机器— Part 1 評分報告

建議: 回答不够自然且表达不清晰，句子结构混乱，词汇使用不准确。建议简化句子结构，明确表达喜爱咖啡机的原因，并使用正确的咖啡种类名称。

範例: My favourite machine at home is the coffee maker because I enjoy starting my day with different types of coffee, such as latte or espresso.

建議: 回答内容混乱，语法错误较多，表达不连贯。建议使用简单句子直接回答问题，并具体说明洗衣机和扫地机的重要性。

範例: Yes, washing machines and sweeping machines are very important because they help keep our homes clean and save us a lot of time and effort.

建議: 回答较为重复且表达不够准确。建议使用连贯的句子，明确说明阅读说明书的好处，并避免语法错误。

範例: Yes, I always read the instructions before using a machine because it helps me use it correctly and saves time.

建議: 回答不完整且语法错误较多，表达不清晰。建议简洁明了地说明说明书的重要性，并使用正确的语法结构。

範例: Yes, reading instructions is important because it guides us to use new machines safely and prevents wasting time.

× To talk about my favorite machine it must be coffee maker because every weekday I get up and I will do various coffee types at first such as letting or express or another kind of coffees might like buy.

✓ To talk about my favorite machine, it must be the coffee maker because every weekday I get up and make various types of coffee at first, such as latte or espresso or other kinds of coffee I might like to buy.

句中“do various coffee types”用法不当，应使用动词“make”来表达“制作咖啡”。另外，“letting”应为“latte”，“express”应为“espresso”，且“coffees”应为不可数名词“coffee”。句子缺少冠词“the”修饰“coffee maker”。建议注意动词搭配和冠词使用。

× All the two machines totally important for our daily life, especially they can make our home clean and heavy and keep our in a very good balance about making the homework housework and it is also great to help people.

✓ Both machines are totally important for our daily life, especially because they can make our home clean and tidy and help us keep a good balance in doing housework. They are also great to help people.

“All the two machines”表达不正确，应使用“Both machines”表示“两者都”。“heavy”用词错误，应为“tidy”表示整洁。句子结构混乱，需调整以表达清晰。建议学习正确的数量词和形容词搭配。

× All the two machines totally important for our daily life, especially they can make our home clean and heavy and keep our in a very good balance about making the homework housework and it is also great to help people.

✓ Both machines are totally important for our daily life, especially because they can make our home clean and tidy and help us keep a good balance in doing housework. They are also great to help people.

句中“keep our in a very good balance”缺少宾语，且“our”后缺少名词，应为“help us keep a good balance”。代词使用不当导致句意不明。建议注意代词后应接名词或动词短语。

× Yes, actually I think it's very important to read some guidelines before we use the machine. It is more convenient and it's a way to save times affecting and it is also can make that use more easier.

✓ Yes, actually I think it's very important to read some guidelines before we use the machine. It is more convenient and it's a way to save time and it can also make using it easier.

“save times affecting”表达不正确，应为“save time”。“make that use more easier”结构错误，应为“make using it easier”。介词和动词搭配错误导致句子不通顺。建议学习常用短语搭配。

× Yes, of course, the instruction is a very effective way to guide us to use the new machine and know that in a security way. And it is also avoiding to waste a lot of time to use sites and maybe we can.

✓ Yes, of course, instructions are a very effective way to guide us to use new machines and to know how to do so safely. They also help avoid wasting a lot of time trying to use them, and maybe we can.

“the instruction”应为复数“instructions”，且“a security way”应为“safely”或“in a safe way”。“avoiding to waste”结构错误，应为“help avoid wasting”。冠词使用和表达方式不当影响句意。建议注意冠词和固定搭配的正确使用。