机器— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Your answer is clear but could be more natural and concise. Avoid repeating phrases like "at my home" and try to use linking words to connect your ideas smoothly. Also, try to use more varied vocabulary instead of repeating simple words like "cook" and "delicious food."

範例: My favourite machine at home is the stove because it allows me to prepare a variety of meals. Additionally, it has a spacious oven which is perfect for baking.

建議: Try to avoid filler words like "umm" and "uh" to make your speech more fluent. Also, improve sentence structure and grammar, for example, use plural forms correctly and complete your sentences. Use linking words to connect your ideas logically.

範例: Yes, I think washing machines and sweeping machines are essential because washing machines clean clothes efficiently, while sweeping machines help keep the house tidy. Moreover, both are affordable and easy to use.

建議: Your answer is relevant but could be more concise and natural. Avoid redundancy like "I do follow and read" and unclear phrases like "things get worse." Use linking words to clarify your reasoning.

範例: Yes, I always read the instructions before using a new machine because not following them can cause problems. Therefore, reading instructions helps me use the machine correctly.

建議: Your answer has some repetition and unclear phrases. Try to speak more clearly and avoid repeating words. Also, complete your sentences and use linking words to make your answer coherent.

範例: Yes, it is important to read the instructions because they explain the best way to use the machine safely and effectively. If I have any doubts, the instructions help clarify them.

× washing machines helps your clothes get umm, clean

✓ washing machines help your clothes get umm, clean

The subject 'washing machines' is plural, so the verb should be 'help' instead of 'helps' to agree in number. This is a subject-verb agreement issue involving singular and plural forms.

× sweeping machines, uh, make your house uh, clean all the times

✓ sweeping machines, uh, make your house uh, clean all the time

The phrase 'all the times' is incorrect; the correct expression is 'all the time' to indicate continuous action. This is a pluralization error with the quantifier 'time'.

× both the machines are easy to access and very reasonable for their.

✓ both the machines are easy to access and very reasonable for their price.

The sentence is incomplete and lacks a noun after 'their'. Adding 'price' completes the meaning. This is a singular/plural and sentence structure issue where a noun is missing after a possessive pronoun.

× I do follow and read the instruction before I use any new machine

✓ I do follow and read the instructions before I use any new machine

The word 'instruction' should be plural 'instructions' because it refers to multiple steps or guidelines. This is a singular/plural noun usage error.

× Yes, definitely it is important to read the instruction on the machine

✓ Yes, definitely it is important to read the instructions on the machine

Similar to the previous correction, 'instruction' should be plural 'instructions' as it refers to multiple guidelines. This is a singular/plural noun usage error.

× because it help help us to understand what what would be the better way to perform any function within the standards of machine

✓ because it helps us to understand what would be the better way to perform any function within the standards of the machine

The subject 'it' is singular, so the verb should be 'helps' not 'help'. Also, 'standards of machine' should be 'standards of the machine' to specify the machine. This is a subject-verb agreement and article usage error.