机器— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Your answer is unclear and lacks coherence. Try to directly state your favourite machine and explain why, using simple and clear sentences. Avoid redundancy and ensure your answer is relevant to the question.

範例: My favourite machine at home is the air conditioner. In Pakistan, the weather is very hot, so the air conditioner helps keep everyone cool throughout the day.

建議: Your answer is confusing and does not directly address the question. Focus on giving a clear opinion about the importance of washing and sweeping machines, and support it with relevant reasons.

範例: Yes, washing machines and sweeping machines are very important. They save time and effort, making household chores easier and more efficient.

建議: Your answer has some good points but is unclear and contains grammatical errors. Try to clearly state when and why you read instructions, using simple sentences and correct grammar.

範例: I usually read the instructions when I buy a new machine. It helps me understand how to use it properly. But if I have used the machine before, I do not need to read the instructions again.

建議: Your answer shows agreement but is unclear and lacks structure. Try to clearly explain why reading instructions is important, using linking words and correct grammar.

範例: Yes, it is important to read the instructions when you buy a new machine. This helps you understand how to operate it safely and correctly. However, if you already know how to use the machine, reading instructions may not be necessary.

× My favorite is You Need My Home is basically because in Pakistan they were very largely summary.

✓ My favorite machine at home is basically because in Pakistan, they are very common.

The original sentence has unclear structure and incorrect word usage. 'You Need My Home' seems incorrect and 'very largely summary' is not meaningful. The sentence should clearly state the favorite machine and why, using proper sentence structure and vocabulary.

× So then it's a very hot day.

✓ So, on very hot days,

The sentence is incomplete and does not connect well with the previous or following sentences. It should be rephrased to indicate the condition clearly.

× I can see everyone that's cooling.

✓ I can see everyone cooling down.

The phrase 'everyone that's cooling' is awkward. 'Everyone cooling down' is a better expression to describe people trying to stay cool.

× So the whole day comma cold in pharmacy.

✓ So the whole day, it stays cool inside the house.

The original sentence is unclear and contains a misplaced comma and the word 'pharmacy' which seems out of context. It should be corrected to express that the house stays cool all day.

× Definitely the CO2 if you talk about someone to your support.

✓ Definitely, the washing machine is helpful if you talk about support at home.

The original sentence is confusing and contains irrelevant terms like 'CO2'. It should clearly state the importance of the washing machine in supporting household chores.

× If I was to go back to Washington, the growth with our hands.

✓ If I had to wash clothes by hand, it would be difficult.

The sentence is unclear and uses incorrect phrases. It should express the difficulty of washing clothes manually.

× So now if the Moodle are animals within the shades far as Washington could also be very beneficial for an algorithm.

✓ So now, using a washing machine is very beneficial for saving time and effort.

The original sentence is nonsensical and contains unrelated words. It should be corrected to convey the benefit of using a washing machine.

× You are most of the time and skyfirts the kind of insurance if I would buy my new shoes, so I'd definitely want to read some of the important information.

✓ Most of the time, I read the instructions first, like when I buy new shoes; I definitely want to read important information.

The sentence is confusing and contains unrelated words like 'skyfirts'. It should be rephrased to clearly express the habit of reading instructions.

× So if the you already use the show, so this will no longer needed to be read by instruction.

✓ So if you already use the machine, then you no longer need to read the instructions.

The sentence has grammatical errors and unclear wording. It should be corrected for clarity and proper grammar.

× Yeah, definitely. I call it that you're telling the following, if you're buying a machine, it's definitely made to know how to use the machine for everything, how to switch by his level.

✓ Yeah, definitely. I mean, when you buy a machine, it's important to know how to use it properly, like how to switch it on and adjust the settings.

The original sentence is unclear and contains awkward phrases. It should be rephrased to clearly express the importance of understanding machine usage.

× So if you already using that machine, so it's not related to remote.

✓ So if you are already using that machine, then reading the instructions is not necessary.

The sentence is grammatically incorrect and unclear. It should be corrected to express that instructions may not be needed if the machine is already familiar.