机器— Part 1 評分報告
對話
Part 1
考官
What is your favourite machine in your home?
考生
It is a computer machine because a computer, uh, really brings us to many, many, uh, useful things in our life, particularly in searching some things, uh, important for us, like looking for addresses.
考官
Do you think washing machines and sweeping machines are important?
考生
In my opinion, washing machines are very important because it can easily wash all of our clothes and also it brings easiness to our daily life. We don't have to wash our clothes manually.
考官
Do you read the instructions before using a machine?
考生
Not really, because sometimes it's just, uh, as easy as we look at the machine and MMM, I think I got the sense, uh, to use it and also, uh, sometimes a basic machines like, uh, computer is easy to use.
考官
Do you think it is important to read the instructions?
考生
Not really. However, sometimes we need to read the instructions when it comes to a complex machine because sometimes when we don't read the instruction it can bring us disaster.
評估
總分
Part 1
What is your favourite machine in your home?
分數: 70.0建議: Jawaban Anda sudah cukup baik, tetapi Anda perlu mengurangi pengulangan kata dan menghindari penggunaan kata pengisi seperti 'uh'. Cobalah untuk membuat kalimat yang lebih ringkas dan jelas dengan menggunakan kata penghubung yang tepat agar jawaban terdengar lebih alami dan efektif.
範例: My favourite machine at home is the computer because it helps me find important information quickly, such as addresses and useful resources.
Do you think washing machines and sweeping machines are important?
分數: 80.0建議: Jawaban Anda sudah jelas dan terstruktur dengan baik, namun Anda bisa menambahkan kata penghubung untuk membuat kalimat lebih koheren dan menambah variasi kosakata agar jawaban lebih menarik.
範例: In my opinion, washing machines are very important because they easily wash all our clothes, which saves time and effort, making our daily life much easier.
Do you read the instructions before using a machine?
分數: 60.0建議: Anda perlu mengurangi penggunaan kata pengisi seperti 'uh' dan 'MMM' serta memperbaiki tata bahasa dan struktur kalimat agar jawaban terdengar lebih alami dan efektif. Gunakan kalimat yang lebih singkat dan jelas dengan kata penghubung yang tepat.
範例: Not really, because sometimes machines are easy to use just by looking at them, especially basic ones like computers.
Do you think it is important to read the instructions?
分數: 75.0建議: Jawaban Anda sudah cukup baik, tetapi Anda bisa memperbaiki tata bahasa dan menghindari pengulangan kata 'sometimes'. Gunakan kata penghubung yang tepat untuk membuat jawaban lebih koheren dan alami.
範例: Not really, but I think it's important to read instructions for complex machines because ignoring them can lead to serious problems.
文法
× In my opinion, washing machines are very important because it can easily wash all of our clothes and also it brings easiness to our daily life.
✓ In my opinion, washing machines are very important because they can easily wash all of our clothes and also bring easiness to our daily life.
The subject 'washing machines' is plural, so the pronoun and verb should also be plural. 'It' should be changed to 'they' and 'brings' to 'bring' to agree with the plural subject.
× Not really, because sometimes it's just, uh, as easy as we look at the machine and MMM, I think I got the sense, uh, to use it and also, uh, sometimes a basic machines like, uh, computer is easy to use.
✓ Not really, because sometimes it's just, uh, as easy as we look at the machine and MMM, I think I got the sense, uh, to use it and also, uh, sometimes a basic machine like, uh, computer is easy to use.
The phrase 'a basic machines' is incorrect because 'a' indicates singular, so 'machines' should be singular 'machine' to match the article.
× sometimes when we don't read the instruction it can bring us disaster.
✓ sometimes when we don't read the instructions it can bring us disaster.
The word 'instruction' should be plural 'instructions' because it refers to multiple steps or guidelines, which is the common usage in this context.
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