机器— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Your answer is clear but can be improved by correcting grammar and making sentences more natural. For example, use 'washing by hand' instead of 'wash by my hand' and 'doesn't consume much time' instead of 'don't consume more time'. Also, avoid redundancy by combining similar ideas.

範例: My favorite machine at home is the washing machine because it cleans my clothes effectively. I don't have to wash them by hand, which is very convenient. Moreover, it saves a lot of time since it operates quickly.

建議: Your answer is relevant but contains repetition and some grammatical errors. Try to avoid repeating words like 'at the same time' and use correct verb forms such as 'clean' instead of 'cleanses'. Also, use linking words to connect ideas smoothly.

範例: Yes, I believe washing machines and sweeping machines are essential because they clean clothes and floors quickly. Additionally, they help us save both time and effort.

建議: Your answer has good content but needs grammatical corrections and better sentence structure. Use plural 'instructions' and correct verb forms like 'how it works' and 'how it should be used'. Also, avoid starting sentences with 'And'.

範例: Yes, I always read the instructions before using a machine because they help me understand how the machine works and how to operate it properly. This knowledge is useful when using machines at home.

建議: Your answer conveys the idea but has grammatical mistakes and awkward phrasing. Use plural 'instructions' and correct phrases like 'guidance prepared for us'. Also, simplify sentences for clarity and use linking words to connect ideas.

範例: Yes, I think it is important to read the instructions because they provide guidance on how to use machines correctly. Therefore, everyone should learn and follow the instructions to use machines safely and effectively in daily life.

× I don't have to wash by my hand.

✓ I don't have to wash by hand.

The preposition 'by' is correctly used here, but the phrase 'my hand' is incorrect. The correct expression is 'by hand' without a possessive pronoun. In English, 'by hand' is an idiomatic expression meaning to do something manually.

× It is very comfortable and convenient for me to wash through the help of washing machine.

✓ It is very comfortable and convenient for me to wash with the help of a washing machine.

The phrase 'through the help of' is incorrect; the correct preposition is 'with' in this context. Also, 'washing machine' needs an article 'a' before it. So, 'with the help of a washing machine' is the correct form.

× It is quick and don't consume more time.

✓ It is quick and doesn't consume much time.

The subject 'It' is singular, so the verb should be 'doesn't' instead of 'don't'. Also, 'more time' is less appropriate here; 'much time' is better when referring to uncountable time.

× because it it cleanses our clothes and floor quickly and it also helps us to save our time and effort at the same time.

✓ because it cleans our clothes and floors quickly and it also helps us save our time and effort at the same time.

The repeated 'it it' is a typographical error; only one 'it' is needed. 'Cleanses' is a formal verb; 'cleans' is more natural here. 'Floor' should be plural 'floors' to match 'clothes'. Also, 'helps us to save' can be simplified to 'helps us save'.

× Yes, I always read the instruction before using a machine because it helps us to understand the machine, how it works and how it be done.

✓ Yes, I always read the instructions before using a machine because it helps us understand the machine, how it works and how it is done.

'Instruction' should be plural 'instructions' because usually there are multiple instructions. 'Helps us to understand' can be simplified to 'helps us understand'. 'How it be done' is incorrect; the correct form is 'how it is done'.

× And it is also good to have knowledge about machines while we use it on our house.

✓ And it is also good to have knowledge about machines when we use them in our house.

The preposition 'while' is better replaced by 'when' to indicate the time of use. 'Use it' is incorrect because 'machines' is plural, so 'use them' is correct. Also, 'on our house' should be 'in our house'.

× Well, I think it is important to read the instruction because they are the guidance prepare for us to know about the machines and use it properly in a way.

✓ Well, I think it is important to read the instructions because they are the guidance prepared for us to know about the machines and use them properly.

'Instruction' should be plural 'instructions'. 'Guidance' is uncountable and should be preceded by 'the'. 'Prepare' should be past participle 'prepared'. 'Use it' should be 'use them' to agree with plural 'machines'. The phrase 'in a way' is unnecessary and can be omitted.

× So it is important for everyone to learn and follow the instruction to use it more properly in their daily life.

✓ So it is important for everyone to learn and follow the instructions to use them properly in their daily life.

'Instruction' should be plural 'instructions'. 'Use it' should be 'use them' to agree with plural 'instructions'. 'More properly' is less natural than 'properly' here.