机器— Part 1 評分報告

建議: 你的回答表达了观点，但语法和用词不够准确，句子结构较为混乱。建议简化句子，注意时态和冠词的使用，同时增加连接词使表达更流畅。

範例: My favourite machine at home is the washing machine because I used to dislike washing clothes. It not only helps me clean my clothes but also gives me more free time to do my homework.

建議: 回答不完整且有语法错误，表达不清晰。建议完整回答问题，避免语法错误，并使用连接词使句子连贯。

範例: Yes, I think washing machines and sweeping machines are very important in our daily life because they help us do simple chores quickly, which saves a lot of time.

建議: 回答较为自然，但句子较长且缺少连接词。建议分句表达，使用连接词使句子更流畅，同时注意复数形式和冠词的使用。

範例: To be honest, I don't always read the instructions before using a machine. Instead, I prefer to ask my parents for help because I don't like reading manuals.

建議: 回答表达了观点，但语言不够准确，句子结构复杂且有语法错误。建议简化句子，使用更准确的词汇，并注意逻辑连贯。

範例: Of course, I think it is important to read the instructions. Designers often include useful information about how to use the machine properly, and if we don't read them, we might miss important details.

× I think it must be laundry because I was a person who most hated to washing clothes and this machine not only helped me to do that kind of things but also give me more free time to do my homework.

✓ I think it must be laundry because I was a person who most hated washing clothes and this machine not only helped me to do that kind of thing but also gave me more free time to do my homework.

动词后面接动名词时，应该用动词的 -ing 形式，不能用不定式。这里 'hated to washing' 应改为 'hated washing'。另外，'that kind of things' 应为单数 'that kind of thing'，因为 'kind of' 后面接单数名词。最后，时态要一致，'give' 应改为过去式 'gave'。

× I think it must be laundry because I was a person who most hated to washing clothes and this machine not only helped me to do that kind of things but also give me more free time to do my homework.

✓ I think it must be laundry because I was a person who most hated washing clothes and this machine not only helped me to do that kind of thing but also gave me more free time to do my homework.

'that kind of things' 中 'kind of' 后面应接单数名词，故应改为 'that kind of thing'。

× I think it must be laundry because I was a person who most hated to washing clothes and this machine not only helped me to do that kind of things but also give me more free time to do my homework.

✓ I think it must be laundry because I was a person who most hated washing clothes and this machine not only helped me to do that kind of thing but also gave me more free time to do my homework.

句中描述过去发生的动作，动词 'give' 应使用过去式 'gave'，以保持时态一致。

× Yes, I think washing machine and sweeping machine are significantly important to our daily life and they not only help us to do the simple coins which just save our times but also.

✓ Yes, I think washing machines and sweeping machines are significantly important to our daily life and they not only help us to do the simple chores which just save our time but also.

'washing machine and sweeping machine' 应使用复数形式 'washing machines and sweeping machines'，因为指的是两种机器。'coins' 应为 'chores'（家务活），且 'times' 应为不可数名词 'time'。

× Yes, I think washing machine and sweeping machine are significantly important to our daily life and they not only help us to do the simple coins which just save our times but also.

✓ Yes, I think washing machines and sweeping machines are significantly important in our daily life and they not only help us to do the simple chores which just save our time but also.

'important to' 在表达对生活的重要性时，通常用 'important in our daily life' 更合适。

× Yes, I think washing machine and sweeping machine are significantly important to our daily life and they not only help us to do the simple coins which just save our times but also.

✓ Yes, I think washing machines and sweeping machines are significantly important in our daily life and they not only help us to do the simple chores which save our time but also help us in other ways.

句子末尾 'but also' 后缺少内容，导致句子结构不完整，应补充完整。

× To be honest, I don't always read the instruction before using a machine. I prefer to ask for my parents who can help me to operate or use the machines I don't really like to read these things.

✓ To be honest, I don't always read the instructions before using a machine. I prefer to ask my parents who can help me operate or use the machines. I don't really like to read these things.

'instruction' 应为复数 'instructions'，因为通常指说明书的多条指示。句中 'ask for my parents' 应改为 'ask my parents'，'ask for' 通常用于请求某物。句子过长，应分成两句。

× To be honest, I don't always read the instruction before using a machine. I prefer to ask for my parents who can help me to operate or use the machines I don't really like to read these things.

✓ To be honest, I don't always read the instructions before using a machine. I prefer to ask my parents who can help me operate or use the machines. I don't really like to read these things.

'ask for my parents' 中 'ask for' 用法不当，应直接用 'ask my parents'。

× To be honest, I don't always read the instruction before using a machine. I prefer to ask for my parents who can help me to operate or use the machines I don't really like to read these things.

✓ To be honest, I don't always read the instructions before using a machine. I prefer to ask my parents who can help me operate or use the machines. I don't really like to read these things.

句中 'ask for my parents who can help me' 结构不清晰，应去掉 'for'，使句子更通顺。

× Of course, although I don't always read the instructions before I use the machine, I still think it is significant to read the instructions. As we know that that exists is always rational. Many designers will add some details about their innovation of the machines in these instructors. If we don't read it, we can't find it.

✓ Of course, although I don't always read the instructions before I use the machine, I still think it is important to read the instructions. As we know, what exists is always rational. Many designers add some details about their innovations of the machines in these instructions. If we don't read them, we can't find them.

'that that exists is always rational' 语法不通，应改为 'what exists is always rational'。'instructors' 应为 'instructions'（说明书）。'read it' 和 'find it' 指代复数，应改为 'read them' 和 'find them'。

× Of course, although I don't always read the instructions before I use the machine, I still think it is significant to read the instructions.

✓ Of course, although I don't always read the instructions before I use the machine, I still think it is important to read the instructions.

'significant' 通常用于表示重要性时，形容事物本身，表达观点时用 'important' 更合适。