机器— Part 1 評分報告

建議: 回答が不自然で意味が伝わりにくいです。理由の説明が曖昧で、文法的な誤りもあります。より明確で具体的な理由を述べ、文を簡潔にまとめる練習をしましょう。

範例: My favorite machine at home is the automatic vending machine because it looks cute like a dog. I often enjoy using it because it makes getting drinks fun and easy.

建議: 内容は理解できますが、文法の誤りや表現の繰り返しがあります。接続詞を使って論理的に話をつなげ、具体的な理由をもう少し詳しく述べると良いでしょう。

範例: I think washing and sweeping machines are very important because they help save time and effort. For example, when my mother started using them in high school, she seemed more relaxed, which improved our family life.

建議: 理由は伝わりますが、文法の誤りや不自然な表現があります。接続詞を使い、より自然で簡潔な表現を心がけましょう。

範例: I usually don't read instructions before using a machine because they are often too difficult to understand. I wish there were video instructions instead, as they would be easier for me to follow.

建議: 回答が不明瞭で、文法的な誤りも多いです。質問に対して直接的に答え、理由を明確に述べる練習をしましょう。

範例: I think it is important to read instructions because they help you use machines safely and correctly. However, sometimes I skip them if I already know how to use the machine.

× My favorite machine in my home is automatic vending machine.

✓ My favorite machine in my home is an automatic vending machine.

The sentence is missing the indefinite article 'an' before 'automatic vending machine'. In English, singular countable nouns require an article or determiner. Here, 'an' is appropriate because 'automatic' starts with a vowel sound.

× It is because it is.

✓ It is because it looks cute like a dog.

The original sentence 'It is because it is.' is incomplete and unclear. It lacks a clear subject and predicate. The correction clarifies the reason by completing the sentence logically.

× It looks cute like dogs and so I usually play with the machine.

✓ It looks cute like a dog, so I usually play with the machine.

The phrase 'like dogs' is incorrect because the machine is singular and should be compared to a singular noun 'a dog'. Also, 'and so' is better replaced with 'so' for smoother connection.

× my mother started to use this machine and she looks very relaxed when she use this machine, so it will contribute to better life.

✓ my mother started to use this machine and she looked very relaxed when she used this machine, so it contributed to a better life.

The verbs 'looks' and 'use' do not agree with the past tense context. They should be 'looked' and 'used' to match the past tense 'started'. Also, 'contribute' should be 'contributed' to maintain past tense consistency. Additionally, 'a better life' requires the article 'a'.

× I don't read the instruction before use machine because these instructions are often too difficult for me.

✓ I don't read the instructions before using the machine because these instructions are often too difficult for me.

'Instruction' should be plural 'instructions' because it refers to multiple steps. 'Before use machine' is incorrect; it should be 'before using the machine' to use the gerund form after 'before'. Also, 'the machine' requires the definite article.

× So I hope that this is written instructions should be like videos or something and it is easier for me.

✓ So I hope that these written instructions could be like videos or something, and that would be easier for me.

'This is written instructions' is incorrect; 'these written instructions' is correct for plural. The sentence structure is awkward; using 'could be' and 'that would be' improves clarity and grammar.

× I don't think so because I don't read these instructions, but I can use many machines, so it not so expensive, not so useful.

✓ I don't think so because I don't read these instructions, but I can use many machines, so it is not so expensive or so useful.

The phrase 'it not so expensive, not so useful' is missing the verb 'is' and the conjunction 'or' to connect the two adjectives properly.