机器— Part 1 評分報告

建議: 回答中语法错误较多，表达不够自然。建议注意时态和句子结构，避免重复和语法错误。

範例: My favourite machine at home is definitely the air conditioner. During the hot summer months, it helps me stay cool and comfortable, so I can't live without it.

建議: 回答中有语法错误和口语填充词，表达不够连贯。建议减少口语填充词，使用连接词使句子更流畅。

範例: I think washing machines are very important because they help me clean my clothes every day, especially in summer. However, I don't use sweeping machines often.

建議: 回答较为自然，但有时态错误和单复数错误。建议注意时态一致和名词单复数形式。

範例: To be honest, I usually don't read the instructions, especially for common machines like coffee makers or washing machines because their buttons are clear and easy to use.

建議: 回答中有发音错误和语法错误，表达不够清晰。建议练习发音，注意句子结构和词汇拼写。

範例: Yes, I think it's important to read the instructions, especially for complicated or new machines that I have never used before. Reading the instructions helps me use them correctly.

× Definitely is the air conditioner.

✓ Definitely, it is the air conditioner.

句子缺少主语，导致主谓不一致。应加上主语“it”使句子完整。

× Especially in the summer the weather is got getting hotter and hotter so I can't live without an air conditioner.

✓ Especially in the summer, the weather is getting hotter and hotter, so I can't live without an air conditioner.

“is got getting”结构错误，应使用现在进行时“is getting”表示天气变热的过程。

× Well, I do think washing machine is really important, but I don't use sweeping machine, uh, especially upon, uh, in the summer, the washing machine can help me clean all my clothes and uh, it's a, like a daily job.

✓ Well, I do think washing machines are really important, but I don't use sweeping machines. Especially in the summer, the washing machine can help me clean all my clothes, and it's like a daily job.

“washing machine”和“sweeping machine”应使用复数形式，因为指的是一般的机器种类。

× especially upon, uh, in the summer, the washing machine can help me clean all my clothes

✓ especially in the summer, the washing machine can help me clean all my clothes

“upon”用法不当，应使用“in the summer”表示时间。

× To be honest, no, I had never read the instruction.

✓ To be honest, no, I have never read the instructions.

此处应使用现在完成时“have never read”表示至今未读过说明书，且“instruction”应为复数形式“instructions”。

× I had never read the instruction.

✓ I have never read the instructions.

“instruction”应为复数形式“instructions”，因为通常说明书是复数。

× The button on them is clear and is easy to operate.

✓ The buttons on them are clear and easy to operate.

“button”应为复数“buttons”，且谓语动词应与复数主语一致。

× the machine looks like COM complicated or just a new one that I never used before.

✓ the machine looks complicated or is just a new one that I have never used before.

“looks like COM complicated”结构错误，应为“looks complicated”，且“never used”应使用现在完成时“have never used”。

× I definitely used instra instructions and I think it can help me use it better.

✓ I definitely use instructions and I think it can help me use it better.

此处应使用一般现在时“use”，表示习惯性动作，而非过去时。