机器— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Your answer is understandable but needs improvement in grammar and clarity. Use correct verb forms and avoid unclear phrases like 'you can read an expression'. Also, try to make your answer more natural and concise by focusing on the main point and adding a linking phrase.

範例: My favourite machine at home is the air conditioner because the weather in Pakistan is very hot. Therefore, we use the AC to cool the room and feel comfortable.

建議: Your answer is too short and unclear. Try to give a clear topic sentence and support it with specific reasons. Also, avoid grammatical mistakes and use linking words to connect your ideas.

範例: Yes, I think washing machines and sweeping machines are very important because they save a lot of time and effort. Without these machines, household chores would take much longer to complete.

建議: Your answer is confusing and has many grammatical errors. Try to organize your ideas clearly with correct sentence structures. Use linking words to explain why reading instructions is important, and avoid unclear phrases like 'calls will notify' and 'start and film'.

範例: Yes, I usually read the instructions before using a machine, especially if it is new. This helps me understand how to operate it safely and avoid any problems.

建議: Your answer is short and has grammatical mistakes. Try to give a clear topic sentence and support it with specific details. Use linking words to make your answer more coherent and natural.

範例: Yes, I think it is important to read the instructions because they explain how to start the machine and provide important safety information.

× It provide us cooling and you can read an expression.

✓ It provides us cooling and you can read an expression.

The verb 'provide' should be in the third person singular form 'provides' to agree with the singular subject 'It'. This is a subject-verb agreement issue involving the present tense verb form.

× Look over, it's a lot of times and effort without machine, we'll take a very long time for anyone.

✓ Look, it takes a lot of time and effort without a machine; it would take a very long time for anyone.

The phrase 'Look over' is incorrect; 'Look' alone is appropriate here. 'Times' should be singular 'time' when used with 'a lot of'. 'Without machine' needs an article 'a machine'. Also, the sentence structure is unclear and needs correction for clarity and grammar.

× If you buy some new machine. So we'll it's very important to read some instructions, calls will notify, we don't know how to start and film.

✓ If you buy a new machine, it is very important to read the instructions; they will notify you if you don't know how to start and use it.

The sentence has pronoun errors: 'we'll it's' is incorrect; 'it is' fits better. 'Some new machine' should be 'a new machine'. 'Calls will notify' is unclear; 'instructions will notify you' is better. Also, 'film' is likely a misused word here, replaced with 'use it' for clarity.

× So instructions give you safety and available.

✓ So instructions provide safety and are available.

The sentence lacks proper verb forms and pronouns. 'Give you safety and available' is incorrect; it should be 'provide safety and are available' to be grammatically correct and clear.

× If you read the instruction, we will know about how to start and soon in the instruction tell us about the safety and some other thing.

✓ If you read the instructions, you will know how to start, and the instructions tell us about safety and other things.

'Instruction' should be plural 'instructions'. 'We will know' should be 'you will know' to match the subject. 'Soon in the instruction tell us' is incorrect; corrected to 'the instructions tell us'. 'Some other thing' should be 'other things' for plural consistency.