机器— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Your answer is somewhat unclear and contains grammatical errors. Try to make your sentences more natural and concise. For example, start with a clear topic sentence, then add specific details using linking words. Avoid redundancy and incorrect phrases like 'gave me a play'.

範例: My favourite machine at home is the smart television because I can watch a variety of TV shows and movies on it, which helps me relax after a long day.

建議: Your answer is incomplete and lacks coherence. Make sure to complete your sentences and use linking words to connect ideas logically. Also, be specific about why these machines are important.

範例: Yes, I think both washing machines and sweeping machines are important because washing machines save time when cleaning clothes, and sweeping machines help keep the house clean efficiently.

建議: Your answer is good but incomplete and has grammatical mistakes. Try to complete your sentences and use correct verb forms. Also, use linking words to explain your experience clearly.

範例: Yes, I always read the instructions before using a machine. For example, once I used a microwave without reading the manual and accidentally changed its default settings, which caused some problems.

建議: Your answer is relevant but a bit long and repetitive. Try to make your sentences concise and use linking words properly. Also, correct grammar mistakes like 'lead' should be 'led'.

範例: Yes, it is important to read instructions. For instance, when we bought a new microwave, I didn't read the manual and pressed wrong buttons, which changed the settings and resulted in uncooked food.

× My favorite machine in the home is television as a it's a smart TV which I can use to watch various TV shows and movies which gave me a play.

✓ My favorite machine in the home is the television as it's a smart TV which I can use to watch various TV shows and movies which give me a play.

The verb 'gave' is incorrectly used in past tense here; it should be in present tense 'give' to match the present context. Also, 'television' needs the definite article 'the' before it.

× washing machine make these things very comfortable and easy.

✓ washing machines make these things very comfortable and easy.

The subject 'washing machine' is singular but the verb 'make' is plural. Since the context refers to multiple machines, 'washing machines' should be plural to agree with the plural verb 'make'.

× And on the other hand, sweeping my.

✓ And on the other hand, sweeping is important too.

The sentence is incomplete and lacks a verb and object. It should be completed to convey the intended meaning clearly.

× I read instruction before using a machine because once I operated a microwave without reading the instruction and I accidentally pressed the wrong button which adjusted the default setting of the oven which.

✓ I read instructions before using a machine because once I operated a microwave without reading the instructions and I accidentally pressed the wrong button which adjusted the default setting of the oven.

The word 'instruction' should be plural 'instructions' as it refers to multiple steps or guidelines. Also, the last 'which' is unnecessary and makes the sentence incomplete.

× Yes, it is important to read the instruction As for example when we purchased a new microwave, I didn't read the instruction manual and I accidentally pressed some wrong buttons which adjusted the default setting of that microwave which lead to uncooked food.

✓ Yes, it is important to read the instructions. For example, when we purchased a new microwave, I didn't read the instruction manual and I accidentally pressed some wrong buttons which adjusted the default setting of that microwave which led to uncooked food.

'Instruction' should be plural 'instructions' when referring to the manual. Also, 'lead' should be in past tense 'led' to match the past context. The sentence was also split for clarity.