

× I'm not a patient per patient person because I always have not enough passion to wait for someone or give me a point for me.

✓ I'm not a patient person because I never have enough patience to wait for someone or give them time for me.

“per patient person”是错误表达，应为“patient person”；“passion”应为“patience”；“have not enough”应为“never have enough”；“give me a point for me”表达不清，改为“give them time for me”更合适。

× Uh, there are survival things that make me feel impatient, but one of the main tigers is waiting a long quiz, especially when I have a tight schedule.

✓ Uh, there are several things that make me feel impatient, but one of the main triggers is waiting a long time, especially when I have a tight schedule.

“survival things”应为“several things”；“main tigers”应为“main triggers”；“waiting a long quiz”应为“waiting a long time”。

× For example, standing in line and the bike or supermarket can be quiet.

✓ For example, standing in line at the bike shop or supermarket can be quite boring.

“the bike or supermarket”表达不清，应为“the bike shop or supermarket”；“quiet”应为“quite boring”以表达等待时的感受。

× I feel a little bit bite because it can waste a lot of time and I didn't like to waste my time on usually because I think it's necessary and it's not comfortable for me.

✓ I feel a little bit bored because it can waste a lot of time and I don't like to waste my time usually because I think it's unnecessary and it's not comfortable for me.

“bite”应为“bored”；“didn't like”时态不对，应为“don't like”；“on usually”位置错误，应为“usually”；“necessary”应为“unnecessary”以表达不必要。

× Uh, definitely not because I'm not doing, I have a job because I, uh, prepare the English exam.

✓ Uh, definitely not because I don't have a job; I am preparing for the English exam.

“I'm not doing, I have a job”表达混乱，应为“don't have a job”；“prepare the English exam”应为“preparing for the English exam”。

× So I, uh, main, I have, I mean gap year.

✓ So I, uh, mainly, I have, I mean, a gap year.

“main”应为“mainly”；“gap year”前应加不定冠词“a”。

× Oh yes, of course, when I was young, I think I didn't have enough patient umm, because in my mind a lot of time is be short, you know, uh, children's way vision is so small.

✓ Oh yes, of course, when I was young, I think I didn't have enough patience, umm, because in my mind a lot of time was short, you know, uh, children's vision is so limited.

“patient”应为“patience”；“a lot of time is be short”时态和结构错误，应为“a lot of time was short”；“children's way vision is so small”表达不当，应为“children's vision is so limited”。

× So I think it's uh, doesn't not time to, uh, expect him.

✓ So I think it's not the time to expect much from them.

句子结构混乱，双重否定“doesn't not”错误，应简化为“not”；“expect him”应为“expect much from them”以表达意思。