机器— Part 1 評分報告

建議: 你的回答有些语法错误和表达不自然，建议简化句子结构，避免重复，并且增加细节描述。比如可以直接说出最喜欢的机器是什么，并说明原因。

範例: My favourite machine at home is the television because I use it frequently to watch old movies. The new TV is much bigger and has better picture quality, which makes watching more enjoyable.

建議: 回答中表达不清晰且有重复，建议直接回答问题并给出具体原因，同时注意语法和连贯性。

範例: I don't think washing and sweeping machines are very important for me because I prefer to do housework myself. Therefore, I don't rely on these machines much.

建議: 回答中有语法错误和不连贯的表达，建议简洁明了地说明自己会阅读说明书，并解释原因。

範例: Yes, I always read the instructions before using a machine because they help me understand how to operate it safely and correctly.

建議: 回答表达基本清楚，但有重复和语法问题，建议简化句子并使用连接词使表达更流畅。

範例: Yes, I believe reading instructions is crucial because they help me operate machines properly and ensure my safety.

× My favorite machine in my home, maybe I think is too this television.

✓ My favorite machine in my home, I think, is this television.

句子中“maybe I think is too this television”语序混乱，导致表达不清。应调整为“My favorite machine in my home, I think, is this television.”，使句子结构清晰，符合英语表达习惯。

× It's more convenient for me to have some serious old movies.

✓ It's more convenient for me to watch some serious old movies.

动词“have”在此处用法不当，应使用“watch”表示“观看电影”，使表达准确。

× This is important because in my home, the washing machines and sweeping machines are not contained.

✓ This is not important because in my home, the washing machines and sweeping machines are not available.

句中“are not contained”用词错误，应使用“are not available”表示“没有”，使句意明确。

× So I don't think it is it is crucial for me.

✓ So I don't think it is crucial for me.

句中“it is it is”重复，应删除多余部分，保持句子简洁。

× Yes, I always read the instruction before using my machine because I think the instruction could help me.

✓ Yes, I always read the instructions before using my machine because I think the instructions could help me.

“instruction”应使用复数形式“instructions”，因为通常说明书包含多条指示。

× No more. No more details about the machine and I think it is convenient for me to use it.

✓ There are many details about the machine and I think it is convenient for me to use it.

“No more”用法不当，表达不清，应改为肯定句“there are many details”，使句意明确。

× I think the instructions could help me to help me understand how to operate it properly and about our safety.

✓ I think the instructions could help me understand how to operate it properly and about our safety.

“help me to help me understand”重复，应删除多余部分，保持句子简洁。