机器— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Your answer is relevant but can be improved by making sentences grammatically correct and more concise. Avoid redundancy and use linking words to connect ideas smoothly. Also, try to use a wider range of vocabulary and correct verb forms.

範例: My favourite machine at home is the robotic sweeping machine because it saves me time and energy. When I clean manually, I get very tired. However, this machine does the job efficiently and comfortably, making it my favourite companion.

建議: Your answer addresses the question but can be improved by avoiding repetition and improving sentence structure. Use linking words to connect ideas and provide more specific examples. Also, be careful with subject-verb agreement and plural forms.

範例: Yes, I believe washing and sweeping machines are essential for every homemaker because they make household tasks easier and save time. Moreover, these machines are energy-efficient. For instance, washing machines help keep clothes clean without much effort.

建議: Your answer is understandable but needs better sentence structure and clarity. Avoid repetition and use linking words to make your response coherent. Also, try to use more precise vocabulary and correct grammar.

範例: Yes, I always read the instructions before using any gadget because my mother taught me this since childhood. She said that reading instructions saves time and helps prevent accidents.

建議: Your answer is relevant but can be improved by using correct grammar and sentence structure. Use linking words to connect ideas and avoid redundancy. Also, complete your sentences fully for clarity.

範例: Yes, it is important to read instructions because they help prevent accidents and save time. Instructions also guide us on how to use machines properly, allowing us to gain more knowledge about gadgets. Therefore, everyone should read them carefully.

× When I do that work alone it consume my energy a lot and I feel tired.

✓ When I do that work alone it consumes my energy a lot and I feel tired.

The subject 'it' is third person singular, so the verb should be 'consumes' to agree in number. Using 'consume' is incorrect here as it is the base form, not agreeing with the singular subject.

× When I give this task to a sweeping machine it makes it easily and in very comfortable way and I feel it my favorite companion.

✓ When I give this task to a sweeping machine, it does it easily and in a very comfortable way, and I feel it is my favorite companion.

The sentence incorrectly uses 'makes it easily' instead of 'does it easily'. Also, 'in very comfortable way' needs an article 'a' before 'very comfortable way'. The phrase 'I feel it my favorite companion' is missing the verb 'is' to link the subject and complement.

× Well definitely these both machines are very important for every homemaker because the washing machine and sweeping machine makes task easy and it saves time and its energy efficient.

✓ Well definitely these both machines are very important for every homemaker because the washing machine and sweeping machine make tasks easy and save time and are energy efficient.

The subject 'washing machine and sweeping machine' is plural, so the verb should be 'make' not 'makes'. Also, 'makes task easy' should be 'make tasks easy' to agree in number. 'It saves time and its energy efficient' is incorrect; it should be 'save time and are energy efficient' to agree with the plural subject.

× So it is important for every lady or every person who do the household chores.

✓ So it is important for every lady or every person who does the household chores.

The relative clause 'who do the household chores' refers to 'every lady or every person', which is singular, so the verb should be 'does' instead of 'do' to agree with the singular subject.

× She always taught me that to read instructions when, when to use, whenever, to use anything because it saves the time and definitely it saves the disaster.

✓ She always taught me to read instructions about when to use, whenever to use anything because it saves time and definitely prevents disasters.

The sentence is awkward and incorrectly structured. 'That to read instructions when, when to use, whenever, to use anything' is unclear. It should be 'to read instructions about when to use, whenever to use anything'. Also, 'it saves the time' should be 'it saves time' and 'it saves the disaster' should be 'prevents disasters' for correct meaning and grammar.

× Yes, definitely it is important to read instructions because it prevents the disasters or accidents and it saves the times and it guide us how to use that machine and how to use electronic device it.

✓ Yes, definitely it is important to read instructions because it prevents disasters or accidents, saves time, and guides us on how to use that machine and how to use electronic devices.

The sentence has several pronoun and verb agreement errors. 'It saves the times' should be 'saves time' (uncountable). 'It guide us' should be 'it guides us' to agree with singular subject. 'How to use electronic device it' is incorrect; it should be 'how to use electronic devices'. Also, unnecessary repetition of 'it' is removed for clarity.

× Through this we acquire more knowledge about the gadgets so it is important for every individual to.

✓ Through this, we acquire more knowledge about gadgets, so it is important for every individual to do so.

The sentence is incomplete and lacks a proper ending. Adding 'do so' completes the thought. Also, a comma after 'Through this' improves readability. 'About the gadgets' is better as 'about gadgets' for natural phrasing.